My FiRst AnNivErSarY--MayUr OnE ShOt

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

mohseena

@mohseena

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

okay i have no words !!!!!>.............................................IT"S JUST AMAAAAAAAAAAAZING!!!

Quote

mohseena

@mohseena

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
hayeee... im gnna faint.. it wuzz soo romantic!
loved it,,

bhool mat aaj tumjhe apna love forever update kaarna hai,., u promisedd!

EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!!!!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>PLZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE KURNA!!!!!!!!!!!>....!!!>just luv mayur yaar!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Im lost for words....this was BEAUTIFUL....especially the ending...please write more....i cant say how beautifully written this was...

Quote

mohseena

@mohseena

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

*reminder* LOVE FOREVER UPDATE:) sorry for being a pain but i cant help it!!.i'll keep bugging u until u update!!

Quote

Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: mohseena
*reminder* LOVE FOREVER UPDATE:) sorry for being a pain but i cant help it!!.i'll keep bugging u until u update!!

aww....u are not a pain yyaar

i know...i was really late

will update today or tomo morning for sure😳

Quote

Sania

@Mayur4ever

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

OH My! That was so sweet. I really liked this spelled out about Nupz character.
"she was really passionate about her love for mayank..and always belived that small happiness in life makes it beautifull and worth-living...and remembering someone's special day were one of the way to invite happiness....she never wanted expensive gifts..or five-star hotel treatment...a rose could make her happy"

How cute!

Quote

Brinda

@brinda_ght

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

heyyyyyyyy wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was just fab loved it...plzzz do write such short stories....its juat awesum....

Quote

prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

hi Dr. Ruchi.....i really must say it was a damn good work....really loved it a lot....i'm new to IF n have not read many ffs but this one was the best among all of them...many write bout mayur fighting after marriage...seperating....n extra marital affairs....n all that....but u wrote bout their happy married life....so just loved it....plz do write more such one shots or ffs....