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Posted: 15 years ago
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JAANE KYA HOGA....

Chaahat mein kitne hi deewane bane..
Iss mohabbat mein na jaane kitne khud se anjaane bane..
Kisi ne khol diye raaz dil ke,to koi ab bhi chup hai..
The kabhi jo itne kareeb,aaj unme bhi faasle bane..
OMG!!! falaku...hw??hw ?? hw u write so well..jaan..am so gld..i came onIF..nahi toh tumse and tumhare unmatched talent se nahi mil pati😳

Ek taraf wo pyaar mein dosti ko dhoondta hai..
Wo ek baar phir haalat se majboor hota hai..
Apne dil ki aawaaz ko ansuni kar..
Wo phir se dosti ki raahon ko chunta hai..
uffff wowwwwww..i could visualise sammy!!too gud


Yahan wo phir se kashmkash mein ghiri hai..
Ek baar phir pyaar aur dosti mein se kisi ek ko chun rahi hai..
Hai wo bekhabar uske pyaar se..
Aur khud ko ashkon mein dubo rahi hai..
awwwww ths is gunji....so true!!! poor sweety!!😭
Udhar koi hai jo pyaar hote huye bhi kisi ko dard de raha hai..
Jise har pal hasaane ka wada kiya tha,use phir aansoo de raha hai..
Ek aur galatfehmi le aayi hai toofan iss rishtey mein..
Wo phir se apne pyaar ko galat samajh raha hai...
@black line...standing ovation..bahut kuch keh diya tune..ek line main!!
Idhar wo tanha khud se pooch rahi hai..
Kyun zindagi aise imtihaan le rahi hai..
Chaaha tha jise toot kar usne hi ilzaam de diya hai..
Aakhir kyun ye mohabbat mujhe itna dard de rahi hai..
nups nups!! ths is nups...awwwww sachi main...*sob sob*😭
Pyaar se bhaag kar wo dono kahin door ja rahi hain..
Apne dil ko yoon hi behlaa rahi hain..
Bina maajhi ke unki zindagi ki naav...
Unhe ek naye saahil ki ore le jaa rahi hai...

Apne pyaar ko rokne ki hasrat mein...
Wo dono bhi ab un pariyon ke des jaa rahe hain...
Jahan milegi unki mohabbat unse ek baar phir..
Aaj wo un raahon ko apna rahe hain..
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
pariyon ke des..uff falaku mar dala yaar!!
Uljhan hai dilon mein itni...
Saagar mein lehrein hain jitni..
Koi dil se haarna nahi chahta..
Koi dil ki baat manna nahi chahta..
Na jaane inki kahaani kya mod legi.
Haar jayega pyaar ek baar phir...
Ya uss paak mohabbat ki jeet hogi!!!!
oye unki jeet ho na ho..tu toh jeet gayi..uff falaku....am speechless...its awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmm
too gud jaan!! keep it up!!!
luv ya lods
Nihu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: get_jasneet

hey falak m jasneet... i don kno u wel n hav not read ne of ur previous poems but dis 1 was jus awesum... i've always been luvin mjht but nevr found sum1 writing a poem on mjht....... u r jus mindblowin!!! waitin for ur next poem.........eagerly..........

hi jasneet..first of all welcome to MJHT forum...😃
and yes i m writing poems on MJHT since april....😳
i just love it...
thanx a lot dear...i m glad u have read it for the first time and liked it...😃
will surely pm u next time...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
falak your poems are so touching for me...... wonderful ddear.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preethis

falak your poems are so touching for me...... wonderful ddear.....

thanx preeti....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesumm poem yaar!!
i suck at hindi poems sooo much!
lol.. newyzz tc
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Yuvvraj-

awesumm poem yaar!!

i suck at hindi poems sooo much!
lol.. newyzz tc

thanx yuvi....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
solliidd poemmm haii ree!!
kyyaa likhtiii haii,,, full tooo boosss!!
sorrryyy re... mainn if pe zyadaa aatii naii hoooonn!!
mindd it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: xxXAanchaLXxx

solliidd poemmm haii ree!!

kyyaa likhtiii haii,,, full tooo boosss!!
sorrryyy re... mainn if pe zyadaa aatii naii hoooonn!!
mindd it!!

thanx a ton aanchal..i know yaarrr tu bhatakte huye tapak jaati hai...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome falak
from me!

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