LUV IS IN D AIR-FF/Part 33 updated!!

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Recap-Shilpa invites Nupur's family for dinner,Sajan misses their bus.

They go towards the bus station and hung open their mouth when they see the bus missing.

S-oh shit!!!

G-bus kaha hain???

Man-ma'am voh toh challa gaya!!

S-kya????
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Part 33-

Man-tum Lonavala vaale bus ke baat kar rahe the na???

S-ji haan.

Man-haan,aaj sunday hain aur sunday ke din toh humesha jaldi nikalte hain.

G-toh phir hum kya karre Samrat??(luks at him)

S-agle bus kab ayyenge???

Man-parso sahab.

G-par humme toh kal dopeher ponchna chaiye.

Man-tum vaha kal subah ponch sakhte.

S-kaise??kya aap humme bata sakhte??

Man-ji,agar aap yeh jungle paar karre toh sidhe Lonavala ke tourist cab main ponch sakhte aur vaha se gaari mil sakhte apne manzil tak.

S-hum jayyenge???(luks at Gunjan)

G-mujhe toh kuch samajme nahin aa raha hain Samrat.

S-hum jayyenge.varna vaha ke log kya sochenge chashmish?ke Excel ke students bohut irresponssible hain.

Man-agar aap log aaj hi jayyenge toh ponch sakhte.

S-challo.

Man-yaha aao beta,main tum don ke liye khana dete.

S-koi baad nei bhaiya,hummare paas khana hain.

Man-nahin nahin,bhooke kaise jaa sakhte???yeh loh.

He gives them sum food.

Man-yeh loh,aloo ke parathe aur sabziya.

G-shukriya bhaisahab.

Man-koi baad nei betiyaan,do pyaar karne vaale ke liye toh madat karna hi parega.bhagwaan aapke saath hain,jao.

S-dhaniyavaad.

They thnk the man and start their journey to Lonavala.

Bhushan Residence-
Mayank and Nupur reach the house.

N-challo na Mayank.tum papa se baat karre.

M-mein??par...

N-plzzz Mayank,varna voh manna karenge.

M-thikke.

Nupur opens the door and they see vanraj and Armaan sitting their with names of caterers on the table.

N-hi papa,hi bhaiya.

A-hi guyz!!aa aagayye?

N-haan.papa...

M-uncle,maa ne aapko aur Armaan ko dinner ke liye bulaya,kya aap aa sakhte??

V-ofcorse!!hum aayenge.

M-thnku uncle.maa bohut khush honge.

V-our pleasure.toh phir tumhare ghar 7 baje.

M-ji haan.

V-great,Nupur beta,juice lao.

M-no thnx uncle.main chalti hoon,bazaar se kuch samaan lena hain.

V-thikke,bye,thnx for the invitation.

A-bye Mayank!

M-bye,bye Nupur.

N-bye.

Mayank leaves.

Sajan-
The two start walking towards the forest.

G-sorry Samrat.

S-kis ke liye chahsmish??(luks at her)

G-yeh sab ke liye.yeh sab mere vajese hain,agar maine paani nahin maanga toh yeh sab nahin hote.i'm soo sorry.

S-yeh tum kya keh rahe hain???

G(Luks down)

S(takes her chin up and luks at her eyes)-chashmish,yeh tum kya keh rahe hain????yeh sab tumhare vajese nahin.yeh bhagwaan ke marzi hain.apne aap ko blame mat karo.

G-par Samrat....

S-no,maine kaha na?ke yeh sab tumhare vajese nahin hain,agar tumne aapne aapko phirse blame kiya toh main bohut udaaz honge.now smile!!

G-???

S-arre,smile!!

G(smiles)

S-ab challo,hum aage chalte hain thode der ke liye phir jungle ke raaste se jaonge.yeh loh!seb khalo!!(offers Gunjan an apple)

G(takes it)

S-now don't worry.hum Lonavala jald se ponch choge.

G-thikke.

Bhushan Residence-Nupur's Room-
Nupur looks at her salwar and lehenga suits which were hung neatly in her closet in colour wise.She was luking at the closet for the past half an hour and cudn't decide wat to wear.

N-kya pehenloon????agar Gunjan yaha hote toh is choote occasion ke liye kapre pata hote,kaash Gunjan yaha hote!!

She luks at her's and Gunjan's picture and smiles.

N-ab kya pehnoon?????

She takes a luk at her suits and smiles seeing a blue and yellow coloured salwar suit.

N-haan,yeh right hain,maine toh yeh kabse nahin pehna.(she takes out the suit and keeps it on top of the bed)ab bas bangles select karni hain.

She goes towrds the dressing table and checks her box containing her different coloured bangles.She takes out two blue coloured and one yellow coloured bangles.Just then,her phone rings and MAYANK flashes on her screen.

N-uffo,abhe yeh kya chaiye???(She presses the green button)hello??

M-hi Nupur!!

N-sirf HI hi bolna hain??mujhe taiyaar bhi karna hain!!

M-sorry,ummm mujhe yeh kehna tha ke kya aaj tum apne baalo khola rehna desakhte????

N-kyun???

M-kyunki,aise tum bohut acche lagte hain.

N(smiles)-par main yeh tumhare kehne se kyun karoon???

M-oh haab kyunki agar tum apne marzi se karoge toh main acche acche comments nahin doge aur agar nahin doge toh tum gussa ho jayyenge!!

N-haan par.....

M-cum on Nupur,sirf aaj.....

N-par..

M-mere liye.......

N-thikke.

M-ok bye.

N-bye.

M-luv u.

N(blushes)-luv u too.

M(smiles and keeps the phone)maa!!!

He goes to the kitchen and sees Shilpa cooking food.

MM-kya hain Mayu????

M-aap taiyaar karo,main khana dekhte hain.

MM-par....

M-plzzz maa.

MM-thikke.par acchanak se tum khana kyun banana chahte????kal toh tumne kaha ke yeh poore hafta tum khana nahin banayenge.

M-voh..mujhe lagga ke aaj bohut saare dishes banana hain toh main bhi help kardoon.

MM-thikke,main fresh hokar aata hoon.

M-sure.

Shilpa goes to freshen up and Mayank starts cooking food.

Sajan-Road-
Sajan were walking and walking when they cum across three goons drunk and sitting under a tree.Gunjan sees them and holds Samrat's arm.Samrat also sees them and ignores them.

Goon 1-hey chori!!!

Gunjan hugs Samrat tighter and Samrat feels it.

Goon 2-tu is mast item ko kaha lejaa raha hain bhai???zarra hum bhi batta do!!(laughs and hi-5's the other goons)

Goon 3-haan haan,humme bhi bata do!!

They cum infront of Sajan thus blocking their way.

S-humare raaste se hat jao.

Goon1-kyun???apne aap ko samajte kya ho???

They look at Gunjan and smile.One of the goons auddenly slide her dupatta from her neck and pushes her thus making her fall to the ground.

S(closes his fist)-dupatta waapaz dedo!!

G-mera dupatta!!(her vpice starts breaking)

Goon1-arre.dupatta chaiye??huh??

Shows the dupatta to Samrat and shakes it.The other goon goes towards Gunjan and was abt to put his hands on her when Samrat stops it.

Goon 2-arre.haath choro.

G-Samrat....(tears forming in her eyes)

The other goon cums to Samrat and starts pulling him.Samrat lets go and starts fighting with them.Samrat hits them and with force hits them from ther stomach.Most of the goons turn weak but struggle to win the battle.Gunjan's tears start forming in her eyes.She luks at Samrat and breaks down.Sum goons hit Samrat also from his head and his head starts bleeding.

G-Samratttttttt!!!!!!!!!!

Sam gets angry and takes sum bottles from under the tree and hits it on top of their heads.The goons see the anger in Samrat's face and fled from there.Seeing the goons run,Samrat looks at Gunjan who was hiding her bare neck.Samrat takes the dupatta which was lying on the floor and puts it on Gunjan.Gunjan cud not do anything but hug Samrat.Her tears drop down and Samrat feels his shirt wet.

S-ro mat chasmish.sab thik ho jayyega.main hoon na.

G-Samrat(sobs)

S-shhhh,roh mat.challo,ab hum jungle ke raaste se jayyenge.challo.

G(nods)

Not letting go of Samrat,the two go towards the jungle.

Sharma Villa-
Shilpa cums inside the kitchen.

MM-ummmmmmmm kya banna rahe ho??

Mayank quikla covers the pot and luks at a stunned Shilpa.

M-kuch kuch nahin maa.

MM-batao mujhe!!kya banna rahe ho???

M-surprise hain!!plzzz rehne do na,jab hum khana khayenge,tab aapko sab dikhayenge.

MM-par Mayu...

M-nahin maa,surprise hain toh surprise hi rehne de!!

MM-thikke.

M-gud.ab jao yaha se.

Just then,the bell rings and Shilpa goes to open the door.

Jungle-Sajan-
Samrat and Gunjan walk and walk and now they're in the middle of the jungle.

G-Samrat....b..bas karo,mujhse nahin hoga.

S-kya hua chashmish??

G-Samrat,main aur nahin chal sakhta.i'm sorry.

S-koi baad nei,aaj raath ke liye hum yahi rokonge.

He takes out his favourite black shawl and keeps it on the ground and makes Gunjan sit.

S-tum yahi rukko main tumhare liye hay(sorry bad hindi) lekar aati hoon.

G-Samrat!!

Gunjan quickly stands up and hugs him(MJHT violin being played as background)

G-plzz mujhe chorke mat jao.mujhe bohut darr lag raha hain,agar voh gunde phirse...nahin.plzzz mujhe chorke mat jao.

S-par soone ke liye toh??

G-main kahin bhi sojate par plzz tum mujhe chorke mat jao.mujhe umhare saath rehna hain.plzzzz
(mjht violin being played as background)

S-thikke.ab baitho aur yeh loh.

He takes out the food which the man gave him and the two eat their dinner.

Sharma Villa-
Shilpa opens the door and there outside was Nupur,Armaan and Vanraj.

N-hi aunty!!

V-namaste.

MM-hi beta,namaste.

N-papa,yeh hain Mayank ke mamma aur aunty,yeh hain mera papa aur yeh hain mera bhaiya Armaan.

A-hi aunty!

V-kya hi hi??pao chuo!!

Armaan touches her feet and Shilpa leads them to the living room.

N-Mayank kaha hain aunty???

MM-Kitchen mein hain beta,jao!usse millo!!

N-koi baad nei.

A-jao Nupz,i know you're desperate!!(laughs)

N-bhaiya!!

MM-jao!!

Nupur goes to the kitchen and sees Mayank cooking food there.

Jungle-Sajan-
Samrat and Gunjan were having there food.

S-thand lag raha hain??

G-nahin...voh..

S-mujhe jhoot mat bolo.i can see you're shivering.yeh pehenlo.

He takes out his purple sweatshirt and tells Gunjan to wear.

Gunjan luks at her injured leg when the goons pushed her and Samrat also sees it.

S-bohut dard ho rahe hain??

G(nods)

S-ek minute.

He takes out the mineral water and pours it on his hands and washes the stian from her leg.Gunjan luks at him.

S-unke himmat kaise hain ke voh tumhe chuo??agar voh bhaag nahin gayye toh main usse nahin chorte.

G(small smile)

S(blows.takes a leave and crushes it and puts it on her injured leg)

G-ow!!

S-oh i'm sooo sorry.

G-k..koi baad nei.

He ties a small peice of cloth n the part.

S-ho gayye!!

G-thnku.

S-my pleasure!!

G-Samrat...

S-hmmmm

G-mein phir se sorry bol rahi hoon kyunki yeh sab meri vajese hua,i'm sorry.

S-uffo chahsmish!!aur maine kaha na ke yeh sab tumhare vajese nahin ahin,tum aopne aapko blame kyun kar rahe ho???lagta conductor hi humme bhul gayye.mein yeh phirse keh rahe hoon.apne aapko blame mat karo.okay??

G(nods)

S-ab challo,hum fresh hoke jaonge.aaspaas ek chota lake hain.

G-thikke.

She tries to stand up but can't.

G-Samrat,tum jao,main uth nahin sakhte.thode der ke baad.....

But before she cud finish her sentence,Samrat carries her in his arms and takes her to the lake.

G-Samrat!?mujhe chodo.

S-nahin,tum chal nahin sakhte isiliye main tumhe lejate.

Gunjan puts her hands round his neck,her face buried in his chest.the two go to the lake.

Sharma Villa-Kitchen-Mayur-
Nupur enters the kitchen and sees Mayank cooking.

N-ummmmmmmmmm kya swaag hain.

M-Nupur?

N-hii!!!

M-hi.maine kaha na,ke agar tum apne baalo khola rehna doge toh bohut acche lagoge???

N(smiles)-haan Mr.Mayank Sharma!!

M-aur tumhare salwaar suit toh by god,bohut acche hain!!

N(laughs)-by god???

M-haan toh.main by god nahin keh sakhte???

N-haan par tum by god kabse kehne lagge ho??

M-jabse main tumse milli!!

N-oh!!vaise kya banna rahe hain???

M-apne aakhen band karo aur taste karo.

N-par...

M-dont worry!i'm not feeding chipkali pulao.

N(laughs)-okay.

She closes her eyes and opens her mouth.She smiles as she tastes Chicken Biryani.

N-ummmmmmmmm(shows Mayank a thumbs up)

M-kaise hain???

N-kamaal hain!!!!mujhe bohut passand aaya.loh.

She feeds Mayank a spoon too.

M-not bad!!

N-not bad??its awesome!!!!!

M-thnx.

N-challo,sab log se milte.

At that moment,the lights suddenly go.Nupur suddenly cluthes Mayank and they share a moment.

N-Mayank!!kaha ho tum??

M-yaha hoon main.ghabrao mat.

N-tum yahi ho na??

M-haan baba.ek minute,main mambatti jalati hoon.yeh pakro.

Nupur holds the candle and he lits the candle.The two were luking sooo romantic and the glowing candle in the middle.They share an eyelock for a few minutes.A strand of hair falls on her face and Mayank removes it.

M-Nupur..

N-haan.

M-main bahar electricity meter dekhti hoon.tum yahi rukkhho.

He was abt to leave when Nupur holds his hand.

N-plzzz mujhe yaha akele mat chodo.hum ek saath bahar challoge.

M-par.....

N-plzz Mayank.

He luks out and sees a storm.

MM(voice from the living room)-Mayu!!bahar mat jao

V-haan beta Nupur.tum bhi mat jao.its very dangerous.

M-par uncle,light le binna hum khana kaise khasakhte????

A-its ok,hum thode wait karte hain.

N-koi baad nei papa,bahar sirf baarish toh hain.

V-thikke,tum dono ek saath jao.

M-thikke.----

The two go out to check the meter.

Lake-Sajan-
The two reach the lake and Samrat puts Gunjan down on the grass.

G-koi baad nei,ab main chal sakhti.

S-u sure??

G(nods)

Samrat looks at her as she throws the water on her face.

G-aise kyun dekhrahe ho Samrat??

S-kuch nahin.bohut acche lag rahe ho tum.

G(blushes)

S(smiles)

G-Samrat,kya hum yaha rukh sakhte??

S-sure.phir kal subah nikalte hain.

G-haan,main apne mobile mein alarm set karte hoon.

S-haan,challo,so jao.

He sets a shawl on the grass.He lies down ans Gunjan keeps her head on his arm and hugs him tightly.

S-gunjan..

G-hmm..

S-tum chahte ho ke main Nupur ko phone karo??

G-nahin Samrat.di pareshaan honge aur vaise bhi hum kal Lonavala ponch jayyenge.

S-thikke.tum doosre ke baare main pehle sochte ho??

G(smiles)

S-issi liye toh main tumse bohut pyaar karte ho.

G-i luv u Samrat.

S-i luv u too my chashmish!!

He takes her hand and kisses it.

G(smiles)

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hey guyz!!hope this pt wasn't too short.hoe ya'll liked it.sorry Mayurians that i posted many Sajanians scenes.but since this trip was Sajan's i gave more scenes to them like i gave when Mayur when for the trip.well,more Mayur scenes cuming.bye!!take care!!!do comment plz!!!

Precap-All have a great time in Mayank's house,so did Mayur.Sajan leave to complete their trip the next morning.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool yaar very nicely written good hun keep writing..
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it was awesome..sajan moments were wonderful..hey did u forget samrat's wound on head??...waiting 4 mayur scenes...hope sajan reaches der destination soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome ynaita.....u r too good......lovd da sajan scenez.....write more n post more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing ynaiita!!! im reading it for the first time!!! i guess i gotta read it from da beginning..but the sajan scenes were absolutely fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwwwww.......i could sooo imagine those scenes!!!!!!!!!! do continue asap!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy
awesome part.
loved it.
pls continue soon.
u forgot to pm me😭
but no probs.
pm me the next time u continue.
hope u continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy
mindblowin part.
enjoyed it a lot.
pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
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heyy
awesome part!!
loved it
plzz PM me when u update next
continue soon.....
Posted: 16 years ago
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coolll update ynaita!! do cont soon!!!!

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