Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit
Hey, Sakshi! Awesome updates. IshVeer's looks are amazing! Coming to the chapters, your characters' equations with others and each other are brilliantly done. IshVeer relationship is mature and hats off to you for writing them like this. I love how you keep throwing the parts where Ishani feels guilty about what she did to him and despite everything, Ranveer doesn't hate Ishani. This is why I call them mature and kudos to you. :)
And needless to say, I despised Ritika in the show (and the only one who made me feel sympathy for was LM in US, and here I like your portrayal of her character too). Redemption is necessary and thankfully she has learnt her lessons. What's with N and his family, though? Is his mother evil or what? I'm sorry, I'm unable to grasp their equation and why Nirbhay hates his family. But it's good he stood up for his love.
Sharman and Parul are probably the best product of your work. They look cute and it's not very hard to imagine them as a loving couple. I liked the Devarsh-Parul pair in the show, too. But anyway, I love this part of your story.
Carry on, girl!
Your quick updates make me cry tears of shame. xD Keep updating. :D
Hi Elvish
thanks for the comment
glad you liked my updates and Ishveer looks
happy you liked characters equation with others and Ishveer mature relationship
happy you liked the way I wrote the part were Ishani feels guilty about what she
did to him even though she hurt him but Ranveer never hate her
hmm they are really matured enough and thanks for your wishes
happy you liked the way I portrayed Rithika's character and yes redemption is
really necessary and finally she learnt her lessons
Nirbhay's mother is a evil only she could be evil but she does not want a
daughter in law evil as once Rithika was evil woman
Nirbhay was a man who was not ready to get with his family well once as he was
a great villain now only due to Ishani he changed good and he is good with his family
happy you liked the way Nirbhay stood up for his love
Happy you liked sharman and Parul and its happy that you are able to imagine
them as loving couple
Devarsh and Parul were pair once and now they are not like that in my story
glad you liked the sorry
no dear nothing like that writers like you are proud to our forum
ya let me update it dear
keep reading
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