New MJHT Poem on current track(pg15) - Page 18

Originally posted by: falak01

hi paras...thanx a lot for ur comments dear and i m glad u read it for the first time n liked it soo much..i m on top of the world....😳😳

lol "john keat"😆,yeah i also had one or two poems of him in our syllabus...😆😆

i have added u to the pm list dear..😃

Originally posted by: falak01

hello guyz....so here is my new poem...well this time its about the feelings of all the four characters(MAYANK,NUPUR,GUNJAN & SAMRAT),what they r feelinmg now(i.e. the current track).

i have tried to give equal importance to each character...so read and enjoy!!!!!😃

JAANE KYA HOGA....

Chaahat mein kitne hi deewane bane..
Iss mohabbat mein na jaane kitne khud se anjaane bane..
Kisi ne khol diye raaz dil ke,to koi ab bhi chup hai..
The kabhi jo itne kareeb,aaj unme bhi faasle bane..

SAMRAT : Ek taraf wo pyaar mein dosti ko dhoondta hai..
Wo ek baar phir haalat se majboor hota hai..
Apne dil ki aawaaz ko ansuni kar..
Wo phir se dosti ki raahon ko chunta hai..

GUNJAN :Yahan wo phir se kashmkash mein ghiri hai..
Ek baar phir pyaar aur dosti mein se kisi ek ko chun rahi hai..
Hai wo bekhabar uske pyaar se..
Aur khud ko ashkon mein dubo rahi hai..

MAYANK : Udhar koi hai jo pyaar hote huye bhi kisi ko dard de raha hai..
Jise har pal hasaane ka wada kiya tha,use phir aansoo de raha hai..
Ek aur galatfehmi le aayi hai toofan iss rishtey mein..
Wo phir se apne pyaar ko galat samajh raha hai...

NUPUR : Idhar wo tanha khud se pooch rahi hai..
Kyun zindagi aise imtihaan le rahi hai..
Chaaha tha jise toot kar usne hi ilzaam de diya hai..
Aakhir kyun ye mohabbat mujhe itna dard de rahi hai..

Pyaar se bhaag kar wo dono kahin door ja rahi hain..
Apne dil ko yoon hi behlaa rahi hain..
Bina maajhi ke unki zindagi ki naav...
Unhe ek naye saahil ki ore le jaa rahi hai...

Apne pyaar ko rokne ki hasrat mein...
Wo dono bhi ab un pariyon ke des jaa rahe hain...
Jahan milegi unki mohabbat unse ek baar phir..
Aaj wo un raahon ko apna rahe hain..

Uljhan hai dilon mein itni...
Saagar mein lehrein hain jitni..
Koi dil se haarna nahi chahta..
Koi dil ki baat manna nahi chahta..
Na jaane inki kahaani kya mod legi.
Haar jayega pyaar ek baar phir...
Ya uss paak mohabbat ki jeet hogi!!!!

Hope u liked it...

don't forget to press "like" button..😃😃

these were the best lines of ur poem .......according 2 me !😃

thnx n regs,

lovelyyy oneee!!!! 👏 awesum yaar!! kaha se sochte ho inna!! 😆

anku........finally i read ur poem............waah......meri shayarni......tumhe toh mjht ke song lyricist hona chahiye tha........by god ki kasam dear......😉.........it ws truly truly outstanfdin...wonderful..beautiful to d core...👏

Hey falak..nice poem..

Superb Poem Ankhu...I loved it!!!

wow.............love it....u r the best....
keep writing...

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

HEYY falak gr8 poem .......

don't forget to scroll down n see my comment !!!!😉

Uljhan hai dilon mein itni...
Saagar mein lehrein hain jitni..
Koi dil se haarna nahi chahta..
Koi dil ki baat manna nahi chahta..

these were the best lines of ur poem .......according 2 me !😃

congrats .......cheers too ......u can become a gr8 poet one day .....

thnx n regs,

neeraja

hi neeraja dear..🤗🤗 yeah those lines came straight from my heart....😳😳😳

Originally posted by: viniva sharma

lovelyyy oneee!!!! 👏 awesum yaar!! kaha se sochte ho inna!! 😆

vini

hi vini dear😃