mayur ff_--dekhnay bus unhain Part4 pg 32 - Page 19

hey ana oh my what an amazinggggggggggg update man, i truly loved each and every part i love the fact that you didn't elongate the fight unnecessarily and was sooooooooo perfect in portraying mayank and nupur's feelings. oh my the way he went and cheered her up was the most sweetest thing ever man. i loved all the parts from nupur sleeping on mayank to the rickshaw guy to mayank's mum and back to mayur.

aww adorable part as always :D
hahahh so cute :)
please continue soon :)

Originally posted by: krishmjht

Hey Yaar it was AWESOME.....STUPENDOUS....ROMANTIC AND PASSIONATE⭐️....Loved it completely!!.😳...Plz do write soon, the next part!!😛....And yaar plz let Mayur remain as emotional+romantic+passionate as u have kept them till now!!😊.....Romance really suits on Mayur!!😉😍☺️.....I m eagerly waiting to read more on Mayur's life by U!!😛
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awwwwwww thank u shooooooooo much!!!!

Originally posted by: Senny

hey ana oh my what an amazinggggggggggg update man, i truly loved each and every part i love the fact that you didn't elongate the fight unnecessarily and was sooooooooo perfect in portraying mayank and nupur's feelings. oh my the way he went and cheered her up was the most sweetest thing ever man. i loved all the parts from nupur sleeping on mayank to the rickshaw guy to mayank's mum and back to mayur.

i read each line with the same zeal and passion. keep it up man thanks alot for the pm man.

awwwwww senny ur comments are always soooooooooooo wonderful!!!>just makes my day
thank u shoooooooooooo much!!!

aww adorable part as always :D
hahahh so cute :)
please continue soon :)[/QUOTEthank u so much!!!

I like how Mrs. Mehta conviently went to the hospital so that Mayank-Nupur could spend some time together alone. lol. good job!

very nice part anna................loved it !!! thanks for the PM........
Love MAyur................n specialy the restroom part.........so so cuteeeee
love
vaishnavi

heyyyy anna.... finallyy rreaadd it... m sooo l8... u see cudnt control maself... sooo read ur part....now ive falaks poem.. ruchis ff... aanchals ff n anukritas ff....

awwwwwwwwwwwwww...this was the best update

hmmm anna soo sorry yaar for being a late lateef ane ways The best part is that your updates are so long...its really so much enjoyable to read!! And i love the romance you add... uff kills me yaar love yu loads ya mayu acts like an Idiot sometimes and he is akdoo sadu and irrtating most of da times but woh kaisa bhi ho he does really love ur Nupsi darling loads.... he really does have anger impulses sometimes ya Kinda possessive Must say....... hmmm story is progressing well....