Ishveer ff: Blazing Love- The Past- Part 1 on page 4

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Hi guys. I am Anne and a majority here doesn't knows me. So I am a die-hard fan of Ishveer and their Aashiqui. And I was thinking to post my OS first but this idea clicked me. So this is a new one and if I got good response then I will continue this...Happy reading...

Prologue

"Me again, me. Why only me. They always send me to pick up the ball, no matter where it goes." A fifteen year old Ranveer muttered angrily, cursing his friends. They had been playing cricket and as usual the ball went into someone's yard after a fat, bully-like boy had hit it hard. Ranveer was the weakest so he was sent to pick up the ball, as the bully found no other boy whom he can threaten.
"I am the weakest so I should be sent. I mean what sort of logic is this!". He cursed again. The worst part was that the house in which the ball had went, was just accommodated by a woman. She also had a daughter, he had heard from others. He had almost reached to the house.
The sun was shining at its top. It was very hot that day and even Ranveer was sweating badly. He was wearing a light green shaded polo t-shirt with a light ocean blue jeans, both were covered with dust at places. But still Ranveer was looking attractive. He can make any girl fall for him, he was looking so damn hot.
However the weather was hot, yet there was something new something amazing about the atmosphere. It was hot still Ranveer was having a feel that something new was going to happen today, something which will change his life.
He finally reached the door of the house. It was not a very big and attractive house, yet it's simplicity attracted him. He finally pressed the bell switch which rang with the regular ting. He waited and was looking sideways at the beautifully maintained garden. The flowers were blooming nicely, as if telling him some secrets.
At the same time the door opened swiftly, Ranveer turned his gaze towards it. As the door opened, Ranveer's heartbeat got fast.
And finally the door opened revealing the most beautiful creature Ranveer had seen in his whole life till date. His breath got hitched as he saw her.
A girl, nearly 14 years old he assumed, was standing opposite to him. She was wearing a plain, thin white top, perfectly taking the shape of her beautiful frame, and a cheque red mini skirt which was having the colors of black and shades of red too barely covering half her thighs, completely taking the shape of her beautiful figure. She was drying her wet hair with a white soft towel. Her color was milk white while the lips were Rose pink. Her black orbs were seeing directly in his chocolate ones. While she was smiling innocently at him.
He was completely mesmerized by her beauty. While her eyes were hypnotizing him. Words had melted in his mouth while he stood like a statue.
However he noticed the change in expression on the girl's face. It was the same look which he got from all girls, a mesmerized one.
She too stood there like him. They looked at each other for an infinite amount of time.
The girl was the first of them to come out of the pause. She smiled, blushingly now, restarting her business with the towel.
She parted her lips and asked politely, "Yes?".
And this was it. He felt his life seep away from him as soon he heard her melodious voice. A voice so thrilling never was heard in the spring time from the cuckoo bird.
He felt himself falling in love with her.
She had became his Aashiqui from that moment.
And she had ignite a Blazing Fire of love in his heart.




Constructive criticism are more than welcome and plzz tell me about your views on this.😊
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RoshniSingh thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start Anne 😊
Do continue this ff. 😊
But there is a request.. Don't stop in the middle and please keep updating it regularly. Many people start the ff but leave in the middle. So if you are thinking of writing it, go on but please make sure to write it till the very end of it. 😳
Take care❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start Anne waiting for the update
loved Ishveer childhood...
you are having a different look to MATSH now
keep updating 😉😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Nice start Anne😊

Do continue this ff.😊
But there is a request.. Don't stop in the middle and please keep updating it regularly. Many people start the ff but leave in the middle. So if you are thinking of writing it, go on but please make sure to write it till the very end of it.😳
Take care❤️

Thanks Roshni...Am so happy that you liked it and no I am not going to leave it in between. Actually even I have seen many ffs here which start but no on continues them. It's a disappointment that many of them are sheer brilliance but the authors stop updating them after 2-3 chapters. And also I want to tell that I will not stop it but as my xams are going to start from 19th of this month so I will update the first part in the initial days of October and after that I will surely try to be regular ...
Thank and take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Nice start Anne waiting for the update
loved Ishveer childhood...
you are having a different look to MATSH now
keep updating😉😉😉

Thnku Sakshi di...Glad that you liked their childhood...And yes I am trying to portray their childhood in a different way...Not with full of lady loudspeakers and silent hubbies and crazy people...But of course in your ff every1 is playing their characters beautifully...I am learning from all the ishveer ff writers and will try to be a good one...Congo for the new thread...Thanku ones again..

Love you loads
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely start👏😊😃

carry on dear😃😃😃
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Great beginning dear.👍🏼
Pls do update without fail😉
Once again welcome to ishveer ff world🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HI annie!!!!!!!!!
hope you are good
this was a nice start dear ishveer from childhood both are ogling at each other and their love story going to start.
Its really great to know that you are inspired from our forum writers and i am really looking forward to reading ahead
I am sure with inputs and reviews fom our members you will write even better though this is also a good effort for a new comer.
All the best for your new effort
thnx for pm
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tnzila

lovely start👏😊😃

carry on dear😃😃😃

Thanks dear...I will update either in this week or after my exams...Thanks a lot...😊
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Originally posted by: mafaaza12

Great beginning dear.👍🏼

Pls do update without fail😉
Once again welcome to ishveer ff world🤗

Thanks dear...I am really happy that you liked it...And I will surely continue this but maybe after my exams...
Thanks for the welcome...😊

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