mayur ff_--dekhnay bus unhain Part4 pg 32 - Page 4

Originally posted by: mohseena

soo wat part was ur fav??

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

the nupur gettin concerned at mayus place...

😳

toooo cute!

me toooo!!! shinella dint comment on any of the ff:( still waitin for her!!
and ya u have to criticize as well k!!!.....

Originally posted by: mohseena

me toooo!!! shinella dint comment on any of the ff:( still waitin for her!!
and ya u have to criticize as well k!!!.....

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Originally posted by: nikki028

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aw thanku !!! waisay wat waz ur fav part??

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

chaloo okaayy ill crticize shinella....😆

woh ladki comment hi nahi karti...

n wo mere haathon bahut bade problem mein fasne waali hai...😡

im wid u .lets gang up against her.....she shud better have a good reason!!! for ignore marafying us!!

heyy annaa... awesuummmm ff yaar... mast likhti hai tu... another new ff writer hus cmpltly blown off the top... cool yaar....

Its great that you're continuing that one-shot!!

The first part was too good...it really set up their relationship nicely!! I was a bit shocked that mayank had an accident!! and that too after 2 paragraphs! LOL...ohhh I loved reading it so much....the way Nupur got so concerned...and worried.

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Its great that you're continuing that one-shot!!

The first part was too good...it really set up their relationship nicely!! I was a bit shocked that mayank had an accident!! and that too after 2 paragraphs! LOL...ohhh I loved reading it so much....the way Nupur got so concerned...and worried.

ok let me start from the beginning....when the two of them after their rain semi-date are thinking about each other...it was really cute!!

Then his accident....LOL...the funniest was when he thought about his mom and hyper girlfriend! Dono itni tension karengi...awwww....

Then Nupur came to his home...even though she was burning with fever....hayyyee....!!

And the whole scene when she's writing him notes and he's off to sleep because of painkillers...she dozes off next to him..I could just picture it all in my head!!

Then when he wakes up...i loved the romantic moments they shared!!

It was ufffff...by god, just imagining it made me blush...!!

The scene after when he gives her medicine and says sorry....ohhhhh...it was awesome!! she was crying...and he couldn't bear that...

I loved the emotional bonding they had....so caring of each other...and the romance in between...I thought that you;d make his mom interrupt them but thank god that didn't happen...!! hehe...

GREAT part!! Update soon!!

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hey anna this is just fantastic, i had tears in my eyes as well, i was like no this is not happening to mayank but then i remembered nupur is there to take care of him and help him. thanks for the pm ,so sorry for the late reply, it was just sheer magic and very very well written, i was totally engrossed and just wanted to continue reading.