Ishveer ff: Blazing Love- The Past- Part 1 on page 4 - Page 4

Ishveer born together? Amazing. Party scene was nice.Nice to see kailesh amba too in the same level of harshad falguni.ishveer meeting was cute

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Hi, Anne! Cute update. I love this story and you've improved quite a lot since last time I saw you around. Your way of narrating is very well and beautifully executed. So, Ishani and Ranveer were born on the same day. What a great fortune!

Their parents are amazing. And both IshVeer looking amazing in the party. Wow, what occasion is it? Their introduction was beautiful.

About writing, I'd ask you to pay more attention to it. Your sentence structure is very good. Though, always take care of the punctuation and also the conversation tags. Avoid the repetition of the words. And don't use the word "cute" again and again. Instead, find an alternative for it or for any other words you think you're overusing, while you proof-read your work. Keep writing more, girl! And update soon. :)

Hey Elvish and thanks a lot for your appreciation...
Yeah their age is same. Reason was that I wanted classroom romance... 😳 Thanks a lot... Haha yes they both look amazing may we make them wear anything... Though I thank I have made them a little too mature for their age... It's a business party held by a man who has just won an award...
For writing, actually I get barely any time for revising the work or actually even writing as I am in 9th and next year it's boards for me so studies are on full swing...
Thank you, though I am very weak at this metaphor thing... 😊
Yeah I am trying to improve these things... It's not that I don't know about these things, it's just that I can't think of its replacement...
Will keep all these things in mind the next time I update...
Thanks a lot again... 😳

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Ishveer born together? Amazing. Party scene was nice.Nice to see kailesh amba too in the same level of harshad falguni.ishveer meeting was cute

Yes they have born together jasmine... Glad you liked the party scene and this will continue till next update I think... Ishveer conversation will be in the next part... Yeah actually I didn't wanted any financial problems... Thanks again...

Classroom romance sounds amazing! I'll be waiting for your updates. And no worries. Don't force improvement like that. Let it go steady and slow. Wow, all the best for your boards. :) :)

Hi Anne
lovely update
loved the way the story is our Ishveer are born now
loved the way both parents were proud for their children
totally the way you have penned down the story is amazing
so our cute Ishani and smart Ranveer are born on same day so their birthdays will fall on the
same days that's really amazing
And next the party is looking fresh and good to read
cutely liked the was Ishani and Ranveer met each other
purely its a lovely and cute story
keep updating 😉😉

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Classroom romance sounds amazing! I'll be waiting for your updates. And no worries. Don't force improvement like that. Let it go steady and slow. Wow, all the best for your boards. :) :)

Haha... Yeah but it will take time right now as first I have to complete the past and then a little bit present... Thanks a lot for your concern and I will try to improve and make it better to read with every chapter... Thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi Anne
lovely update
loved the way the story is our Ishveer are born now
loved the way both parents were proud for their children
totally the way you have penned down the story is amazing
so our cute Ishani and smart Ranveer are born on same day so their birthdays will fall on the
same days that's really amazing
And next the party is looking fresh and good to read
cutely liked the was Ishani and Ranveer met each other
purely its a lovely and cute story
keep updating😉😉

Hey Sakshi di and glad that you liked the update... Yeah of course when you have ishveer as children you will be proud... Yes same day... Birthdays I have not planned them yet but will try to coincide them with the actual date... Yes I am working on the next one right now I will try to update it in the coming weekend... Thanks a lot again and keep supporting...
Take care... 😊

Hy Anne
The update is good.
Ishveer born on same date. Its amazing.
They were such cute and smart. Adorable
And loved it dr. Will be waiting for next
Keep smiling and take care 😊

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy Anne
The update is good.
Ishveer born on same date. Its amazing.
They were such cute and smart. Adorable
And loved it dr. Will be waiting for next
Keep smiling and take care 😊

Hey Maya... Thanks a lot... Yeah ishveer are, were and will remain cute forever, it's a universal truth... Thanks a lot and I will try to update soon... Take care dear...

lovely and cute update😊😃
ishveer birth same day wawo amazing😳😳😳

ranveer is too small now but in very little age he fall for ishu😳😳😳

waiting for next update😃😃😃