My Version Of Last Episode

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Posted: 17 years ago
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My version of mdta ending.. like u all I also think it was a disgusting end..

So here I come up with a awesome ending.. PS Ruhaan been replaced by Gaurav

Ruhaan is brought to hospital by his father..

The doc taking care of him.. and ru's father comes in and like in the show eh says its my son and etc..

He calls barghav and they talk.. bhargav dont believe it..

R's father said I will give u the proofs..

He calls at Oberoi house.. and ru's mother pick up.. she is happy to hear ru is alive..

She calls abhishek and tells him she want o meet Ruhaan now..

Whole family leaves.. for Ujjain..

Ru's father is waiting.. for the family.. and is worried what to do..

Bhargav comes to him and say.. sorry I lied.. he is not my grandson actually I aw him in the hospital and for saving my wife I made him my grandson.. he also lost his memory that's why..

But my intense was not bad..

Ru's father: but did know he is not ur grandson.. u could have made him insane..

Bhargav apologizes.

Next day.. whole Oberoi family arrives..

Ru's mother: (crying) kahan hai mera Ruhaan .. tell me ..

Ru's father: he is in ICU.. he will be fine..

Abhishek: par papa where did u found him..

He tells him.. where he found him and even.. that where Ruhaan were living all these days..

Abhishek: so it means .. Ruhaan won't recognize us..

Ru's father: I hope for the best..

Bahrgav comes to them.. and tells them during .. when Ruhaan had lost his memory.. he got married to sargam..

All of them are shocked..

Ru's mother: how can u do this. My Ruhaan is already married..

Bhargav: we want him to be happy that's all.

Ru's mother: he is married to Simran whom he loves very much..

Sargam from a distance hears it.. and is crying..

Chachi is also sad.. so is the whole family

Ruhaan slowly wakes up.. he sees his mother in front of him..

Ruhaan: maa..

His mother is soo happy to see him.. she kisses him on his forehead..

Ru's mother: u wont believe it.. but I somewhere had a feel that u r alive.. and look u r here..

Ruhaan looks around..

Ruhaan: mama where am I..

Dr vishal tells him u r in Ujjain..

Ruhaan confused..

They tells them they found him in the river.. and etc..

Ruhaan: (he is thinking of the incident) Simran.. maa Simran .. where is she..

Ru's mother: Ruhaan she.. she is in coma.. in Mumbai..

Ruhaan: maa mujhe uis ke paas janaa hai.. aabhi issi waqt.. mujhe meri Simran ke paas jana hai..

Dr. vishal tells him he is weak ..

Ruhaan insists..

They are getting ready for to go.. but Ru's parents are thinking of what bhargavs has done..

And is thinking of how they will tell Ruhaan about it..

Ru's mother: Ruhaan will be shattered.. I remember it when Simran said she will divorce him for the sake of family's reputation.. he was not at all happy to stay away from Simran.. and now..

Ru's father: it will be ok we will just leave the hospital and then tell him later..

Bahrgav apologize to Ruhaan.. he says it alright..

All of them.. is coming out from the hospital.. while we see vedant point gun toward Ruhaan from a little distance.. sargam to sees it.. coz she is looking at Ruhaan from a distance to.. she runs toward the very time vedant fires..

The bullet hits sargam.. and vedant runs. From there

Ruhaan is holding her..

Ruhaan: sargam.. yeh ..

Sargam: I saved u. coz I cannot see u die.. now I can die in peace..

Ruhaan. No sargam.. get up..

Sargam: no .. plzz.. I m happy im dying in ur arms.

And she close her eyes..

End of sargam.. so just to let u guys know ruhaan seeing sargam remembered he got married to Sargam..

later on Ruhaan is requested to leave.. after doing the antimsanskar of sargam..

In Mumbai..

Ruhaan comes out of his car.. and runs into the hospital.. and into he ICU where Simran is in..

He slowly come to her.. and is just looking at her..

Ruhaan: (thinking) kitne diinoon bard main tumko dekh reha hoon Simran.. aisay jaisay kitne baaras ho gaye hain.. (he takes her hand in his and kiss it.. ) I love u Simran.. plzz wapaas aa jaoo..

He get tears in his eyes.. and puts his head down beside it. And after some mint. He takes it up.. and is in anger..

Ruhaan: I wont leave suhana.. I just wont..

He rush out of the room.. Abhishek stops him..

Abhishek: where r u going..

Ruhaan: to find Suhana.. she will now be punished for what she did..

Abhishek: she is in jail..

Ruhaan shocked..

Abhishek: yes.. she was arrested very same day she shot u both.. actually was following her.. but I misses her on the highway.. but we arrived the time she shot u…and u fall down..

But we couldn't find u.. par Simran.. was alive .. so she was bought here..and we knew someday will come u will be here to..

Ruhaan is crying.. coz all what Simran has gone through is due to him..

Ruhaan: I ant to meet Suhana..

Abhishek: what..

Ruhaan. Yes bhaiya..

Both leave and goes to the jail she is in..

The police officer points over to her cell..

Ruhaan slowly walk toward it..

Suhana is sitting there in anger..

Ruhaan: Suhana..

She looks up. And is shocked..

Suhana: (walking toward him) Ruhaan.. tum zinda ho.. good.. tum.. tum .. mujhe yahaan se niokal sakte ho.. its due to u i was locked in.. plzz get me out of here..

Ruhaan: this is ur right place..

Suhana angrily look at him

Suhana: what nonsense..

Ruhaan: haan Simran is in coma.. so u r not safe yet.. and I will make sure u never come out again..

Coz u already killed one person.. (he comes closer to her and wisper to her) bublo remember.. jisse Simran ko kidnap karwa tha tumne.

Suhana: I wished I had killed Simran the same day

Ruhaan gets angry.. and he made to strangle her… Abhishek tried to stop Ruhaan..

But Ruhaan was not listening.. he just wanted to kill her off ..

Abhishek took Ruhaan from there..

Next day in hospital

Ruhaan.. was sitting near Simran .. and were just looking at her.. while holding her hand..

He felt her hand moving a bit.. and looked at her head.. which also start moving.. she slowly open her eyes.. and sees Ruhaan there.. Ruhaan smile to her.. so does she..

Simran: Ruhaan..

He hugs her..

Ruhaan: Simran im soo happy .. I would have died if anything had happened to u..

Ruhaan calls the doc..

And he examinants Simran..

He tells him.. she is fine.. but need to be in hospital for 3 days more..

Who family comes to me Simran..

Chachi apologizing for.. being so stupid..

Simran tells her she has nothing against her..

All of them are happy..

In Oberoi House..

Ru's mother decided to do a puja for their children's well being..

Ruhaan getting ready.. so is Simran..

Simran tries to walk .. but is not able to do so.. Ruhaan sees it.. and takes her in his arms and goes down..

Dadi is smiling looking at them..

Ruhaan comes toward the hawan.. and makes Simran sit there..

After the hawan is completed.. they gives aways the parshaad..

Later the night.. Ruhaan coems into his room .. he sees Simran standing at the window.

He comes toward her.. and blow/puff on her..

She turn back..and he hugs her from behind..

Ruhaan: what is my Simran thinking ..

Simran: nothing.. just… all what we have gone through..

Ruhaan turns her toward him..

Ruhaan: Simran lets just forget each bitter parts of our life and start our life a fresh from now..

Will u support me in this..

Simran nods..

Ruhaan kiss her forehead.. and they hugs.. and that's how it ends..

Anth Bhaala To Saab Bhaala

so what say friends.. this really heels my wound .. abit but not much..😳

what about u all??

Edited by Nausheenfan - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😃omg..San 👏 what a beautiful ending yaar... 😃 😆 😳
o god..i think im going to put this in my mind instead of the stupid..ending on tv.. 😊
waw kitna khoobsurat aapne likha yaar..im crying right now..so beautiful.. 😳
Really loved how u ended Sargam...it should have happend like that..😆
Omg ur so much better then the creatives of mdta...u should post this part to Rahul Bhatt and let him know that we would've been so happy if the serial ended this way... 😛
Its really an awesome part..and the ending mindblowing yaar..they way RuSim ended by hugging each other..awwww could really see that scene in my head.. 😍
Every part was mindblowing..
The whole family arriving in Ujainni, Ruhaan waking up, seeing his mom, Simran in coma, Ruhaan wanting to see her right away,chachi apologizing..and bhargav admitting that it was a mistake..ufff ur mindblowing yaar..awesome part..a better ending then this could not be possible..waw 👏 👏 👏
Ur part is really going to help me forget the crap ending of MDTA..from today this is the ending for me... 😃 loved the cute parts btw RuSim..him taking her in his arms for the puja..and the ending and in the hospital..just waw👏 read the part already twice...😃
Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx for liking.. im happy .. even im feeling a bit better to after writing this ..
Edited by Nausheenfan - 17 years ago
NazNgs thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya yaar after reading ur part..im finally smiling again..the sun is shining again.. 😃
ISano thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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u know what i also had this version in my mind... 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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you are a much better writer than rahul bhatt. this ending is perfect. made me feel better about the real crappy ending
ISano thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx . thanx neela thast why i amde this ending.. evne i felt better ..
after reading my own
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya,San! 😉
It should have ended this way...
I think if Priya accepted rahul's offer to come back to MDTA...the ending will somehow be like this...
Great ending! 😆
ISano thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx.. hadah but even then she accepted .. gaurav would have not been there
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wish it was like that in reality... 😕 but still very nice ending!! 👏 👏 👏

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