A trip will work well!sort of ff!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys d typical phase were d hero n heroine fall in luv is a night in a jungle!dis is jus a thought so im presenting it as a fanfic!
So dey ol r playin stare truth n dare...........n MAYUR get a stare.......den RV gives GUNJAN a dare 2 go farin jungle sumwat.......den she screams n SAMRAT goes lookin out for her.......DIA gets truth n she sys tht she luvs RV!!😆
GUNJAN is found but SAMRAT n she r very far lost in dense jungle den they spend d nite 2gether...n here SAMRAT starts feelin tht he has sumthin for GUNJII......he sits next 2 her n is jus lost lookin at her while she's asleep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NUPUR is cryin as she's anxious abt GUNAJN but MAYANK is upset tht NUP'S is sad n cryin so he calms her down n she hugs him tightly......he carries her 2 d tent n lays her down n is jus abt 2 leave wen she holds his hand n sys''plz mujhe akele mat chodna!''n he smiles n sits wid her in d tent.....bengi is busy flirtin wid sheena n she's impressed........😕[wats wrong wid u benji!huh dhoke baz 2 sam,,,,good good😃]
next d creatives will think i cant write so much😆 nywyz wat u think plz write i noe nothin is original in wat i wrote but i was just thinkin if this happens n creatives o mjht read this can plz take it as an idea!!!!!!!!!!hopefully sumthin gr8 happens on mjht in d upcumin episodes!!!!!fingers crossed!⭐️......thnx!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@life--dear i totally loved everything u wrote....i know all these r cliched scenes bt u know na that mjht creatives r so good that they can make even the most cliched scene look unique....but i must say that the manner in which u linked all the scenes was too good.👍🏼👏..plz dear continue it n make it an ff...u know i really don't like reading ff...till now i have only read one ff(i.e. of cute_mayur)...that's coz ff r too long...(plz..no offence to anyone) bt i swear that if u make this part an ff then i will b the first one to read it... i really like romantic scenes n when they r of both the jodis simultaneously then i love them even more...so plz dear it's a request...make it n ff...😛

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