New MJHT Poem on current track(pg15) - Page 3

Originally posted by: MarialikesMohit

Heyyyy Falakkk🤗,so you are back again with your rocking poems,congratz on finishing your first poem's thread,that shows koi bohut famous horaha hai😉.Omg mind blowing poem sweety,each word and every line is just superb and so true👏👏👏,sach main you have God-gifted talent.Keep it up and do write more and more and more👍🏼.Missing you shooo much,love you loads and loads😳😳.

When i read your latest poem and not just that, i helped myself to the old ones as well i had tears of joy and happiness, why i have mentioned that below man.

Originally posted by: Senny

When i read your latest poem and not just that, i helped myself to the old ones as well i had tears of joy and happiness, why i have mentioned that below man.

Falak you are writing after a really long time man, i missed you and your poems so muich, don't make me miss them so bad next time falak.

Now coming to the point hehe first of all, congratulations on your wonderful thread, its truly amazing.

Coming to the above point man, i am sad because your poems remind me of sana and the way she wrote and you write always carried a special essence and influence, i don't know but both of you have always had an impact on me.

Ironically i am happy for the same reason that your poem reminds of sana because i feel as if she is still here with us and has a special disciple whom she has left behind, that is none other than you. I am sooo happy to have you. The poem was as usual amazing, heartfelt and sooooo much more than mere words, it emanated deep feelings and genuine emotions and love.

Awesome work, God bless you falak, keep it up!!!

Originally posted by: MarialikesMohit

Hayye meri nadan bacchi,tum famous horahi ho aur kaun,kya samjhi thi.............😆????

awesome poem falak !!!!!!!!🤗🤗

loved it !!!!!!!!! thanks for pm !

luv ya

Hawaaon mein ab bhi uski goonj hai..
Fizaaon mein ab bhi uski khushboo hai..
Chhayi hai aisi deewangi mujh par..
Ki ab bhi uske khayalon me mere hosh gum hain..

Pehle hum dil ki baat labo tak laa nahi paate the..
Aur unke dil ko yoon hi behlaate reh jaate the...
Magar pyaar ke wo 3 shabd keh kar unse..
Hum to unke aur bhi kareeb aa gaye hain..
In 3 shabdo ne aisa jaadoo kiya hai hum par..
Ki hum bas inhe dohraate hi jaa rahe hain..

Har pal ,har lamhe ko jee lene ko dil karta hai..
Uske pyaar me bas kho jaane ko dil karta hai..
Har dhadkan ke saath badh raha hai jo pyaar..
Uss pyaar ko qayamat tak nibhaane ka ye dil waada karta hai..

Kahin kho na doon main uska saath..
Ye dil to aise khayal se bhi darta hai..
Ban jaaye wo mera umar bhar ke liye..
Har pal iss dua mein ye haath uthta hai...

Kabhi roothna ,kabhi manana..
Kabhi paas aana to kabhi door jaana..
Yahi to pyaar jataane ke andaaz hain..

Jise mehsoos karti hoon main apni har dhadkan mein..
Jo bas chuka hai mere tan-mann mein..
Wohi to iss Simran ka RAJ hai!!!!