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Here is an story.
Plez comment how u think this story is.
Arjun: Mujhe yahan par behet ke shabsi katni parahe hai. Rati kya kar rahi hai?
Rati: Mein dua mange rahi hoon. Ke ab hum jhali se college chal hi gaye.
Mohit: Yehhhhh, Rati wapis aa rahi hai.
Navina: Par kyun? Rati plez wapis nahi aye.
Jas: Par kyun nahi? Woh agar aye gi tou khusyan aye gi.
Sanaya: I am cofused wat's going on?
Mohit: Sanaya is always confused. Pehli daffa mein confused hogaye hoon.
Abhi: I m also confused tum mere pass mein kyun behatein ho?
Jas: Dude, why is everyone confused? Since my teeth broke ho chuka hai, I can hardly laugh.
Arjun: Your teeth is broken, but mere tou saye salamat hai. hahahahahahahah woh tou dekho.....
Rati: Tumhe agar Jas pe hasna hai tou hasso, par mere pe nahi, Samje?
Abhi: Rati tou bollo ek new line learn karre, werna loog kya kahe ge?
Mohit: Don't worry, Rai rocks. Hey, I have just made alliteration, "R" "R".
Arjun: Yeh bartan mein Jas se dulwayoon ga.
Sanaya: I m back, Par mein jahan kya kar rahi hoon?
Arjun: Mujhe pyas lag rahi hai.
Arjun: Mein iss jag mein se pani pi raha hoon.
Rati: Wow so much pani.
Sanaya: I waz wondering the same.
Jas: Par pani pena ahce baat hai na?
Mohit: Laagta hai ab mujhe Sanaya ka demaag nahi paakane ki zurwat hai, Jas is there.
Jas: Im cold.
Sanaya: Woh tou dikraha hai.
Rati: I have to save Sanaya.
Sanaya: Yehhhhhhhhh Rati is coming to save me.
Rati: Sorry I have to hide from Jas too.
Sanaya: I knew it she wouldn't come.
Mohit: I am going to cry like a cry baby now.
Sanaya: Strange.
Mohit: Now give me chusne wali nipil.
Navina: Everything is getting weird here.
Rati: Here is my Arjun to pretect me from Jas.
Arjun: Unfornaltly I cant save u from that Jas. I will get pagal toooooo.
Rati: Agar Arjun nahi bacha ee ga tou koi aur sahe.
Rati: Yeh pahal wan Bhi sahab.
Rati: That bhi sahab dissapear.
Abhi: Jo bhi button daba ke Uss Bhi sahab ko dhunde ga woh rati ka
hero.
Arjun: I wonder kyun Dhunde ga.
Rati: Chup, koi tou dhun lega.
Arjun: Don't try to scare me I am already scare of Navina and then u too?
Mohit: Haha!!!! I have 2 tell Navina.
Sanaya: whoever drew this piucture is such a ad drawer.
Mohit: There is something on your shirt.
Guy: Thanks
Sanaya: What is he doing???
Jas: I don't know. Where is Rati????
Jas: Uss Arjun ke saat dance karahi hai kya???
Mohit: Why does Jas care about Rati???
Rati: I feel like sleeping.
Jas: Just look at Rati.
Arjun: Ey Bhagwan Jas and Rati tou Akal de do.
Abhi: I want Mohit's Sanaya.

Rati: What is Arjun thinking now?

Rati: Atleast he is behind me.
Rati: I thought u were behind me.
Jas: Laloo Parsad ke chocolate Rati ke liye.
Part 2
Here my story continues.................................
Sanaya: Look wat a beautiful Rainbow.
Mohit: Yeah, but where is it? It's raining outside.
Arjun: I luv when Sanaya smiles.
Rati: Haan, tum tou Sanaya pe fida ho na?
Arjun: Nahi, tumhe kya problem hai?
Rati: Abhi tou kuch problem nahi hai meri.
Rati: Par Mohit ki hassi kitni ache hai na!
Mohit: Sanaya is finally my Valentine. But I wanted Rati.
Sanaya: Mohit still like Rati. Well I want Arjun.
Sanaya: I don't care I am happy.
Rati: How do I look?
Rati: No I like this dress way better. It match with my laugh.
Arjun: I am confused how is Rati looking so cute.
Arjun: I think she even took Dance classes.
Sorry I have to go I will continue 1 hour later, I god I have such a good story in my head just wait. Ok
Part 3
Here......................................

Sanaya: Hey, Arjun I know how to dance too. Look I am in heaven.
Mohit: Och, my hand I won't be able to hold you like this anymore.
Sanaya: I can even dance like a moreni.

Arjun I did'nt took dance class, but I learned how to swing myself.
Arjun; Rati I like u.
Rati: Wat did u say? I am cold.

Rati: Is this a kissing scene.
Arjun: I don't know. I.........................
Rati: Arjun, no Sanaya..........let me change my clothes I am going.
Rati: Hey, Lets play a beauty game.
Rati: How do I look?
Rati: No I think I look better here.
Tell Me I am waiting, at the door.
I love this picture because it has someone special to me, and it's me!!!!!!!!!!!
Arjun: Wow Rati look's so cute. Who's next?
Mohit: I have to save this flower.
Abhi: Which Picture Rati looks the cutest?
Navina: Ufffffffffffffff, Wat is going on? Rati??????????? Arjun likes her pictures, I have to make up
a plan.
Rati: What is going on??? Why did u ask that question? Well let me tell u that we r playing a beauty contest.
Rati: I have to find more cute pics of mine.
Rati: I see one rihgt in that FLAME over there.
Arjun: Hahahahah, it not a flame but FLAME but a FRAME.
Arjun: Laktah hai, Rati tou ab english lesson ki zurwat hai,
but it will problably take 500 million years.
Arjun: Rati's mind in this small.
Rati: Arjun is so wrong.
Rati: Och, I got hurt by my head.
Sanaya: It's ok just sit DOWM.
Rati: No but intead i'll dance.
Mohit: Arjun Rati o english sicaye, aur mein Sanaya ko.
Rati: Say cheez Arjun.
To be continue.
Part 4
Here it continues.......................
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Mohit: It's fine here, away from Jas.
Jas: It's fine here with me. I am with 2 beautiful ladies here.
Sanaya: Jab beh Jas kissi ladki ke saath hota hai, mujhe laktah hai usse tappar pitne wala hai.
Mohit: Don't worry Sanaya, aaj meine uska tappar kaliya.
Rati: Kya mujhe yeh loog pagal khane mein bhajraha hai?
Sanaya: Mujhe Arjun ko batana parega ke, Rati pagal khane mein hai.
Navina: It's ok, relax.
Arjun: I knew it Rati pagal khane mein belong karti hai.
Sanaya: Arjun come on, lets find a way top get her out.
Arjun: I have a plan.
Rati: I m confused, does everyone think I am in the pagal khane?I was only kidding.
Navina: Where r u going?
Sanaya: Pagal khane mein.
Navina: Kya ab tumhe beh waha jane ki zurwat hai???
Mohit: No way, Sanaya is smart.
Rati: Hey Arjun dissapear.
Rati: I will dance with Uday bhaya.
Jas: So sweet of u, but I m no ur bhaya, I m Jas.
Jas: And I am strong too.
Sanaya: hahahahah, sorry can't control.
Rati: Lets dance in Kajrare.
Mohit: No, lets dance in Morrine bagama bole adi raat mein, chun an chun curiya. chun an chun curiya. kanak.............
Sanaya: Mohit is so funny.
Rati: I even looked back of me, Arjun isn't here.
A
Arjun: I m here dancing with Sanaya,
Sanaya: U dance fab. Arjun.
Mohit: Oh yah, now see me dancing.
Sanaya: oyoooo, I think my ankel broke.
Arjun: hahahahhah, sorry that sounded like an owl.
Arjun: It's holi, I have to hide myself from Rati and Jas.
Rati: Tou abb hum sab Police Chore khalrahe hai?
Arjun: Oh god, she is here.
Rati: Tum Police Chore khalna chahate ho?
Arjun: Chore my foot.
Sanaya: Chooo, my wig is getting off.
Rati: haaaaaaaaaaa.
Arjun: What kind of noise waz that?
Rati: Whenever I fell I make that noise.
Arjun: ( In his mind) She looks beautiful.
Mohit: Abb mein Arjun ko bhang pila un ga.
To be continue.
Sorry I have to go.
Part 5
Here is the rest.................
Arjun: U know drinks kahan hai.
Mohit: here.
Arjun: Thanks.(he drinks it)
Then the song plays
This one.
Jas: This is the song my mom played when I was a baby, when ever I cried my mom plays this song and I stop crying.
Jas: Abb hum iss song pe dance karahe hai.
Mohit: I am about to laugh so badly I swear.
Rati: Uday bahaya so pagal wala shock laagaya hai. Runnnnn
Mohit: We r out of here.
Sanaya: Go home with Arjun.
Rati: Par Arjun ne bhang pili hai.
Arjun: U look preety.
Rati: I think abb mein pagal khane asali mein gane wali hoon,,
Arjun: Really?????? Mein beh chalu ga.
Rati: No Arjun.
Arjun: Tum mujhe nahi batao kya mujhe kya karna hai.
Rati: Ok.
Mayu's Mom: Lagta hai, Arjun ne bhang pili hai.
Rati: Aur Uday bahaya pagal hogaye hai.
Mayu's Mom: Rati???? Jas is a nice guy.
Navina: Im going home.
Navina: Thank god.
Jas: Let me take a picture.
Aaaaaa Bhoot Bahgo.
Rati: hahaha. Bhoot??
Arjun: I think the bhoot is Rati.
Rati: What did u say?
Arjun: Kuch nahi.
I have to go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 6
Rati: I am bored. Anyone got anything better to do?
Mohit: I do lets play KhicnChoti.
Apps: Wat how do u play that?
Mohit: U have to grab someones choti like this and pull it.
Mohit: Sanaya don't play this game.
Sanaya: Why?????
CJ: because ur wig is going to come off.
Jas: Then u have to hide ur face like this.
CJ: Yeah watever.
Rati: Arjun can we play this game? Plus I am all wet.
Arjun: Wat??????????????
Arjun: U know wat Rati? , I thought u and Jas waz the only one need to go in the pagal khane, but now I think also Mo...............
Sanaya: It raining Diamonds outside.
Arjun: soory now I think Sanaya is gone too.
Rati: Tumne Sanaya ke bare mein kya bola?
Arjun: Oh god she is back.
Mohit: Tumhe driving sikkni hai kya?
Sanaya: I only want to look good in the camera.
Mohit: U look good.
Navina: Iknow where is Arjun?
Mohit: Tumhe Arjun ki kya zurwat hai?
Navina: Get off me. Dodo!!!!!!!!!!!
Arjun: Sab mere piche kyun pare hai?
Rati: Relax. It ok mama is home. I pretend to be ur sister.
Arjun: Agar Rati meri sister hai tou mein uska brother. Par Rati tou meri herion hai and mein uska hero.
Rati: Wat is he saying?
Ciroji: U look beautiful.
Rati: Thanks.
Arjun: Excuse me. I have to find Sanaya.
Ciroji: Ye Sanaya kyun hai?
Rati: My friend.
Ciroji: Arjun looks better than Sanaya?
Rati: Ok . Mein abhi bathroom mein jake poot poot ke hasne wali hoon.
Jas: I want to see Rati laugh.
Navina: dodo???????
Mohit: Par Rati is taken.
Jas: I though on Sunday me and rati is going to go on fishing.
Arjun: don't fight over Rati.
Abhi: I think I heard Arjun saying that.
Mohit: Let me hear.
Sanaya: Guys u r talking to me not Arjun.
Abhi: AAAAChuuuu
Mohit: Wat??????????????
Arjun: Tum yahan par chup chap behat jau.
Rati: Tum kyun hote ho?
Arjun: Phir raat hogayi. Lets eat icecream
Rati: how sweet par Arjun I think Raat hameshha hoti hai.
Rati: Pani pina hai mujhe.
Arjun: it look like Rati ko pyaas lagi hai.
To be continue.
Part 7

Thanx and here it continues...........................

Jas: Rati ke liye yooooo wala rose.
Arjun: Aab tou suba ho gayi hai, laagta hai Rati ke liye pani dhood na hi pare ga.
Arjun: Tum aaj aachi laag rahi ho.
Rati: Thanx par tumhara mat lab kya hai AAJ?
Sanaya: Arjun ka mat lab hai "Tum kabhi nahi aachi laag ti ho"
Arjun: Tum jealous ho kya?
Sanaya: Nope.
Then all of the sudden Sanaya starts singing.
Sanaya: Na hai Rati ko aachi kehna, na usse gandi khena, Tum tou bas mujhe aachi kehna, Tumse Rati jati hai, mujhe pata chal ta hai Rati is gone, Tumse tumse hi..............aaaaaaaaaaaaa.
Arjun: I think tum yeh AAAAAAAAAAAAA bohat kheen rahi ho.
Mohit: Rati ke liye yeh rose.
Sanaya: Well good luck finding watever u were finding.
Arjun: I have to hurry up finding pani. Or Rati is gonna kill me.
Then Arjun hears something.
It's Mohit singing.
Mohit: aaaaaa jane ja, aaaa jane ja a mere hoons jawa jawa jawa teri liye phone kano mein laag gaye oh zalim aaa ja na......................nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Navina: nahhn nahhn kartey pyarrr ussi se kaargaye kaargaye kaargaye karna tah no no par yes yes kargaye........ kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
CJ: kabo thar aa aa aa kabo thar aa aa aa , pehli bar ka kissa humne tou sonwa.wwwwwwwwwwwwww.
Mohit: cheater W se koi song start nahi hota.
Sanaya: Wala wala wala wala yeh GATE jhoola jhool ne wala hai. HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Rati: tou hum antaxshari chaal rahe teh?
Sanaya: No di we were playing PehkFlower.
Rati: Agar koi mujhe flower pekhe tou kitna mazza aa e ga.
Arjun: E bhaag wan koi meri help karde.
Navina: Finally Arjun need my help now.
Rati: I m scared aab Arjun ka kya hone wala hia.
Sanaya: Yeh me too bechara Arjun. Tomorrow wo humhe terra nazar aa e ga.
Mohit: Tum loog tou ase dar rahe ho ke Navina uski help karne wali hai.
Sanaya: She is.
Rati: Dah.
Mohit: Tumhe pata hai, bahar Daimond ki raining ho rahi hai?
Sanaya: Really? kaha? I have to catch them soon.
Rati: Tumne usko kyun bagaya? Tumhe pata hai tumhare age ek bhootni kari hai.
Mohit: Sorry, but u see how funny it waz?
Sanaya: I did'nt found any diamond but I find bubble, Thank god at least I made one bubble.
Kid: Ooookkkkk
Sanaya: I wonder it na chota pool with flowers yahan ka kar raha hai? Who would swim in it?
Arjun: I m bored sitting in this corner thinking where to find the pani?
Sanaya: Yahan par pani hai Arjun, and I will also give u this rose.
To be continue.
Part 8
Rati: Do u think that my new looks r scary?
Arjun: Agar dhoor se dekho tou maybe not.
Rati: Wat??? I thought u r gonna say that I look beautiful.
Arjun: Nope, and by the way I found pani.
Rati: Wat?? hahahahaha.
Rati: well now I maybe look a little taller than u, and now I believe that I am smarter than u too, why in the world r u finding water 4 me?
Arjun: Nope, u r not taller than me, ok.
RV: hi Rati.
Arjun: Abb tou har koi tumhare piche pargaye ga. ha
Rati: Oh god, I did'nt think about that.
Arjun: Wat???
Rati: Wat do u think?
Arjun: Hun?
Sanaya: Idhar auo.
Mohit: Kya?
Sanaya: Act original.
Mohit: Do u think Im fake?
Sanaya: U r not fake, u r stupid.

Navina: How does Rati look so pretty?
Rati tells Arjun let me hold ur book and u hold my bag.
Arjun: ur bag is heavy.
Rati: Well dah. it has cream, make up, and all those things.
Rati: kash tum ek larki banjate, u look and soung like one.
Arjun: just shut up. I m gping.
Arjun: Ohhh.
Sanaya: Oh god, wat is behind me?
To be continue. So sorry I have to go, but ill write more later.
Part 9
Navina: Where is Mohit?
Jas: Wat is Arjun and Sanaya doing together, I thought agar mujhe Rati nahi milegi tou Sanaya hi sahi. Sanaya looks so pretty.
Mohit: I m shocked
Jas: About what???
Mohit: There is a cockroach, near where Sanaya is standing.and he is spraying something.
Mohit: U have to save me dude. Ahhhhh he is getting close.
Jas: Don't worry, Main hoon na.
Mohit: No need to act flimy.
Jas: I see something on ur face.
Mohit: Nah it's nothing, just the tikka Preeti ne lagaya tah. I m going to Arjun now.
Mohit: Dude what is ur problem?And where is Rati?
Arjun: I don't know but u see that fake cockroach in the wall, it is to scare Rati.
Mohit: Rati is not scare of ur stupid cockroach it looks pretty fake.
Arjun: Oh yeah we will see about that.
Mohit: R u challenging me?
Arjun: Nah, I will win. Because when ever i challenge u at something, u loose !!!!
Mohit: Pretty good yaar, u r very smart too.
Arjun: Thanks, do me a favor and find Rati 4 me.
Mohit: Ok, I will if u win this panja game with me.
Arjun: Mohit don't go there.
Mohit: R u scared?
Arjun: Bring it on.
Navina: There he is. Oh Mohit.
Navina: Oh god, guys there is a cocoroach in that wall, spraying something.
Mohit: Don't worry Navina it's fake.
Arjun: I m winning.
Mohit: Nope
Arjun: Yes.
Tamana mam: You guys should put ur elbow in a table.
Jas: Don't move the cocoroach is right behind u.
Tamana Mam: Ok I m scared.
Arjun: I win, find Rati now. If everyone thinks the cocoroach is real, then Rati will too.
Sanaya: Plez I beg u let me go.
Abhi: Why, u just got here.
Sanaya: I have been here, 1 hour.
Abhi: Ok, but listen my last and new story.
Sanaya: Oh no !!!!
Abhi: Ok here it starts.
Thinking Sanaya: How can someone have a Bara dimaag?
Sanaya: Sorry i have to change.
Abhi: OK,but listen......
Sanaya: Tell Rati.
Abhi: Ok Rati she is the luky one to here my storyy
Sanaya: Hi Mohit!!!
Mohit: Shanu I save u from that cocoroach.
Sanaya: Mohit get off me.
Sanaya: Where is it anyway???That is fake.
Sanaya: U r funny.
Abhi: i can't find Rati.
Sanaya: Oh god he is back.
Sanaya: Go find Rati 4 Arjun now.
Abhi: Ok, but lets me tell u the story.
Sanaya: look Rati is behind u.
Abhi: i don't care.
Sanaya: u r dead Sanaya.
Arjun: act natural Rati is coming.
Preeti: Look arjun brought phool 4 me !!!
Mohit: I thought u liked me.Preeti
Preeti: ido.
Mohit: OK
Preeti: Shoooooooooo
Mohit: Why is everyone shooing me?
Preeti: No u the cocoroach.
Sanaya: look Arjun, I look natural
Mohit: Gotta tell Sanaya.
Abhi: Gotta tell my story.
Sanaya: i gotta tell Mohit this.
Arjun: Gotta get Sanaya. She is mine. Gotta prank Rati.
Jas: Gotta propose Sanaya
Preeti: Gotta get out of here.
Navina: Gotta win from Rati at beautifullness.
To be continue.
Will Mohit tell Sanaya__________?
Will Abhi tell his story?
Will Sanaya tell Mohit______?
Will Arjun get Sanaya?
What is Arjun's prank on Rati?
Will he success on that prank?
Will Jas propse Sanaya?
Will Preeti get ut of there?
Will Navina show everyone she is better than Rati?
Stay Tune............................
Plez go to page 7 and 8
For the next two parts.
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LOL
I loved it! Amazing job, all the captions were amazing! hahahah
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lol hilarious loved it do write more
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i love it plzzzzzz contuied soon
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Hilarious captions awsum job dear!
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oh my my, excellent work girl. this was very hilarious, creative and interesting. you have a very good talent of story telling. do continue jan.
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Hilarious n so creative !!! Gr888888 job!
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awasome captions.
keep it up.
do continue
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omg it was great
mohit and jas crazy abt rati
strange!!!!!!!!
well that scene was soooo sweet when abhishek said i want mohit's sanaya
hahahahahahaha
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it was cuteeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzz contuied soon

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