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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#561

DEBBY!!!!!!!!!.........i really love this part.....it is soooooooooooooooo amazing!!!awwwwwwwwwww mayu was sooo cute nd well rite soon

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#562

wow! loved it debby

it was just soo awesome!!

cont.asap!

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Amber

@bubblygurl

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#563

Amazing part....Loved it...!!! i wanna c how nupur tells her feelings to mayank..hehe

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#564

debby amazing part i jut loved it k mayank is in love with nupur super cool cont soon

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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#565

awwwwwwwwwww, Debby! 🤗 Mayank was soooooooooo cute when he was saying 'tum batao please, batayo toh' just like a little kid! Reminded me of the door scene in New years episode when he was like: 'ismein blue hai' You have portrayed his character just sooo perfectly! And not just Mayank's, all of the other characters as well......

But the best part of the update was Nupur not confessing! If she had gone and hugged him right there and then pouring her heart out....it wouldve looked odd......but what you showed...i mean wrote.... thats what MayUr's relationship is all about....not over indulgent, having just the right amount of sugar and spice😳😉

In short, I loved it to bits, Debby! This compensated for yesterday's episode 😆

Oh and yea....this line: She suddenly feels Mayank's voice close to her and him breathing down her shoulder.."mujhe tumse pyar hai Nupur, bahut saara pyar.."

All i can say is WOW!

Keep up the rocking work!

Love you🤗 and update soon😉

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Firza

@firza

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#566

I LOVED IT!! plszz continue soon wid samrats confession to gunjan!!

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#567

SUPERB AS USUAL!!!!

LOVE MAYUR!!!!

I WAS EXEPTED ABOUT NUPUR'S REACTION!!!

AND IT'S COME TRUE!!!

HE HE HE HE HE HE!!!!

CONT SOON!!

TAKE UR TIME!!!

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maaria

@pakirani

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#568

haiiii.....i love nupur and mayank's wonderful scenes!!! great FF debby

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naaz-7

@naaz-7

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#569

@Debby

[Mayank: haan Nupur, tum sahi keh rahi ho.
(Nupur stops in her tracks.)
Mayank: mujhe tumhari kadar nahi hai, isliye toh tumhe khone ka darr lagta hai. Mujhe tumhari fikar bhi nahi hai, isliye bhagwan idhar udhar se tumhe girne se bachane mujhe bhej hi deta hai. Mujhe toh bas tumse pyar hai Nupur, bahut saara pyaar.

Nupur feels herself blush immensely. Mayank slowly walks up to her, holds her in a firm grasp and turns her around to face him. As they both look up into each other's eyes, time seems to stand still. ]

i loved this part, it was so cute and so realistic that i could imagine them. you're a great writer!!!

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#570

@pragya.. Yes.. Gunjan will also realize her love slowly..
Next update will have a sajan scene for sure.
Gud luck with ur FF.. wud love to read it..!! 😊

@Ruchi.. Xactly, all's fair in love.. thanks a lot dear! 🤗

@Tina.. Thanks a lot Tina..🤗 srsly Mayu will always be Mayu..
dnt worry, he wont be bechaen for much longer.

@Raee.. Luv u Raee.. thanks a million..!! 🤗

@Disha.. Dia will not rest dis easily.. luk out for the next part.. thanks dear! 😊

@Anjalika, Sheena, Ananya, Jyothi.. Thank you sooo much! 😊

@Ynaiita.. Hey, I wish sum1 wud direct this too in that case.. haha.. thanks a lot! 😊

@Zaheen.. U r so sweet.. thanks ya! Haha..Mayu is in for a spell of anxiety, but it will end soon.. cant see him like that.. 🤗

@Amber.. Yeah, me too.. was dreamin abt it last nite.. lol. Thanks sweetie! 🤗

Edited by debby - 16 years ago

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