mayur ff_--dekhnay bus unhain Part4 pg 32 - Page 26

hey...!!
wow.. such a cute part...!!!
lued dere nik jhokz n romance..!!
now cant wait for next part...!!
n once again thanx for da PM

its very nicely edited yaar. loved Mayank. finally u updated. thanx for it n the pm. this part was really awwesum. n plzzzz do continue soooooooooon. really for the next part. plzzz update soon. n pm me.

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

its very nicely edited yaar. loved Mayank. finally u updated. thanx for it n the pm. this part was really awwesum. n plzzzz do continue soooooooooon. really for the next part. plzzz update soon. n pm me.

thank u :)

Originally posted by: robinblue91

hey...!!
wow.. such a cute part...!!!
lued dere nik jhokz n romance..!!
now cant wait for next part...!!
n once again thanx for da PM

thank u sooo much!!!

Originally posted by: Priyanka K

I LOVED IT ANNA!!!!!😃


CAN"T WAIT TILL THE NEXT PART IS PUBLISHED! YOU SHOULD BE A WRITER! 😉


I FOUND ONE LINE EXTREMELY FUNNY! 😃 FORGOT WHICH ONE !😛


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thank u swetty!!

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Anna...aww...the two of them were so cute!!

Mayank bhi na...teases her deliberatly!! LOL....and Sindhya did a cameo in this part!! whooo....nupur got jealous!!

BUT the best dialoguue was "Meri Simran"....LOL....that was hilarious!!

Mayank poora Raj bana hua tha!!

and then she fell asleep with him...awww....aborable scene!!

Mayu's mom conversation was great!!

Now i can't wait to see sheena/nupur fight! yay...go Nupur!!

thank u shooooooooo much!!!!!!

Originally posted by: shinella

omggggggggggggggg

aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesommeeeeeeeeeeeeee anna

tum ne to kamaaaaaaaaaal kardiya

it was choooooooo chweet

the kiss ahem ahem

the mayu mom nupur scene

fab girl

and cindy lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wat did she say abt it

it was sooo cute

and omg i m the new entry

remember i m the cupid not the stupid

sindhya still did not comment :(
well ya i know ur the cupid not the STUPID lolz!!
thank u shooooo much for the lovely comments!!

Originally posted by: Kanky

Loved it . . . 🤗

thank u shooooooooo much!!!

when r u gonna update next part? i ll be waiting.

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

wowwwwwwww...i swear they are gettin cuter and cuter....continue sooonnn...im loving this!!

thank u !!!😃