FF: Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Ha(mayur) part 7 page17 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx every1 for ur comments

i'll try my best 2 update today or tommorow, and when i do i'll

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG AWESOME PARTS!!!
REALLY CUTE!!
CNT WAIT 4 NEXT PART!!
PLS CONTINUE SOON!!
SEE YAAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi i really loved the concept pm pls when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey jessica,
i just now read u'r ff.
Really nice.
Like the way u'r portraying the bond(closeness) between the nupur, samrat, and chintu.
Update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys

thanx 4 the lovely comments next part
will be posted in a like 20 minutes
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Part 3

An hour later they come and Nupur, Gunjan, and Uday sit in the car. Then they reach the theatres at 5:50, ten minutes b4 the movie starts, they will be watching Rab Ne Banadi Jodi.

s- aap sab bet jayien, main tickets lekar aata hoon

s- Mayank, wait

m- kya?

s- aap aur bhabhi ja ke plz popcorn leke aayenge

They go and get into the long popcorn line.

m- mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha

n- han, kahiyen

m- aap bahut achi lag rahi hain

n- umm... thanx aap bhi

Samrat gets the tickets and gives Nupur and Mayank their tickets and says that they will be waiting 4 them in the theatres. Mayank and Nupur get the popcorn and drinks and they r walking inside when Nupur slips because of some spilt water, but Mayank catches her and saves the popcorn from falling.

m- sambhal ke chaliye, aap ghir jaati toh

n- toh?

m- aap ke pair mein moch aa jaati aur phir shaadhi ke din aap se phere nahi liye jaaenge

Nupur blushes. They go inside. This is the seating order:

Armaan, Riddhima, Diya, Chintu, Gunjan, Samrat, Nupur, Mayank, Uday

s- bhabhi aap kuch bhul rahi hain

n- main kuch nahi bhul rahi, yeh lo chocolates

s- thanx!!

n- tum bilkul bache ho

The movie starts. At about 7:00 the part comes where SRK and Anushaka Sharma r eating golgappe.

S 2 n- golgappe khane ka man kar raha hain

n- mera bhi

m 2 n and s- golgappe khane ka man kar raha hain

n and s- humhara bhi

m- toh chalet hai na

g 2 s- hum sab golgappe khane chale

s- wohi toh hum keh rahe the

The golgappe wala sentence spreads around the 9 of them and they decide 2 leave the movies and go 2 eat golgappe instead. They all hop in the car and leave. They see a golgappa stand. They get out of the car.

s- bhai saab 15 golgappe dijiye.

Golgappa guy- tum bemar ho jaaoge 15 golgappe khake

m- yeh hum sab ke liye hain

Golgappa guy- oohh, aap betiyen mein abhi banata hoon

They all eat golgappe and have lots of fun.

n- aaj bahut maza aaya

s- aur kal aur bhi aayega

n- kyun

s- kyun ki hum wonderland jaa rahe hain aur aap log bhi saath chal rahe hain

n- kyun

d- kyunki hum aapke saath hi jana chahte hain

n- lekin main kaise-

c- kyun nahin ja sakti

n- ghar pe kaam hain

r- kya kaam hain

g- chalte hai na di, sab keh rahe hain

m- han gunjan thik keh rahi hain

n- acha thik hain

s- toh fir kal barah baje tayar rehna tum log

u- tikh hai

They drop them home.

They next day Nupur goes to the market at 10:00, coincidentally Mayank is also there, and he sees her.

m- hi Nupur

n- hi

m- tum chal rahi ho na

n- han

m- thanx

n- kyun

m- chalne ke liye (Nupur blushes)

n- oww!!!

m- kya hua!

n- pata nahi per ko kuch laga I think

m- tum baitho

She sits down and Mayank gently removes a thorn from her foot. Nupur feels all tingly, same with Mayank.

n- thanks

m- its okay

They are about 2 leave when Nupur necklace gets stuck in Mayank's buttons. There is hardly any space between them. Mayank and Nupur both reach the necklace at the same time and there hands touch. They have that tingly feeling again.

m- main karta hoon

He removes the necklace from his button.

Nupur is leaving. Mayank notices that Nupur's payal fell. He picks it up but b4 he can give it she is already gone, so he just keeps it safely.

Later on at Sharma's house in Samrat's room:

Dia enters

s- Hey Dia

d- hey

s- chalo ab plan ko aage barahte hain

d- han how about unne har ride par ek saath baithaya jaye

s- ya good idea Dia

s- vaise idea and Dia rhyme

d- aage ka plan hum vaha ja kar sochenge, kyun ki ab jaana bhi hai na

They take an open jeep this time. They reach the Bhushan's house and all hop on the jeep and get there at about 12:30, and decide 2 go on the roller coasters first. Everybody gets in pairs and Mayank and Nupur are the only ones left so they sit together. The roller coaster is going really fast and Nupur is screaming.

m- kya hua

n- kitni tez jaa raha hai

Then it goes even faster and Nupur closes her eyes and puts her head on Mayank's chest, Mayank puts his arm around Nupur. Mayank doesn't want this ride 2 end. The ride is about 2 end and Nupur realizes what she's doing. She quickly let's go.

The next ride isn't 2 fast but it goes in loops and they go upside down and sideways and so on.

During the ride:

m- Nupur

n- haan

m- mujhe dar lag raha hain

All of a sudden Nupur starts laughing, the ride goes upside down.

m- aahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!

Nupur puts her hands on his eyes.

n- aankhen band karlo phir dar nahin lagega.

After a few more rides they go to the Bhushan's house 2 drop them off. Shilpa is there.

Shilpa- tum log ruko hum saath mein ghar challenge, hum iss waqt panditji se mahoorat nikal rahe hain.

g- hum upar chalte hain

s- han

They all go upstairs in g and n's room.

They talk 4 a while and then the teasing starts and they end up with a big pillow fight, all 9 of them. Then they go home. When they reach home Shilpa tells them that 2 days later is the engagement and then after 2 weeks is the marriage.

s- wow! Itni jaldi

Shilpa- han, kyunki agar 2 weeks mein nahi toh 5 months wait karna padhta

d- acha kiya, nahin toh kya pata shayad Mayank wait na kar pata

m- diya!!

They all laugh

At the same time Nupur gets 2 noe of this and gunjan and Nupur r in their room.

g- di, aap humahre saath sirf do weeks ke liye ho ab

n- tumhe kya lagta hain, main shaadhi ke baad tumse milungi nahi kya?

g- lekin aap mere saath toh nahin rehengi

They hug 4 a long time and go 2 sleep, but nupur cant fall asleep she's thinking about mayank, and same with mayank. Then they both realize that they r in love.

the next day is passing really quickly in preparations 4 engagement. The phone rings nupur picks it up.

It's Dia

n- hello

d- hi bhabhi

n- Samrat, tumahri awaaz koh kya ho gaya

d- main Dia

n- oh sorry, vo kya hai na samrat bhi aise hi phone karke kehta hain hi bhabhi, ab plz tum toh mujhe nupur balao

d- kyun, main toh bas practice kar rahi thi

n- tum sab ko ho kya gaya, aaj kal sab mujhe yeh hi kehte hain, vaise batao kaise phone kiya

d- maine toh bas aise hi kiya, lekin ab mujhe rakhna chahiye tum log sagai ki tayari kar rahe honge, bye kal milte hai sagai pe

n- bye

Then the phone rings again.

n- hello

s- hi bhabhi

n- hi samrat

s- maine remind karne ke liye phone kiya-

n- ke kal engagement hai

s- right

n- bye

s- bye

The phone rings again.

N thinking- agar samrat hua na toh main…

n- hello

m- hi nupur

Nupur is shocked

n- uhh… hi mayank, phone kyun kiya

m- bas aise hi

They r quiet 4 a while

m- uhh… bye

n- bye

m- ruko

n- han mayank bolo

m- uhh… actually… main… who

n- mayank bolo na

m- kal raat tumhe neend aayi thi

n- umm… han kyun tumhe aayi thi

m- uhh… han

n- mayank

m- han

n- mujhe pata hain ke-

m- mujhe neend nahi aayi thi, aur mujhe ye pata hain ke tumhe bhi nahi aayi

They r both quiet 4 a while.

n- main tumse baad me baat karti hoon, yaha bahut kam hain

m- mujhe pata hain ke tum bas yeh sab baat talne keh liye keh rahi ho

n- nahi, tumhe kisne kaha

m- mujhe pata hai

n- uhh… bye gunjan bula rahi hai

And she quickly puts the phone down.

The next day is the engagement.

plz comment every1

guys, i named it
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hain
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Posted: 16 years ago
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as always luved it..pls continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww!!! love it !
shoo sweet!!! and cute!!!!
love mayank and nupur!!!
lol!! :D
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowww... this is the first time i read it.... i loved it!!!! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz add me 2 ur PM list........... i loved it!!!! really enjoyin itt!!! cannot wait 2 read moreee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pm yeh.... okay....
aawww loved it... samrat is sooo sweet n cutee in dis... wow AR av a kid.... wow.... lol... uday is not dumb... anotha wow... lol! awsome sweety!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayalal

as always luved it..pls continue soon..

thanx
sdure i'll update soon

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