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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: luv-myur

Ek or baath. I forgot 2 tell u that the title you gave is nice.
Good thinking-even if i give my 100% time to thinking about all this, i probably wouldn't even come this close.😆

The credit goes 2 *~*riddhima*~*

she thought of it , I just chose it cause I liked it

Edited by mjht_fan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
gr8 update yaar....waise don't feel bad...i would like to give a suggestion...i just thought of something while reading....u could have shown that while nupur was selecting her lehenga...she just puts the lehenga on herself and sees herself in the mirror n imagines mayank giving comments on it...n selects the lehenga according to his comments....that could have been a bit more romantic.....well just thought of it so i told u...if u like it then include it somewhere in ur ff with a li'l variation....n if u don't like then also its ok...i love ur ff....continue soon....n thanx for pming me....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AMAZING UPDTS!!!
REALLY LOVED THEM!!!
IM SOOO HAPPY!!!
GOOD CONVO WITH JIJU-SAALI !!!
AND NICE OUTFITS!!!
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME!
SEE YAA
LOVE UUU
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Dear, Every1 who reads my ff:

I'm really sorry 2 announce that I will have 2 finish my ff in very few parts because, I'm in eleventh grade and live in Canada, so my holidays have just begun and we r going on vacation pretty soon. I will be able to use the computer but not often enough 2 write updates. I'm very sorry about this. Maybe when I come back from vacation, I can start another ff but this is it 4 now. Sorry!

😭

Sincerely

Jassica
Edited by mjht_fan - 16 years ago
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Part 5

They meet up in front of the same store. They don't show their clothes so it can be a surprise.

s- hum log aaj ghumne chale

n- rehne do aaj match bhi toh dekhna hain

a- hum toh bhul hi gaye ke aaj match bhi hain, thanx nupur

n- no problem, bye

They leave from there.

The next day is the mehndi day and both houses have guests over along. Three people are putting bridal mehndi on nupur's hands and half of her arms. Gunjan and Nupur's other friends and cousins are dancing. Then Gunjan comes over 2 nupur and looks at the mehndi.

The next day:

Bhushans'

The whole house is filled with people preparing 4 the wedding and setting up the mandapt.

Sharmas'

Everyone is getting ready 4 the big day tomorrow.

The day goes by in preparations.

The wedding day is here:

The whole house is decorated. All of Nupur's friends are there getting Nupur ready. Nupur looks prettier than ever. They hear trumpets and instruments.

g- lagta hain baraat aa gayi

friend- haan!

g- lekin hum unne itni jaldi andar nahi aane denge

They all run 2 the door where they stop the baraat.

s- humme andar jane do na

g- aise nahin jane denge

a- kyun, humme andar jana hain

Friend- pehle paise do

s- kyun, hum koi paise dene wale

g- to hum bhi nahin hatne wale

Friends- han!

a- tikh hain ye lo

He hands them some money.

They go inside. It's time 4 the marraige.

Gunjan and Nupur's mom bring Nupur downstairs. Mayank tells himself not to look at her or else he won't stop looking at her and he'll embarrass himself. But obviously he couldn't help it and looked at her. She was looking really pretty, but Mayank controlled his eyes. The wedding is then over after phere, sindoor etc

The baraat goes 2 eat. The baraat comes back 4 the bidaai. It's time 4 Nupur 2 go. They all hug and cry. Nupur Gunjan and Uday r hugging, then nupur hugs her mom and dad. Then, 1 final hug with Gunjan again and then she sits in the car and leaves. Mayank is getting sad seeing Nupur crying.

Then they reach Sharmas house.

Shilpa is standing at the door ready 2 welcome Nupur. She puts a thali with red colour and water. Nupur steps in the thali and walks in leaving her footprints.

Shilpa- welcome nupur, ye hain tumhara naya ghar, vaise hum sab kaafi thak gaye hain lekin humari ek rasam bhi hain jo bahut zaroori hain

R- haan, Mayank tumme nupur ko uthake upar leke jaana hoga(I just made this up, I'm pretty sure its not a real one)

m- kya? ye kaisi rasam hain

a- acha! jab meri shaadhi hui thi tab toh yehi rasam complete karni padi thi

s- haan mayank, he said teasingly

d- rasam toh rasam ho hoti hain, aur usse complete karna bahut important hain

m- okay, okay tikh hain

He slowly lifts up Nupur in his arms and takes her upstairs. They both look into each other's eyes lovingly then they finally reach in front of the room, Mayank slowly puts Nupur down. Then they all go upstairs 2 their rooms. B4 Samrat enters his room he walks up to Mayur who were just standing there and opens the door 2 the room and first pushes Mayank in there, then Nupur and closes there door.

Nupur and Mayank fall down. Nupur fell on top of Mayank. She struggles 2 get up but can't because of her heavy jewelry and clothes. Mayank gets up and then helps Nupur get up.

m- yeh samrat bhi na

n- han, bilkul pagal hai

m- uhh' nupur main bas yeh kehna chahta tha ke don't worry, main tumme chuoonga bhi nahi aur agar tum chahti ho toh main waha sofe par hi soh jao ga

n- no it's okay, shaadhi ki hain, itna toh vishwaas hai

m- tum bahut thak gayi hogi soh jao

Nupur goes and sits on the bed. Mayank remember he has her payal.

m- Nupur, ek minute

He walks up to her and lifts up the bottom of her lehnga. Nupur is scared and can't find her breath. Mayank takes out the payal and puts it on her. She finds her breath and thinks she was worrying 4 nothing.

n- yeh tumahre paas kaise aayi, maine isse har jaga dhunda

m- actually woh market wale din yeh mere paas hi reh gayi thi

n- oh, mujhe bahut neendh aa rahi hai, good night

m- good night

They fall asleep. The next morning Nupur wakes up and goes in the washroom to take a shower. Mayank is still sleeping, but shortly after that wakes up and continues 2 lie on the bed. Then he hears Nupur call his name from the washroom

n- Mayank!! Mayank!!

m- han Nupur

n- shampoo kaha hain

m- andar hi hain

n- mayank main men's shampoo nahin use karti!!

m- sorry, mein bhabhi se le aata hoon

n- thanks

m- no problem

Mayank comes back with some ladies shampoo. He sees nupur hand sticking out from behind the door. He gives it 2 her and their hands touch, they both feel awkward.

n- thanx mayank

m- kitni baar kaho gi

n- sorry

Mayank goes back 2 lie on his bed. Nupur comes out. Nupur's hair is dripping and she was wearing a beautiful sari, she looked stunning and Mayank kept staring at her.

n- tum aise kyun ghur rahe ho

Mayank stops staring at her.

n- actually, bhabhi aayi thi aur dher saari saris mujhe de kar chali gi, ab main apne dusre kapdo ke saath kya karoo

Nupur turns and sees Mayank sleeping. She goes downstairs.

Shilpa- nupur beta, tum aa gayi, mayank kaha hai

n- abhi tak soh raha hain

*laugh*

Shilpa- plzz usse jagaa do

n- tikh hain

Nupur comes in the room and goes up 2 Mayank

n- Mayank utho

n- Mayank!

n- utho na

Mayank sits up.

m- thik hain, uth hi raha hoon

He is walking over 2 the washroom, while Nupur is leaving. Then, Mayank holds her hand and pulls her closer 2 him. He puts his arm around her waist and pulls her even closer. Nupur is trying 2 leave but he's holding her too close and tight. He is about 2 kiss her-

n- Mayank, utho!!

It was all a dream.

m- han, main bas uth hi raha hoon

n- pehle nahao uss ke baad niche aa jana maa bula rahi thi

m- tikh hai

m- ruko

n- haan

m- mayank walks over 2 her she takes a step back but then the wall is behind her, he comes close and puts sindoor on her.

m- tum bhul gayi thi

Nupur goes downstairs.

She meets ridz and shilpa downstairs.

s- nupur, aaj khana tumme banana hoga, yeh bhi ek rasam hain, agar kuch puchna ho toh ridhimma se puch lena, riddima zara isse kitchen dikha dena

r- tikh hain, chalo nupur

n- hmm

In the kitchen

r- okay, toh yeh hain kitchen aur aaj khana tumme banana hain, aur main tumahri koi madat nahin kar sakti, bye have fun

n- ek minute bhabhi

r- bolo

n- main banao gi kya?

r- jo marzi, I think tumme aalo ke parathe banane chahiye, sab ko pasand hain

n- tikh hai

She makes them, and right then Mayank and Samrat come in, following their noses

s- wow bhabhi! Kya khushboo aa rahi hai

n- thanx samrat

He leaves because he wants 2 leave them alone.

m- bahut achi khushboo aa rahi hain

n- thanx

Nupur is trying 2 move a strand of hair from her face. Mayank lifts his hand up 2 nupur's face and removes it 4 her.

n- thanx

m- plzz jaldi banao, bhukh lag rahi hai

He leaves.

Nupur makes the aalo ke parathe and then Ridhimma comes.

r- achi khushboo aa rahi hain, ache bane honge

n- thanx

r- chalo serve karte hain

They serve and sit 2 eat.

Every1 praises her except Mayank, and Nupur doesn't know why she is only waiting 4 Mayank's comment. After they eat, they all give her expensive gifts.

n- iski kya zaroorat hai

shilpa- beta shagun ko mana nahi karte

n- lekin-

r- lekin kuch nahin, tum jao aur iss sab ko upar apne kamre mein rakh ao

n- tikh hain

r- yeh hui na baat

They all go 2 their rooms.

In mayur's room:

m- khana bahut acha tha, maine apni poori zindagi mein kabhi itna acha khana nahin khaya

n- thanx (blushing)

Mayank- mujhe office mein kuch kam hain, main bas adhe ghante mein aa jao ga

n- tikh hai

Then Mayank starts looking 4 something, and seems very tensed.

n- kya hua??

m- meri tie nahin mil rahi

n- toh vo kya hain

m- jo baat main tumhe ab bataunga, mujhe promise karo ke tum kisi ko nahi batao gi

n- promise

m- vo jo ties dekh rahi ho na

n- han

m- vo bas dikhave ke liye hain

n- kya

m- han, actually main clip-on ties pehanta hoon

Nupur couldn't control and started laughing so much.

m- mujhe meri tie nahin mil rahi aur tumme hassi aa rahi hain

n- aur nahin toh kya

n- tum clip-on-

He puts his finger on her lips (nupur feels awkward)

He removes it

m- koi sun lega

n- waise mujhe tie bhandh ni aati hain

m- sach! Plzz bhandh do na

n- tikh hain

He gives her a tie. She put it around his neck and she ties the tie.

n- yeh lo, bas do minute ka toh kaam hain

m- thanx

m- aaj ke baad main clip-on ties nahin pehanoo ga

n- acha hain, nahin toh agar kisi ko pata chalta toh tumahri toh band hi bhaj jaati

She turn 2 leave but trips and mayank catches her.

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Edited by mjht_fan - 16 years ago
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Part 6

Nupur is still in Mayank's arms, Nupur is clutching on 2 Mayank's shirt, with her eyes tightly shut.

Mayank helps her get up.

n- thanx

m- main late ho raha, bye

He didn't noe why but he kissed her cheek and ran off.

Nupur was just standing there frozen solid.

He came back after half an hour and was quite surprised 2 see nupur sitting very sadly.

m- kya hua nupur

n- gunjan ki yaad aa rahi hain

He couldn't see her so sad so he decided 2 take her 2 Gunjan.

m- tikh hain, toh hum Gunjan se milne chalte hain

n- sach, thank u so much

She hugged him and then kissed his cheek.

n- chalo na

Mayank was shocked but happy.

m- han chalo

They went and met Gunjan.

g- di, aapko pata hain maine aapko kitna miss kiya

They talk 4 a while and Mayank says he'll come 2 pick her up in 3 hours.

n- thik hain, bye

g- bye

They talked 4 a very long time. Nupur told Gunjan everything that happened between them since their first ever meeting.

g- tum dono ko pyaar ho gaya hain

n- kya bakwaas kar rahi hain huh!??!!?

g- main bilkul sahi keh rahi hoon

When Gunjan said this, Mayank was there 2 but he pretended that he didn't hear a thing. He knocked on the door.

g- aap kab aaye jiju

m- bas abhi

n- bye gunjan

g- bye nupur

They both sat in the car. Gunjan's words were ringing in their heads "tum dono ko pyaar ho gaya hain"

They both realized that Gunjan is probably right.

They reach home at about 7:00pm. Nupur and Mayank were in their room still thinking about what Gunjan said. Suddenly the light goes off and Nupur hugs Mayank.

n- Mayank, mujhe bahut dar lag raha

m- don't worry nupur, bas kuch hi der mein light vaapis aa jaye gi

Nupur wasn't letting go of Mayank, but Mayank didn't mind, instead Mayank put his arms around her also, they hugged 4 five minutes, and then the light came back. They went 2 sleep, and now they were sure of Gunjan's words.

Then next week passed by quickly with mayur thinking about each other all the time. The next week it was holi. They decided that they will tell each other their feelings. It was the morning time on holi. Nupur was looking as usual pretty but she looked even better that day in a white suit. Mayank didn't tell her this time. Mayank came out of the washroom after his shower. He was combing his hair when he heard Nupur scream. He came over 2 her

m- kya hua

Nupur hid behind him and clutched his kurta in her hand

n- cockroach!!

m- tum usse dhar rahi ho

It was the flying type and it flew over Nupur's head. Nupur then hugged Mayank very tightly, Mayank hugged her and then killed the cockroach.

m- chalo hum bahar chalte hain, holi khelne

n- chalo

They went outside and the first thing that happened was, Samrat threw a big bucket full of colored water on Mayank and Nupur.

n- aahh!!!!!

m- samrat!!

n- SAMRAT!!!! main tumme nahin chodoongi, ab dekho main tumhara kya haal banati hoon!!

She brings a pichkari full of coloured water and starts chasing samrat with it, then she squirts it all over his face and clothes.

When she was walking away Mayank and Samrat bring 6 plates of colour and dump it all on her.

n- aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

She does it back 2 them and they start having colour fights. The whole family joins them. Then they see Nupur's family coming. Diya, Nupur, Samrat and Mayank whisper something 2 each other. Mayank brings 2 plates of colour, Diya brings 2 more plates of colour, Nupur brings her coloured water filled pichkari, and samrat brings a bucket full of coloured water. Mayank, Diya, and samrat throw their holi weapons on Uday and Gunjan, and when they think the war is over Nupur squirt coloured water on them with her pichkari.

d, s, m, n- HAPPY HOLI!!!!

Gunjan and Uday are really angry.

m, d, s- sorry, actually nupur ka plan tha

n- uhh' sorry!! Waise mere saath bhi kuch kam nahin hua (looking down at herself)

Uday and Gunjan can clearly see that Nupur was badly coloured head to toe. But, they wanted to take revenge anyways.

u, and g- it's okay (they lie)

They plan on something BIG!! They want 2 colour her so badly that she will never forget this day. But, first they want 2 so something big 2, the parents, the parents of both families r standing there talking. Armaan, Ridz, Nups, Mayu, Sammy, Dia, Gunji, Uday, and even Chintu is part of this. They all bring full pichkaris and start the squirting.

Shilpa- arre!! Yeh bache bhi na

NM- bas bhi karo!

They don't stop and in the end the three parents r completely coloured.

Then Gunjan tells every1 about the plan to colour Nupur completely.

Chintu walks up 2 Nups.

c- chaachi, aap yahin khariye, yaha se hiliye mat, okay

n- tikh hain lekin kyun

c- aap ko thodi der mein pata lag jaye ga

Nupur was confused but stood there anyways. Right then ten buckets of coloured water fall on her.

N- yeh sab kya hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She was furious but then, they throw fistfuls of colour on her

n- BAS KARO!!!

Then they take the pichkaris and squirt her with water.

n- AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

n- zaroor gunjan aur uday ne yeh sab karwaya hoga. Then she runs after them like crazy. During that time Samrat makes Armaan and Mayank drink bhang, he drank it as well. They start drinking glass after glass and then they go in the middle and start 2 dance and soon every1 joins them:

Jag jag sara jag sara nikhar gaya
Hud pyaar hawa de vich bikhar gaya–2
hud

Jag jag sara jag sara nikhar gaya
Hud pyaar hawa de vich bikhar gaya –2
Dil tera hoi jave ambran nu chui jave
Mar udare dekho jigar gaya
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Sham Savere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Pyar mein tere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
rock d party hun
Mauja hi Mauja
mauja hi mauja
Sham Savere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Pyar mein tere
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
rock d party hud
Mauja hi Mauja

Oh mahi mera sharbat varga
Oh mahi tenu gat gat pela
Oh mahi mera dil menu kahi jaye dil menu kahi jaye
Khul ke jeelan —2
Mithde haase
Oh mahi mere aase pase
Oh mahi mere haad beram huye
Dil sat rang hoye
dil mahi sang hoye jidhar gaya
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
der savare
Hud Mauja hi Mauja
Hul hulare hun ...


The day goes by fantastic.

Mayank says 2 himself- aaj main Nupur ko zaroor bataunga

Nupur enters the room.

m- nupur, main tumme kuch batana chahta tha

n- haan, bolo

m- uhh...

n- kya

m- umm...

n- ab bolo bhi

m- uhh... I love u! kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho

n- (shocked) kya??

m- han, lekin tumne abhi tak mujhe bataya nahi, kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho

n- nahi!

He realizes it's a dream.

M 2 himself- main nupur ko nahin bataunga, kya pata yeh sapna sach ho

Then, he sees Nupur's diary poking out from under the bed. He knows that he is not supposed 2 but he decides 2 read it anyways. He goes 2 the last written page.

Aaj main gunjan ko milne gayi thi, humne bahut batein ki. Maine usse Mayank ke bare mein bataya. Usne mujhe kaha ke mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya hain. Maine uski baat par itna dhyan nahin diya, actually maine uski baat ko ignore karne ki koshish ki lekin ab mujhe uski baat mein sachai dikhai de rahi hain. Pata nahi kyun lekin ab baar, baar main who baat ke bare mein soch rahi hoon. Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha. Pata nahi lekin mujhe lag raha hain ke mujhe sach mein Mayank se pyaar ho gaya hain.

He flips a page.

Aaj holi hain. Bahut maza aayega. Maine kal Gunjan ki baat ke baare mein bahut socha. Mujhe ab yakeen ho gaya hain ke main Mayank se pyaar karti hoon lekin main usse yeh nahin bataungi, main uska intezaar karungi. Main uske muh se yeh baat sun na chahti hoon.

Edited by mjht_fan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice updates dear....so is d next update-d last update of ur FF????????/ 😭 ...n btw i had read ur updates b4 u send me a pm...nywz thnx for d pm....plzzzzz continue soon...n i request to u make confession of mayur a special one..... 😳 in ur next update(if u r plannin to make confession in next)
or in d update in vich u'l show their confession......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww!! soo cute!!!
plz give some good romantic scenes of mayank and nupur!!!!
thanx for the update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Jessica!!!

Veryyyyyyyyyyy nice updates!! Loved the way they played Holi & all. So r u really completing ur FF soon??? I m gonna miss it . But plzzzzz do continue.

Love u

Vinu

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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing update loved all the MN scenes
they r soo cute
its sad u r finishing its quickly
but have fun in holidays

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