New poems:Sajan n mayur both!(PG3)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is poem for mayu n nups plz tell me hoe is it?
from mayu:
jindagi ke bohot hai rasate,
aaj ek chun hi loo,
pyar ki jitni bhi gehrai,
aaj bas kud jau.
Marne maarne ki baate pyar main padatehi sujhati hai,
achhe khase aadmi ki akal ghutano tak sarakati hai.
Aankh,kaan,muh,nak sab pe kabu hota hai
par najane kyu yeh sala dil bekabu hota hai.
Love,ishq,mohobat sare ek se lagane lagate hai,
apni parchhai mein bhi uska saya najar aata hai.
Majanu, hir ranjha yeh to paidaishi pagal the,
pathar khate hue bhi yaar ka naam lete the,
bhai hum to aaj ke wo surma hai jo bina dube tair jaenge,
chupa ke rakhana dil, bina chue chura lenge.



from nups:
Jindagi ke sabhi rasto mein,
pyar ek aisi sadak hai, jahake kaate, c
hubhate hi sukun dete hai.
Marane maarne ki baate bemani ho jaati hai,
dil ki aah dimag par havi ho jati hai.
Pyar,ishq aur mohobbat bas kitabi baate hai,
wo to aisa ehsaas hai jahan shabd apna matlab khote hai.
Hir,ranjha,majnoo to dub ke tair gaye,
dekho aaj ke surma dubane se bhi darate hai.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I really liked the poem....grt going anwaya.........too gud keep it up.......
luv Raee🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey anwaya,
Amazing poems yaar 👏👏
I love the 2 lines from Nupur and Mayank on pyaar ishq mohabbat, very romantic and beautiful 😳
Then the sentences with Heer Ranjha from Mayank was funny 😆
Keep up the great work sweety 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nice! Keep it up😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely poemz anwaya... sowie i missd dem in da paradise.. glad u posted dem ere..warna i wud hav missd sumfin really awesumm...terrific job done sweetss..=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very cute
poetry little with funny lines added mayur touch more 2 it.
very good job done👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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As i v said b4..Its great :)
Love u
Piya.
anwaya thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@humera:

thnx! i mine too heer ranjha wala fav line!
anwaya thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@me and just me,sonia,

@rabo: i thought so tht why i open this topic! thnx!

@lovingbird: well verry serious things dnt go with mayur, thx!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx piya, was waiting for ur responce, then i open this!

@sameera, thnkx!

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