*JAB THEY MET* Updated Part 3 on pg.7 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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title cud be...a rocking lyf......or mayb.....jab they met????...........wotsay???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushali16

title cud be...a rocking lyf......or mayb.....jab they met????...........wotsay???

SUPERB!!!!! yep...it is gonna be Jab They Met!!!!! Thanks khushali....tum ne mujhe bahut khush kardiya!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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go ahead yaar me waiting continue asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 thougt......

plz do it.................
and pm me when u start it...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG.......i loved the intro........
continue asap......really unique concept!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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JAB THEY MET!!!
.....and at the end of the day when I close my eyes to thank god for the sweet joys of life.....my heart replays the events of the day...JAB WE MET....and a smile magically breaks upon my lips and erases any tears, any pain, any failures my day had held.....and only you remain..........
PART 1- HUM DONO HAI ALAG ALAG.....
SETBACK: In a luxurious bungalow on elphinstone road,Mumbai the lights of a room on the first floor are still on.......
"hey di! here...your cold coffee" Gunjan handed over the coffee mug to Nupur who was glued to the TV. Gunjan smiled and sat next to her sister....fondly gazing at her.
"Answer kariye kuch sawaal and win a date with Samraat-the king of hearts!" the Tv was blaring.
Nupur looked at Gunjan excitedly..."Main hissa lena chahti hoon...ladka bahut cute hai....kya pata agar mujhe mil jaye?" Gunjan hugged her sister..."Di!!!! Aap sportstars ko chodkar rockstars ke peeche kab se bhaagne lage?"
"tu pagal hain....main bhala rockstars ke peeche kyun bhagungi...itne bure din bhi nahi aaye hai...Sports toh mera religion hai aur...." Nupur protested. Gunjan completed her sentence "...aur Fabregas tera bhagawan!"
"Arre wah! Babaji tujh pe meherbaan hokar tujhko akal akhir de hi diya...." Nupur joked. She finished the coffee and got up from the lounge where she had been lazing about. "Main chali....samrat...main aa rahi hoon!" she dreamily walked to her laptop and neatly flipped it open and began her work. Gunjan sighed helplessly "Babaji aap di ke liye ek aacha handsome naujavan bhej dijeeye joh isse control mein rakh payega...." She turned to the TV where one of Samrat's concert was being retelecasted...
He was damn handsome ....Gunjan agreed and his eyes were romantic.....his smile was extra cute and ....Gunjan uneasily shifted on the chaise lounge...."his voice had some unique magic that strikes the innermost chords of my heart...." she thought.
The song drowned her....its soft music and the extra-romantic depiction of it ......and to top it Samrat's baritone cascading right from the TV and flowing right into her heart....
Kaisi Hai Yeh Rut Ke Jis Mein
Phool Ban Ke Dil Khile
Ghul Rahen Hai Rang Sare
Ghul Rahe Hai Khushbuve
Kaisi Hai Yeh Rut Ke Jis Mein
Phool Ban Ke Dil Khile
Ghul Rahen Hai Rang Sare
Ghul Rahe Hai Khushbuve
Chandni Jharne Ghatayen
Geet Baarish Titliyaan
Hum Pe Ho Gaye Hai Sab Maherbaan
Kaisi Hai Yeh Rut Ke Jis Mein
Phool Ban Ke Dil Khile
Dekho Nadi Ke Kinare
Panchi Pukare Kisi Panchi Ko
Dehko Yeh Jo Nadi Hai Milne Chali Hai
Sagar Hi Ko
Yeh Pyaar Ka Hi Sara Hai Caravan
Kaisi Hai Yeh Rut Ke Jis Mein
Phool Ban Ke Dil Khile
Kaise Kisi Ko Batayen
Kaise Yeh Samjaayen Kya Pyaar Hai
Is Mein Bandhan Nahin Hai
Aur Na Koyi Bhi Deewaar Hai
Suno Pyaar Ki Nirali Hai Daastaan
Kaisi Hai Yeh Rut Ke Jis Mein
Phool Ban Ke Dil Khile
Ghul Rahen Hai Rang Sare
Ghul Rahe Hai Khushbuve
Chandni Jharne Ghatayen
Geet Baarish Titliyaan
Hum Pe Ho Gaye Hai Sab Maherbaan
Kaisi Hai Yeh Rut Ke Jis Mein
Phool Ban Ke Dil Khile
(this is song from thr movie dil chahta hai)
Gunjan switched off the TV...this man's voice would drive her crazy!!!!! "Good night di!" she kissed nupur and went to her bed...the thought of samrat's voice and magical presence in her heart haunting her.
Nupur rubbed her eyes and peered at the screen...
Your name-????
"Nupur Bhushan" she typed happily.
"DOB-?" "13th october 1986"
"Address-
She yawned widely and hurriedly typed away resolving to finish the entry and then only sleep.
After 30 more minutes of scratching her head and typing sensible answers she stared at the form it read-
Your name-Nupur Bhushan
DOB- 13th october 1986
Address-Elphinstone Road, Mumbai
Your Idol- Fabregas
Your religion-sports
One person you wanna lock in the room and throw away the keys?-
Discribe yourself in 3 sentance?- chulbuli,sporty and lively
Dream Boy/Girl?- Samrat
What are some words or phrases you use most?- By god!!!!
What are your hobbies?- playing soccer, watching TV and listening to music
What would be the one thing you'd change about yourself?- I wish I could sing as well as Samrat....I can only manage to bring out a few hoarse grunts....
What is your deepest fear?- main darti-warti nahi hoon.....punjab di kudi hoon!!!
If you could meet one person, dead or alive, who would it be?- SAMRAT....isiliye toh is event mein hissa le rahi hoon!
What is your favorite thing to wear?- kapde....waise tum pehne ke liye patte pasand hai kya?
What's your favorite food?- panipuri!
Fav. actor and actress- Shahid and Kareena
Favorite 2Songs two lines?- Jaise bhi chalta hai koi chakkar chalao..
meri shaadi karvao meri shadi karvao....
If you give another chance to live ur life..what will you do? Be born as a soccer ball....kitne wunnerful players ke pairo ki chumma le sakungi main!!!! haila...life banjayegi!
If you are alone in Island and you have only one partner to choose..to whom you choose ,why? Fabregas...taaki main uske saath soccer khel sakungi....
If you can invisible tell wat first naughty things u do?- visit the locker room of international soccer players...kya mast sight hogi!!!!!
Your Romatic ideas/expectation about Love!-Pyaar rab hai.....
How would you expect to spend your date with Samrat-umm.... chalo pehle hum soccer ground ko jayenge aur ek mathc kehlenge,phir hum...ek movie dekhne jayenge....aur raat ko dhaabe mein khaana khaenge.....mazaa aa jayega!!!!
Nupur frowned....she suddenly felt it silly to participate in this event...but she refused to cancel off the entry too....after all she had put in so much effort to answer all those questions....
A sudden brainwave gripped her and she erased the "Nupur" and wrote "Gunjan" instead...."Perfect!" she smiled and mailed it to the hosts of the event.
Well, was that part enjoyable?? Do you reckon I should make the parts longer???
And yah I am starving for comments and suggestion are most welcome
Thank You
Please enjoy
Love
Pallavi!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: livelygal

SUPERB!!!!! yep...it is gonna be Jab They Met!!!!! Thanks khushali....tum ne mujhe bahut khush kardiya!!!

ohhhhh.....me too happy u took ma suggested title😃......haan haan......mein sabko khush karti hoon........lolz😆😆😆
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee..........ur soooooooo good.......kaise hai yeh rut ki jisme lively gal ek ff likhe,khil gaye hai humaare chehre,khil gaye hai khusbooein😆.......nice update.....i lovd it.....pls pm me wen u update next.........byeeeee⭐️
Edited by khushali16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow cool gud awesome yaar
keep it going
love tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow reallt nice plss cntinue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is really interesting!!

Great first part Pallavi!
Can't wait until they finally meet!
The length was good yaar...but its up to you if you want to make it longer...i wouldn't mind though! hehe...
Thanks for the PM and do continue soon...!
Is Mayank gonna be introduced soon...?
Keep it up!
Nidhi
P.S I tried to add smilies but the page kept hanging. lol. Writing this out for the third time...!

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