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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Part 9- MayUr's part:

Shilpa arrives carrying a bag of groceries but she stops on her tracks when she sees Mayank hugging a girl. She looks closer, and to she surprise, the girl is...Nupur!

"Nupur...yahaan, aur yeh kapde?" She wonders to herself. From what she knew about Nupur, of course she was a bit hatke... but she wasn't the type of girl who'd dress to impress people in the wrong way.

Shilpa couldn't help but smile intently to herself. She always knew something was cooking between her son and Nupur, but she didn't think things would go soo far! Last time she checked, Nupur was still convincing Mayank to be her friend.

She took one more look at Mayank and Nupur, who were lost in each other. Shilpa didn't want to ruin the moment, so she entered the house through the back door.

Nupur: Mayank, main woh... yeh kapdi, I don't know what I was thinking-

"Sshh." He gently touched her lips with his finger. It was now or never, he needed to tell her what she was to him. He needed her to know why he was behaving the way he was with her for the past few days.

"Mayank." Was all she could manage to say. He inched his himself closer to her, not caring that people were passing by them. He held her the way nobody ever held her before. She closed her eyes, taking in his husky scent. She inched closer to him.

"BRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!!!"

Nupur's cell phone began to ring. She stepped away from him, trying to collect herself from her sudden rush of feelings. "I...I have to go."

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Anchita & Mimi, thanx for making such wonderful updates!!! luved it!! maaza agaya!!

i think this is a good idea....... to make such mjht scenes at weekends! esp. evryone together! it makes everything very much balanced! it wud be really nice if no one updates it during weekdays, only on weekends! (cause we get bored on weekends...😉) But if somone really wants to update it, then go ahead!!!

Thanks Maria, Mimi, Krish & Anchita for participating!!!! 🤗We already made 9 parts!!! Simply amazing!!! Wish to see more ppl next weekend!!!! 😳

Edited by kayamath_fan2 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

guyx can't write b/c my english is 2 bad

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sanchita

@SanchitaSehgal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kayamath_fan2
Anchita & Mimi, thanx for making such wonderful updates!!! luved it!! maaza agaya!!
i think this is a good idea....... to make such mjht scenes at weekends! esp. evryone together! it makes everything very much balanced! it wud be really nice if no one updates it during weekdays, only on weekends! (cause we get bored on weekends...😉) But if somone really wants to update it, then go ahead!!!

Thanks Maria, Mimi, Krish & Anchita for participating!!!! 🤗We already made 9 parts!!! Simply amazing!!! Wish to see more ppl next weekend!!!! 😳

firstly, its Sanchita....... nywys i luvd writing as well as reading the parts n we'll defo continue d nxt weekend.....!!!

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Paras

@bloomstellamusa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

part 10

nupur is walking away from mayank but then mayank says in a polite voice

m:nupur

nupur stops but dosn't tuirns, her mind says don't turn and heart said turn first going againist her filmy dialogue'jab samajh mein ne aaye kya karo to dil ki suno' she didn't stop and continued walking again mayank called again

m:plz don't go

this time nupur can't resist turning she turns bt she doesn't want to look in m's eyes because she was still shy bcoz of the hug her eyes were down

seeing this mayank said in a different but yet very polite tone

m:i just wanted to ask where r u going?

n:to the coleg she said in an hesistating tone

m:i jst wnted to say tht plz dnt go in these clothes i dn't wnt any boy to see u in these clothes he said in the same tone

nupur didnt courage to say anything thiz day was vry different she was going through a emotion but mysterious? she didnt know she was happy or sad she was on the top of the world or nobody in the world there was confusion on her face a tear dropped on her cheek and widout saying anything to m she went frm there and left mayank. mayank thought 'yeh tu phir se wapis wale track pe aagaya kyun jitna us se dhor bhagoon utna qareeb jata hon aur waise bhi nupur ki us khamoshi se nhi lag rha tha ke wo meri bat mane gi aur apne wo clothes change karegi shayad wo mujhse nhn krti hai pyu...' at that time he stopped even his face had no expression bt his eternal heart was happy as he was walking on clouds, (it waz bcoz of the hug😳)

m:he said yeh kaisa ehsaas hai shayad pyar hai and he cursed himself for the wrds he spoke

behind her mom was observing all tht and said chalo romeo juliet ki story shroo to hui

when mayank reached the college he sw nupur in the traditional shareefon wale clothes at tht time it felt like he was on the top of the world and then........

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Shipra

@Shipra_S

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

ok i m going to continue...
and then Samrat came there....he saw Mayank looking was looking at Nupur n at once he realized what was going inside mayank's mind...ha came to M..he said"kya hua mayank...aise yahan kyun khade ho...kahi nupurrrr....nahi..nahi..sorry...main bhool gaya tha ki baki logon ki tarah tumhare liye bhi nupur sirf tumhari classmate hai...sorry dude..."mayank then looks at sammy
M:" samrat main janta hoon ki tum jante ho ki mai nupur ke liye kya feel karta hoon...aur ise liye tum hamesha nupur ka naam mere samne lete ho...par samrat aaj main tumse ek baat kahna chahta hoon...main ab jaan gaya hoon ki mai chahe jitni bhi koshish kar loon par ab mai apne feelings ko aur nahi chupa sakta hoon....aur isliye main tumhe batana chahta hoon ki main nupur se bohot pyar karta hoon aur uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...kuch bhi..."(he was smiling at this time n his eyes were full of passion...)
S:"main janta tha aur isiliye tumse kahta tha ki tum jitna bhi chaho par pyar se door nahi ja sakte...pyar aise chiz hai jo ek bar ho jata hai to par ho he jata hai..."(sammy now gave his characteristic smile)
S:"par mayank main chahta hoon ki tum ye baat nupur ko bhi bata do...kyonki uski baton se nahi lagta hai ki vo tumse pyar karti hai....mujhe dar ki agar tumne der kar di to kahi nupur kisi aur se pyar..."
M:(he cuts sam in b/w)...samrat halanki main is "Pyar" ke department mein expert nahi hoon par mai janta hoon ki pyar zabardasti se nahi kiya jata...pyar lene ka nahi, dene ka naam hai...aur haan mujhe poora-poora vishwas hai ki ek din nupur bhi mujhse pyar karne lagegi...par firbhi agar vo mere pyar ko nahi samajh pati hai aur kisi aur se pyar karne lage to main use kabhi rokonga nahi...kyonki maine usse pyar is shart pe nahi kiya tha ki vo bhi mujhse pyar kare....aur haan samrat...main ek baat bohot acche se jaan gaya hoon ki pyar kab,kisse,kyon ho jaye koi soch nahi sakta....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main nupur se deewano ki tarah pyar karne lagoonga....jodi upar wala banata hai ur sabse accha yahi hota hai ki hum yeh faisle use par chhod de....to agar usne nupur ko mere liye nahi banaya hai to mere use chahne se kuch nahi hoga....vo akhir me apne rajkumar ki hi hogi....par haan agar usne mere liye nupur ko banaya hai to duniya ki bade se badi takat bhi hame ek hone se nahi rok sakegi..."
S:(speechless ...bt he looks at mayank in a way he has never looked at him before...he hugs him...gives him a smile n a wink of eye...n then leaves)
M:smiles...looks up in the sky(in a gesture of looking at god)...again smiles n then he too leaves..
Hope u guys loved it...plz someone continue it n remember...let the story remain romantic...no comic scenes plzzzz.....hope someone fulfils my wish...😊

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abby

@multi_aab

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

somebody plzz write sheena, gunjan nd samrat scenes...i cannot write coz i cannot think of anything

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sanchita

@SanchitaSehgal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

part 12

nupur iz thinking of d hug n smiling in herself n gunjan notices this.

she goes to nupz.

gunjan: di...

nupur;(lost in her world)

gunjan;di........dii!!!

nupz getz out of her dreamworld

gunjan: kya soch rahi ho..? aur waise mujhe tumhari help chahiye..

nupz: nahi kuch nahi..... tu bat akya hua??

gunjan: di woh....(hesitating a bit)

nupz: kya...ab bol bhi

gunjan: di woh samrat mujhse gussa ho gaya hai plz batao na ki main usse kaise manau... tum to yeh sab me expert hona aur waise bhi tumhe mayank ko srry bolne ki practise hogayi hai..

nupz after hearing mayank's name again goes in her dreamworld😉

gunjan: di.... batao na

diii!!! itna kya soch rahi ho??
nupz: kuch nahi 😕

just then nupur sees mayank (but mayank doesnt )

nupz: (out of embarresment😳) gunjan main tujhe baad me milti hu

gunjan: di....

nupz walks away

gunjan sees mayank n thinks nupz went away bcoz of mayank 😃

gunajn: hi maynk...

mayank: oh hi gunjan.... (looks around fr nupz)

gunjan: (in a teasing way)di ko dhund rahe ho??

mayank : uh... nahin to waise voh hai kaha??

gunjan smiles...😊😛

gunjan : mujhe to laga ki voh tumhare saath hogi anyways shayad voh library gayi hai.... umm main bhi vahi jaa rahi hu chaho toh saath chal sakte hai

gunjan n mayank walk towards the library...

in the meanwhile nupur is also going to the library wen she meets samrat....

nupz: hi samrat

sam: oh hi nupurrr...

nupz:tum aur library ki taraf.... tumhari tabyat to theek hai na...??

ya phir gunajn se milne....

sam: (cutting off) main to canteen ja raha tha ab yeh keedon ka jaal beech me aa gaya to main kya karu

nupz" keedon ka jaal?????

sam: ha... par kitaabi keedon ka..

sam n nupz::😆😆😆

nupz: samrat tum bhi na...

in the meanwhile

gunjan n mayank see nupur n samrat together

maynk: yeh samrat mujhe pyar ke baare me bolta rehta hi aur yaha meri girlfrend par line maar raha hai....😡😡

gunjan(on hearing this): kyaaaa????????😕😕😕

tum aur di.....

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Paras

@bloomstellamusa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

part 13

gunjan and mayank's scene:

gunjan:kya

mayank:(confused and hesistates while talking

)woh mein keh rha tha ke....ke..hn woh samrat har kisi ko pyar ka lecture deta hai kya us ne apni thousand gf's mein kisi se true love kia hai? shayad nahin

and he gunjan in her previous thoughts but then shooks her head and says

"samrat is only my friend"

meanwhile mayank is suspicious tht is there some chakar b/w s and n was samrat indicating tht (frm their last conversation) tht nupur has might fallen in love wid samrat and lost in his own his own thoughts he bunked into nupur and then both had a eyelock but then they shook thier heads and hen both's eyes were down and both said at once"i...am sorry"and then both gave a little smile and then m said:pehle tum bolo

n:wah aaj tum pehle bar mujhe official permission de rhe ho mein is mauke ko hath se phislbne nhn dongi woh drasal i am sorry mein tumhe kuch khe hi tumhare ghar se wapis chali aye

m:no i m sorry mein tumhe dukhi kia and then cj cameand said "hey guys tum donon kahan ja rhe the":

m:arey mein to bhool hi gya mujhe lib rary jana hai bye nupur

n:tum jao mein bhi yaheen aa rhi thi

The Library :

m was sitting on the chair lost in the world of books when suddenkly nupur came nupur unlikely had no expession on her face she was lost in the thoughts of the hug she came across a stand fan and nupurs open were flying and she was looking very beautiful and mayank again was lost in her thoughts...........