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Arpita Madan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

OMG this is AMAZING ruchi di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shooooo shweeeeet!!!!!! and congrats on ur exams!!! wow dr ruchi huh???? cooooollll!!!! btw when r u updating ur ff ?????

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taniya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!😳😳
CHOOOOOOOOOOO CHWEET!!!!
Do PM me the next part!
TANIYA.

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Filza

@FiiLza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

UFF Uff Ruchi ji kya FF likha...toallly bindasss😎 lol..sheena- nupurs mate...for a sec i thought u meant "maid' and i was like sahi hai...lol😆

btw how r u ...i didnt talk to u like in 1000000 years...

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falak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

edited my post at page no. 2...plz check...😉

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

awesome just love it .👏 do write more like this bout mayur plezzzzzzzz

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

thanx a lot guyss

i am on cloud no. 9 after reading ur comments !!!

thanx

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

sorry ruchi i reserved this but posted i commented below 😆

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago

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heena

@heena.damor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

wow it was soooooooooooooooooooooooo fantastic..........ufffffffffffff tumhare one shot ne to sahi me mujhe maar he dala........gr8 work....... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.......... tum ne shayad galat likh diya hai.........ye one shot nahi "million shots frm one gun " the........

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

ruchi...I gotta tell you that I love reading oneshots more than the chaptered ones...because we don;t have to wait for updates!! LOL...and recently there have been so many!!

And I absolutly loved yours!! hehe..I can just imagine Nupur being annoyed to that extend over him not remembering their anniversary!!

And when she thought "abhi yeh haal hai toh shaadi ke baad kay hoga..." LOL...it was so funny!!

And I liked it also that you made them be out of college and doing jobs!! Mayank is in the same office as hers!

The romance...you write it wonderfully!! Even the most simple scene comes out as utterly romantic!

Loved that last part....they're married and she was remembering...Lovely...

Do write more one shots yaar!! every once in a while...hehe..!

Great Job!! Keep up the fabulour FF writing!

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GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

👏 ruchi absolutely no words .... such a romantic one shot loved everything about it ... Mayu was so sweet and so romantic .... i totally enjoyed it yaar ..... i loved the ending ... good to know about new life growing inside Nups 👏

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