mayur ff_--dekhnay bus unhain Part4 pg 32

Afshan

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Posted: 16 years ago

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YA I FORGET TO SAY SOME CREDITS GO TO ME ALSO FOR ERSUADING U TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS KEEP IT UP😊😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: preethis
hey nice one.. when you update the next part please PM me...

thank u soooooooooo much!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: mamaian
YA I FORGET TO SAY SOME CREDITS GO TO ME ALSO FOR ERSUADING U TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS KEEP IT UP😊😊

darling freee ho rahee hoooo!!!!!!!! waisay ya thanks to u toooo!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: mohseena

thank u sooooooooooo much!!!!! i luv u...or yaar tu itne juldee online bhi aagaee lolz!!!.stay tune i might update it tonight!!!.thank u so much for the encouragement!! srsly luv u!!

AWWWWWWW NO NEED TO THANK ME ITS IN U SO U DID IT WELL MUBARAK HO ITNI JAIDI DOSRI UPDATE BHI KARDEIN GI ........................GOOG GOING😛

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: mamaian

AWWWWWWW NO NEED TO THANK ME ITS IN U SO U DID IT WELL MUBARAK HO ITNI JAIDI DOSRI UPDATE BHI KARDEIN GI ........................GOOG GOING😛

uff uff im flattered!!!.thanks for the ahem ahem ahem help honey :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Wowwwwwwwwwww 👏

this was so sweet Mohseena.... MasHALLAH ....gr8 ...loved that scene to core that on one side he was about to be hit by a car and on other side nups prayed for him .... beautiful .....give that part to pd .... INSHALLAH on ur behalf if u say i will post it to pd tom ....... what say ???

@ loved it how nups was least bother with her fever and how concerned she was with mayu's health ... and in the same manner Mayu was least bother with his health and totally shocked on finding nups with high fever ...

@ loved that Main hoon na dialogue .... Kiya baat hai 😆

over all a very sweet chapter ....👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
@ reserved.......sorry yaar i will get back to it ..... sab ke ff baki hain sab mujh ko katal kar dain gay 😆😆😆

lazy horayee hoon ... confession scene youtube mai dekhee jarayee hoon😆😆 ...even if i comment late i will comment ... ok ..so dont mind 😉

sur sure yaar laykin plz do go thru my ff and the on shot to!!!!...ur comment means a lot to me!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..amazing!!!!.......standing ovation fr u.......absolutely loved d prt!!!.....cont soon ....tnx fr d pm
luv
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Originally posted by: ananya_s
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..amazing!!!!.......standing ovation fr u.......absolutely loved d prt!!!.....cont soon ....tnx fr d pm
luv
ananya

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THANKS !!! UFFFFFFF THNAK U SO MUCH IM SOOO EXCITED NOW!!!!!! LIKE MY FIRST FICTION WORK!!! is getting so many good comments!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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mohseena.... i edited my post on pg 2..... do read yaar ...gr8 work .....👏

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