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Cut to: Excel College Library
Samrat is keeping a lookout for Gunjan, anxiously hoping that she'd not be angry with him for any reason. He is standing by a bookshelf when he suddenly feels a hand on his shoulder. He turns happily, thinking it is Gunjan.

Samrat: thank God chashmish tum mil gayi. (He stops as he realizes it isn't Gunjan, but Radz.) Oh hie Radz!
Radz: oye hoye, kiski raah dekh rahe the?
Samrat: kuch nahi yar, wohi Gunjan. Kal pata nahin usko kya hua, aaj bhi subah se mili nahi.
Radz: (winks) tujhe uski badi fikar hai? Kya baat hai cool dude? In love or something?
Samrat: yar ye tu, Benji sab mile hue ho kya? Tu toh jaanti hai, Sam ne apna dil ab tak kisi ko nahi diya.
Radz: ab tak na, aage ka kya pata? (She suddenly catches sight of Gunjan, just entering the library.) Arey udhar dekh, wohi hai na teri Gunjan?
Samrat: finally.. hey chashmish!!
(Gunjan looks at him and smiles. Sam and Radz go up to her.)
Samrat: kal se kya hide and seek khel rahi ho? Naraaz ho kya?
Gunjan: nahi Samrat. Main class me thi.
Samrat: tum aur tumhari class.. khaer wo chodo, isse milo. Radz. My friend, philosopher, guide. Meri…
Gunjan: (cuts him short) hie Radz. Samrat mujhe der ho rahi hai, main chalti hu.
Samrat: arey lekin! (She abruptly leaves) Isko hua kya hai?
Radz: (sadly) lagta hai main pasand nahi aayi.
Samrat: hey pagal hai kya. Ek kaam kar, tu canteen me jaake baith, main dekhke aata hu. Cool?
Radz: ya sure. Main jaake Benji ko pakati hu. Bye!

Cut to: Excel College – Corridor
Gunjan is walking by herself, lost in thoughts, when she bumps into Mayank, equally lost.

Mayank: sorry.. oh hi Gunjan!
Gunjan: hie Mayank.
(Mayank notices she is looking a little low.)
Mayank: (smiling) kya baat hai? Aaj tum bhi Nupur ki tarah khwabo me khoyi hui ho?
Gunjan: nahi, actually main thoda pareshan hu.
Mayank: koi problem? Chaho to mujhe bata sakti ho.
Gunjan: nahi, itni badi baat bhi nahi hai.
Mayank: tumne kya apna har sentence nahi se shuru karne ka resolution liya hai?
Gunjan: (smiles) nahi. Oh, mera matlab hai..
Mayank: Gunjan, batao na, kya hua?
Gunjan: Mayank, agar hume koi hamare bahut ache dost ke baare me aisi baat bataye jispar vishwas karne ko dil na mane, toh kya karna chahiye?
Mayank: hmm.. dusro se zyada apne dost par bharosa karo na. Tumhe usse directly baat karni chahiye.
Gunjan: shayad tum sahi keh rahe ho..
Mayank: hamesha ki tarah, right? (They both laugh.. After Mayank leaves, Gunjan decides to confront Samrat and sort out the issues that were troubling her.)

Cut to: Excel College – Classroom
Nupur is sitting by herself, muttering and uttering about Mayank's complexities. Uday, who is sitting behind her, is trying to make sense of her ramblings.

Uday: Nupur, pichle adhe ghante se main samajhne ki koshish kar raha hu ke tum kya bol rahi ho. Par by God, samajh me hi nahi aa raha hai!
Nupur: arey Uday bhaiya, mujhe hi nahi samajh aa raha toh aap kya samjhoge. Mayank ko toh khud Brahma ji bhi nahi samajh sakte.
(CJ enters the classroom, takes a look at Nupur and smiles to herself.)
CJ: hie Nupur, kya ho raha hai?
Uday: main batata hu. Nupur ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke Mayank kya chahta hai. Mayank ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke wo Nupur ko chahta hai. Matlab, kitna chahta hai, nahi matlab... (He gets confused) haye, kya matlab hai??
Nupur: Uday bhaiya plz, chup kariye. Mujhe sochne do!
CJ: Nupur, tum aur Mayank na, dono hi unique ho. Na jaane itni si baat kab samajh me aayegi.
Nupur: kaunsi baat?
CJ: khud hi socho na. Lo Mayank bhi aa gaya.
Uday: aur Shukla bhi, oh no!!

(Mayank waves at CJ and goes and sits beside Nupur, while Shukla Sir beams at everyone. As the class begins and he gets up to write on the board, Mayank looks at Nupur.)

Nupur: (whispers) kya hua? Kaha bhag gaye the tum?
(Mayank continues to stare at her.) Hello? Dimaag ke saath kaan bhi kharab ho gaye kya? (Mayank snaps out of his reverie and whispers back.)
Mayank: hue nahi toh ho zarur jaayenge tumhare saath rehke. Itna jo sun na padta hai.
Nupur: haan toh mat raho mere saath. Koi contract thode hi sign kiya hai. Jaao jahan jaana hai.
Mayank: (a little too loudly) Nupur!

(Shukla hears him and turns.)
Shukla: Mayank Sharma, koi duvidha hai toh hamse puchiye, mahodaya se nahi.
Mayank: sorry Sir.
(He glares at Nupur and she glares back. CJ looks at them from her seat and says to herself.)

CJ: lagta hai third party intervention ke bina kuch nahi hoga. Yeh dono lad jhagadke hi apni feelings chupate rahenge.

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Posted: 17 years ago
YAY! I was in this part! *dances about* Sammy and I are so close aren't we? *blushes* 😆 Is Gunjan jealous? Of Radz? Sammy's going to tell her that Radz is his cousin right? And Mayank gave Gunjan advice! On friendship, when he himself is so lost in his own 'friendship' with Nupur... Hai, Uday could tell that Mayank loves Nupur when Nupur and Mayank can't! 😆 Then he goes and confuses himself.. 😆 So CJ is going to intervene? With help I hope? It'll be more interesting.. And Radz and Benji should team up to get Sammy to confront his feelings for Gunjan..
Great job as always Debby! Waiting for more.. *rubs hands with glee*
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome!!Both SaJan & MayUr story is going gr8!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part.......😊
continue soon............
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Posted: 17 years ago


YAY!!! SO FINALLY GUNJAN IS GONNA ASK SAMRAT
MAYANK DOES GIVE GOOD ADVICE
AND C.J ALWAYS HAS AN ANS FOR ANY PROBLEM
HOPE RADZ AND GUNJAN DON'T HAVE ANY PROBLEMS



UPDATE SOON!!!!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
toooooooooo good debby i am just amazed by your writing skills
hats off to you yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
oooooooh it was just awesum,...!!!!

luved CJz last dialogue....keep up the good wrk..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Anhdara13


YAY! I was in this part! *dances about* Sammy and I are so close aren't we? *blushes* 😆 Is Gunjan jealous? Of Radz? Sammy's going to tell her that Radz is his cousin right?

You bet.. u guys r super close.. 😛 ab dekho na, he's not getting d opportunity to tell her.. keeps getting cut off in between.. 😆

And Mayank gave Gunjan advice! On friendship, when he himself is so lost in his own 'friendship' with Nupur... Hai, Uday could tell that Mayank loves Nupur when Nupur and Mayank can't! 😆


😆 True. He's himself super confused.. bt Uday can be subconsciously bright at times. Only if he was sumtimes consciously so. Lol.
Thanks Radz, I love hearing from you! 🤗



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Posted: 17 years ago
@Anu
Thank u soo much! 🤗

@Anjalika
Thanks a lot.. 😃

@Tina
Yeah, CJ is quite intelligent na.. thanks a ton dear.. !! 😳

@Ruchi
You made my day.. thanks a million! 🤗

@Amber
Thanks sweetie.. glad u liked it! 😛

@Ynaiita
Will do.. thank you! 😃

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