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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: &anchita

firstly, its Sanchita....... nywys i luvd writing as well as reading the parts n we'll defo continue d nxt weekend.....!!!

Ohh...im so sorry, Sanchita!!😳 Yup, cant wait for next weekend either!! 😛

Edited by kayamath_fan2 - 16 years ago

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sanchita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Part 14

n: maynk?......mayank??? main tumse baat kar rahi hu aise kya dekh rahe ho...??

m: haan..

n: kya haan?

m: kuch nahi.... aao baitho

nupur sits down n is quite surprised at his sweet gesture

just then gunjan cums there

g: hi di, hi samr.. i mean mayank {actlly i just typed sam by mistake but then thot its ok}

maynk n nupur luk at gunjan wid surprised eyes...

g: galti ho gayi.. insaano se hi hoti hai aur di tum to aise gussa ho rahi ho jaise maine pata nahi kya kar diya...

n: arre, mujhe samrat ke kuch kaam tha main abhi aati

nupur leaves

m: yeh nupur ko samrat se kya kaam hai??(feels jealous)

g: pata nahi

m: main abhi aata hu

mayank follows nupur

nupur goes to the canteen

s: hi nupur

dia, anny, benji n jacko r also sittin there

n: hi guyz...by god!! mujhe itni pyas lag rahi hai napehle kuch pi kar aati hu

nupur orders a chocolate milkshake

chinu: chocolate milkshake?? mayank ko cm bilkul pasand nahi

n(surprised): ???

haan theek hai kuch aur de do.. is waqt itni pyas lag rahi hai ki kuch bhi pilungi

mayank sees this n smiles to himself...

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*pyar*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

PART :15

Samrat is at canteenwith nurpur , dia and other then suddenly samrat call ring

samrat pick the call

s: hello

g: hi samrat

s: kia hoa

g: kia tum ish waqt music room mai asaktay ho

s: kia hoa

g: tum ahoo to

s: ok

then samrat go towards music room and as he enter the room he shoked to see

samrat find sorry cards every well

samrat read a cards: yeh meray us dost k liyay jisnay mujhay hasna sikhaya . jo her waqt meray sath tha , jab jab mujhay kisi ki zarorat parhi tab tab tum meray sath thay

samrat tumhari dosti meray liyay bohot special hai aur ishay mai khoona nahin chati

ajj mera dost zara sa udas hai qk ajj mainay uskay sath movie dehnay nahin ghai aur mai apnay dpst ko sorry kehna chati hoon

kia mera dost mujhay maaf keray ga

s: wow chasmis samrat kay liya surprise , per tum ho kahan

g: tumharay peechay . to kia ab samrat nay mujhay maaf kia

s: kia samrat khud say naraz ho sakta hai . tum say naraz hinay ka mutlub khud say naraz hona .

samrat come close to gunjhan and said thanks in her ears .thaks 4 doing all this

samrat hug gunjhan then samrat hold gunjhan hand and said come with me

g: samrat where we are going

s: aik surprise tum nay mujhay dia and now its my turn to give u one surprise

samrat took gunjhan to his home

gunjhan: why u took me here. u want to take me for movie na

samrat : yes but I know taht u will never feel comfotable in cinema so i tought U to take here . we can celebrate hee too na

gunjhan : whu not . so whts a plan

samrat: bus tum dekthay raho ajj ka din tumharay liyay kitna special hota hai

Edited by *pyar* - 16 years ago

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Paras

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

part 16

mayur scene

mayank feels good to knw tht n cares abt her likes and dislikes he was lost in his thoughts when nupur came

n;mayank? kahan khoe hoe ho?

m:kuch nhn

n:mayank tum canteen mein? library mein sari kitaabein khatam hogain kya. koi bari baat nhn tum hamesha library mein kitaabein parhte ho ke zaahir si baat hai ke library mein koi kitaab parhne kliye bachi hi nhn hogi😆

m:nhn aisi bat nhn waise tumne samrat se baat krli?

n:are acha yad dilaya she looks around and doesn't finds samrat and says

n:lagta hai woh chala gya kher mein use dhondhne jati hn bye she goes but stops when she finds her dupatta stuck in somthng she thought mayank had done it but when she turns she find it stuck in his watch she comes to free her veil but she faces difficulty mayank puts his hands near her to help her nupur sees m in surprise they hv a eye lock but suddenly dia steps in n amd m seeing dia get embarrased and nupur quickly frees her veil and mayank says:ok...bye..

d:hi nupur sees her dress and says tumne apne kapre kyun badal diye ghar se toh mere kapre pehan ke nikli thi ? tight the kya?

n:nhn woh......woh darasal mein...woh...

d:kher choro waise agar tum unhe pehan ke aati to har kisi ki nigah tum pe hoti hr koi tumhari tareef krte nhn takhta

n rems wht mayank had said abt her dress and says to herself sevaaey ek ke

d:kia tumne kuch bola?

n:nhn acha mein chalti hn

chintoo:nupur ji aapka juice but she doesn't stops she thinks mayank is odd woh alag hai and wonders why?

then she comes across a poster which said one who is the most different is the most special in our life and she stops and then..............

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shama

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

all the parts are wonderful yaar plz continue coz i'm very bad in writing

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

PART 17-MAYUR SCENE
...and then she thinks of Mayank...she starts thinking about the days they had spent in the jungle,good time lodge and then chunky mishra's house....but suddenly the Big Fight they had had after the TP comes in her mind...so suddenly she jerks her head and says to herself "nupur..ye tu kya soch rahi thi...Mayank sirf tera dost hai...aur abhi tak toh vo tujhe apna dost manta bhi nahi hai kyonki tune ussse sach chupa ke use bohot bada dhoka diya tha....par nupur ab tujhe mayank ko manana hoga....par pata nahi kyon mayank aaj kal kuch badla hua sa lag raha hai...halanki usne holi vale din tujhe sorry bol diya tha par agle din se toh vo phir pehle jaisa ho gaya tha...toh phir aajkal uska behaviour mere taraf itna badla hua sa kyon ho gaya hai"
Just then a girl comes and congrats Nupur for becoming the main lead in the play...the girl says to nupur ki college mein koi bhi yeh believe nahi kar pa raha hai ki M ne play mein part lene ke liye haan keh diya hai aur koi bhi yeh nahi janta ki is type ke romantic play ko mayank kaise kar payega...
Just then Mayank comes there...he has heard what that girl was saying to nupur..so he says to that girl.."Main janta hoon ki kisi bhi type ke character ko nibhane ke liye, pehle use feel karna zaroori hota hai...aur main tumhe bata doon ki main apne role ko itne acche se nibhaunga ki shayad tum log yeh bhi na samajh pao ki main acting kar raha tha ya phir..."after this he gives his cunning smile and goes from there..but before going he looks into Nupu's eyes to see her reaction to what he just said....Nupur was all confused...then M smiles and goes from there...
the girl says"pata nahi kabhi-kabhi Mayank aise batein karta hai jo hum jasi normal logon ke samajne ke bahar hoon"😆
Nupur gives a little smile to that girl and then both of them say "bye" and the girl goes from there...
[TODAY'S COLLEGE HAS ENDED AS NOW IT'S EVENING]
Nupur is with Gunjan and Samrat...they r just about to leave for home...
Samrat:- "Gunjan..bohot dino se mere bike ko tumhare darshan nahe hue..vo timhe bohot miss kar rahi hai...so my highness if u don't mind kya aaj aap mere bike ki murad poore kar sakti hain"
G-she smiles and is shy..she looks at Nupur in a manner of asking for permission..
N:-"arre Gunjan...to mere taraf kya dekh rahe hai...mai koi tujhe mana karoonge..aur waise bhi apne doston ki baaton ko nahi tala jata...smarat to gunjan ko apne bike se ghar drop kar de...main auto se ajaunge..."
G:"thankyou di,tum best ho"
N:"vo to main hoon"
{all three of them start laughing}
[guys i will continue from here in the very next post coz i think it's getting too long....so just drag your cursor down to read further]

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART 17-MAYUR(CONTINUED)
...then Samrat and Gunajn say bye to Nupur and then go....
N:"chalo, main chalke auto dhoond leti hoon"
Just then Mayank comes there...
M:-"Nupur"
N:-she turns around and sees M standing behind her..."Mayank...kya hua...abhi tak ghar nahe gaye...kuch kaam tha kya?"
M:-"nahi..vo main ghar ja hi raha tha par tum dikh gaye to socha ki baat kar loon..."
N:"haan M main bhi ghar he ja rahi thi...vo actually Gunjan Samrat ke saath chale gaye toh main bas auto dhoondhne he jaa rahi the..."
M: thank god...is Samrat ne Nupur ka peecha toh choda...
N:" kya hua M...kya sochne lage?"
M: nahe vo...kuch nahi....chalo mein tumhare bahar tak chala chalta hoon.."
N:" dheek hai, chalo.."
just then they were about to leave Nupur realises that she has left her book in the class...so she says "M i m sorry lekin main apne book class mein bhool gaye hoon....tum 2 minutes ruko main abhi aate hoon"
M: says to himself "is ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta.." then he says to N "Nupur main bhi chalta hoon tumhare help karne ke liye"
both of them go to the class room and find that the lights are all off as every one had left..
N:" mayank..plz kya tum lights switch on kar sakte ho..mujhe andhere se bohot dar lagta hai..."
M:" nupur tum mere saath andar chalo kyunki main tumhara yeh dar door karna chahta hoon...daro mat main hoon tumhare saath"
Nupur then holds Mayank's hand tightly and enter the room with him...he then switch on the lights...but Nupur could not find her book there...so she starts searching for it...and the next day they had a major test which was of the same subject of which that book was...
N:-she starts panicking...she says "Mayank ab main test ke liye kaise padhoonge...us book mein mere saare notes the.." she then starts crying..
M:" nupur...nupur..dekho roo mat...tum mere notes se padh lena...main tumhare help kar doonga"
N:" lekin mayank tumhe bhi toh kal test dena hai....toh tum kaise padho ge.."
M: now he starts thinking ki nupur keh toh sahe rahe hai...then suddenly one idea comes to his mind although he felt ki aise ho nahi sakta..par koi aur option na hone ke karad he tells that idea to nupur..although very hesitatingly....
(rest is continued in next post)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: armaanbasket
i wont waste my time soo much..i will just do dat throw sajan ouit of mjht n bring nice actors..i will give footage 2 mayur n dia...n others who r more n more much n much better dan dem...well no offence but m kinda bore wid sajan....no development in mayur story...evrytime he is escaping frm nupur...why every week we see dis..bring sumthing new..i will develop feelings frm nupur also..

hey guys i was just going to continue my post on Mayur(i.e. part 17) but suddenly i saw this reply posted by some "armanbasket" n it's soo ridiculous...so whoever u r "armanbasket" let me tell u that plz read the post's title properly before giving any reply....this post ain't meant to vent out our frustration...it's a post where we write imaginary stories about our fav. couple...so ur reply looks sooooo wierd here....secondly, u have no right to use such harsh words for sajan...i too m a Mayurian but i very well know that what is meant by the term "giving respect"...if u can't respect some other jodi then u have no right to thrash them...and stop misusing this forum or else ur account will b seized by the mods😡

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: krishmjht

hey guys i was just going to continue my post on Mayur(i.e. part 17) but suddenly i saw this reply posted by some "armanbasket" n it's soo ridiculous...so whoever u r "armanbasket" let me tell u that plz read the post's title properly before giving any reply....this post ain't meant to vent out our frustration...it's a post where we write imaginary stories about our fav. couple...so ur reply looks sooooo wierd here....secondly, u have no right to use such harsh words for sajan...i too m a Mayurian but i very well know that what is meant by the term "giving respect"...if u can't respect some other jodi then u have no right to thrash them...and stop misusing this forum or else ur account will b seized by the mods😡

yeah, Krish is rite...Please read the topic before u make assumptions....! This topic was created because many write FF/mjht scenes, but its more fun if we do it together! So, i really dont see the sense of ur post. This is a FF, and not a complain abt the story track or so....!😊