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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

@gr8_mms oh ur gud writer i know sweety

Edited by tina_doll - 16 years ago

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kavya

@kavya.b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

it was gud
but is this an ff or short scene?
i didn't get it

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405367

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

@kavya.b thanx short ff

@sonali.19281 thank u

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Sheena: u both are liying to me guys i am not talking to u both she left in anger mood😡

G : samrat y u lie to sheena she is nice girl jao our mano sheena ko just tell her we are talking about her then she will feel better if u talk to her dont worried about mee i am fine .

S: Fineeeeeeeeee main mana jao ga sheena ko gunjan but still ur are the one of me u alway there for me when i need sheena is cute yy i feell tht u also like mee if u do tell me coz somewere in my heart i feel same for u.

G: samrat just tell sheena how u feel about her dont keep in your love in your heart just tell her mara jasa mut karana i will alway with u samrat cozz i still love you soo much tum sheena ko kaha doo your feelingg.

S: gunjan i dont know if i feel same when i with sheena but when i with u i am i feel nicee to tell u i thing i really like u gunjan but sheena i dont feel anything .

G : go now sheena ko mano issi phela whoa kuch kar dhay.

S: theek hai byee gunjiii love you.

G: byee samrat.

Samrat left for sheena to make up with her.

plzz some one contuied

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

sweet short scene ....👏
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tina lov everybody can't make ff therefore many didn't contribute in ur ff .. when u wanted others to write short scenes.....

as for this one ... explain in ur first post that u r not writing ff ... but u r writing short scenes ... ok love .😉..... this will help everyone understand ur point or everyone will be confused...

u r sweet girl🤗