FF: Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Ha(mayur) part 7 page17 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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please continue soon................pm me😳



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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice fan fic yaar 👏 👏 👏.... cant wait 2 c mayur's 1st meeting.....plzz continue soon n plzz pm me 4 ur update...... @ mayur4ever- i think kismat konnection will b nice title......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh wow...I really liked the first part!! I'm looking forward to reading more...it looks really interesting!
Do PM me if possible when you update...
As for the suggestions for title...I think."Do Anjaane" suits it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plzz continue.....m eagerly waiting....😊
its very nice....!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey very nice and interesting ff....plz do continue soon.....and if u can then plz pm me when u update it....n yes kismat konection will be a suitable title..........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i LOVE ur ff.....u rite sooooo well.....plz pm me nd do continue...
luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi i really love your ff u can name it yeh rishta kya kehlata hai because it is same like it arrange marriage
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjht_fan

hey i'm jassica

i'm kind of a silent viewer on this forum so i dont think many of u noe me

i really like reading ffs so i felt like starting one of my own. Hope u guys like it.

so here it is:

nupur bhushan:

a 25 year sweet loving and bubbly girl who loves 2 talk. She is really beutiful and can get any1 to love her as she is so pretty. she has a sister(gunjan), protective brother(uday) and 2 loving parents who love nupur dearly and have allowed her 2 do what she wants to in her life. but the only problem is that she has 2 get married 2 a suitable boy chosen by her parents. she believes in love marraige but since her parents have given her so much she has 2 marry who her parents choose 4 her.

mayank sharma:

a very goodlooking boy with a charming smile. He is not interested in any girls he loves his books and is planning on being a doctor, or bussinessman soon. Just like nupur he has 2 marry who his parents choose 4 him. But he doesnt mind as he has is not the type that really believes in love, so hes fine with arrange marriage. He has a great fun and loving mom (shilpa sharma) and 3 siblings. Samrat, Armaan, and Dia are his siblings. They r all younger than him, except armaan. (dia is a really nice person in this ff). Dia, is the youngest, samrat is second youngest. armaan is married and has a cute son named Chintu. He has a really caring wife ridhimma. all siblings r awaiting another great bhabhi.

Part 1

Nupur's mom and shilpa sharma are great friends since college. They finally had the time 2 meet after 25 years, because both were busy in their own personal lives.

(Nups's mom will be NM in short and shilpa will be S in short)

They are meeting after a long time at nupurs house. (if it's not wriiten in hindi plzz imagine it as that since im not good at writing in hindi, sorry)

NM is greeting shilpa at the door

NM- its been 25 years since we've met. How r u.

S- i'm fine how bout u.

NM- well i'm great, i was so busy all these years with my 3 kids, nupur, gunjan, and uday.

S- i havent even seen them, well i was also quite busy with my 4 kids, mayank, benji who u've seen, he was 2 years old last time we met, dia, and samrat.

NM- wow! Btw my daughter nupur is home today, would u like 2 meet her.

S- why not!

NM- nupur beta jaldi ao!, mujhe tumhe meri best friend se milana hain

Shilpa saw her and was staring at how pretty nupur was.

N- namaste aunty

S- namaste kaise ho beta, parai kaisi chal rahi hai

N-ji maine abhi abhi ek sall pehle parai khatam kar li hai, aap kuch lengi.

S- its okay beta, mujhe chalna chahiye.

N- aap thodi der rukiye, abhi abhi toh aap aiyi hain, main aap ke liye chai lati hoon.

Shilpa was really imppressed with nupur and thought 2 herself that she was the same age as mayank. She would love 2 make her the bahu of her house. Nupur brings some tea. NM and shilpa drink it.

S- Nupur kitne saalon ki hain

NM- 25, kyun

S- bas, aise hi

S- apne iski shaadi ke baare main kya soncha hain

NM- bas ek acha ladka dhund rahe hain, waise bhi aaj kal ache ladke kahan milte hain.

S-aise keh kar aap mujhe insult ker rahi hain

NM- lekin kaise.

S- aap keh rahe hai ke ache ladke nahin milte, jab ke mera beta mayank, nupur ki age ka hai aur kuwara ha. aur vaise bhi main us ke liye achi ladki dhund rahi hoon.

NM- ab samajh aaya ke tum ye sab kyu pooch rahi thi. Vaise rishte ke bare main main toh sehmath hoon lekin ladkewale toh tum ho, phir rishta bhi tumhe hi lekar aana parega.

S- lo, isme kya hain hum kal hi le aayenge.

NM- sach!!, toh kal milte hain.

S- bye

NM- bye

Later on that evening when the whole family of both the houses are sitting together 4 dinner they discuss with their family.

At the bhushans'

NM- mujhe aap sab se kuch bahut zaroori baat karni thi.

Uday- kahie na hum sab yahin toh behete hain

NM- darasal aaj meri dost aayi thi, nupur bhi us se milhi thi. Usse nupur bari pasand aayi

Gunjan- toh (she said in a teasing way, getting hints that it's about nupurs wedding)

NM- usne kaha ke who kal apne bete mayank ke liye nupur ka haath mangne aane wali hain

(hearing this nupurs face became red)

Gunjan- oohhh!, toh ye baat hain (she said loudly so nupur could hear) and nupur started chasing gunjan all over the house while, uday NM and ND discussed about nupurs wedding.

Same happened at the Sharma's house. After they had dinner armaan, ridhimma, dia, and samrat came 2 tease mayank.

S- so tumne abhi tak bhabhi ko dekha

D- ye kaise dekhega, yeh to nahi gaya than a

A- tum log mat chero use, usko bura lagega ke who kyun maa ke saath nahi gaya

And they all laugh

R- its okay mayank, kal photo request kar lenge

They all laugh again, and mayank starts a huge pillow fight.

At the bhushans' gunjan and uday were continuously teasing nupur, and they ended up with a big pillow fight as well.

The next day the bhushans were busy arranging the house and making it look good, while gunjan was given the responsibility of getting nupur ready. They were also having a sister conversation:

g- tu khush hai kya

n- main use mili bhi nahi aur tu pooch rahi hain ke main khush hoon

g- I mean tut oh love marriage mein believe karti hain

n- who sab toh aise hi filmo mein hota hai, mujhe lagta hain ke balai isse mein hoti hain ki apne maa baap ki baat sunno aur jaha who chahe wahaan shaadi karni chahiye because maa baap hamesha sahi hote hain.

g- waise tumahri saas kaisi hain, maa ne kaha tha keh tu use se mil chukhi hain she says teasingly

n- tu chehrna band kar, waise tu toh aise keh rahi hain jaise teri toh kabhi shaadhi nnahi hone waali

suddenly the bell rings and the sharmas come. Gunjan laughs at nupur's red face.

They all sit and talk while mayank, samrat, dia, riddima, and armaan are eager to see nupur.

Chintu- main bore ho raha hoon, hum luka chupi khele.

Every1 starts laughing. NM tells him he can go upstairs and meet nupur, and gunjan. He gets happy and runs upstairs.

N- hi tumhara naam kya hai

c- chintu aur main 5 saal ka hoon, kya aap hone waali chachiji hain

gunjan start laughing and nupur starts blushing

g- han yeh hain tumahri hone waali chachi

they then have a cute conversation with chintu, and when he's about 2 leave nupur and gunjan give him chocolates, and nupur says don't show any1. Chintu says thank u and leaves. And right then they call nupur downstairs.

Plz comment, and tell me if I should continue, i really appreciate when people comment so plz do so.

If u'd like a pm then click the like button.

And plzz help me out with the name😆



Hey Jessica !!!

I m vinyasa. I really luved ur FF. I must say, if this is ur 1st FF then its really beautiful. U R a very good writer dear !! 😊 😊 All the characters were really good. Plz continue as soon as possible. & this ones 4 u. ⭐️

Hey & 1 more thing ur username & mine is almost same. Plz PM me also. All the Best 4 the nxt part dear!!!

Regarding the title u can keep 'MILAN ABHI ADHA ADHURA HAI' or 'Koi Mil Gaya' or 'Dilon ka Purana Rishta'

Vinu

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome 👏 ff jassica . loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it . do continue plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz . update the next part soooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey its soo awesome
pm me wen u upd

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