Ruthless love(ISHVEER) Chapter 2 : page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi ... I'm new to forum... but I'm writing ff in tellyupdates... hope u welcome me and this ff too...

RANVEER'S POV :
Today the dawn is entirely different from what I saw these many years. I never breath this much fresh air in my life. But might be when I was not that mature to understand what happening around me. I noticed suddenly that I'm surrounded with full of green plants and flowers blossoming with tiny little drops on its leafs. I stopped at one place holding my knees, breath and panting heavily. It's my daily routine to go for jogging. Something in my mind triggering me since morning. It may be because of the unusual place where I missed for past 21 years. Even I born at this place before 24 years. Lot of things has been changed with time. Being a child of 3 years of age I couldn't remember all things. But I still remember the day we left our house.
Kailash, my dad spitted out all his emotions that day, "Papa!! I can't hold in this place anymore. I can't waste my life like you being caught in here. I have my own life and family. I should consider my ranveer's future also. I got that job in U.S. I'll send you money every month. You are not going to live alone. Your other sons and daughters are with you. So leave me papa. Sorry! I've decided to go. Bless me" touching my dadaji's and dadi's feet who become petrified by his sudden decision. Though he is not ready, he let us go for his son's future. Before I left the house, the last sight I saw was my dadaji's and dadi's longing eyes. I missed them these many years. I come out of my dream by the little droplets showering from the dark clouds which were bright orange this morning when I came out of my house. I touched the tiny, sparkling drop that fell on my cheeks. I run to the shelter where I can enjoy watching this beautiful rain preventing myself from being drenched. Again some bad past of my family came to my mind. Closing my eyelids, I recall all the past, how we left, how my all chachu , buwa familes left following us with different reasons. Only few of my relations stayed there after our departure. Our home was an example for how to maintain relations. It was formed by my dadaji Pratap Vaghela and his 2 friends, Mahindra raheja, Umed Mehra. They are like brothers born in different house and connected to each other by fate(I don't trust this fate and all). Our 3 families lived there with great pride and courage. Everything changed when our families got dispersed. But something wants us to be united by tying a relation between me and my dadaji's friend's granddaughter or my friend or my fiancee Ritika Zaveri before 3 months which made our families to come here to celebrate it.
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I'm not good in English... but tried my best... don't hesitate to point out my mistakes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start... Please continue. This is very different and interesting :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii julina
Welcome to Matsh forum
Awesome story line..its very defferent form show story
Pls continue...
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nice start👏👏👏
ranveer has siblings lovely😃😃😃

ritika can be ranveers friend or fiancee😕😕😕
friends ok but not fiancee please..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Julina and welcome to the forum dear...I am also new here but I had joined last month...And your ff's story is very interesting Do continue it and question plzz , Is this an ishveer or ritveer ff?
Welcome again and btw I am Anne...😊
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welcome on ishveer land😊😊😊
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Thank you sooo much frnds... tnks for ur sweet welcome too... I mentioned in topic itself... it's ishveer ff only... and ritika character is also important as his fiancee ... so don't worry... there will more ishveer scenes... will post the next one tomorrow...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to our forum dear.
Nice post.
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Chapter 2:-

Ranveer's POV :

As I said, for my marriage, my whole family joined here. Again something starts to trigger me. As something going to happen today or something which is important going to seek me today. My heart unreasonably starts to panic. In fact, I search for a reason to console myself, I couldn't. Even a cool breeze caused by the rain couldn't make my thoughts out of it. I still close my eyes seeking for the reason. I heard a group of children voices quite far from me. It contains mixed happiness, enjoyment and enthusiasm with their innocent nature. Among them I heard a giggle of a girl who is different from other children. I wanted to hear it keenly leaving all other sounds of showering rain, chimneys of birds, etc. Now, I'm quite sure, she is not the same of others whom she is now playing with. I can listen to her lovely, innocent and quite naughty voice. Her voice made all my other thoughts to vanish. It rushes my eyelids to open. I followed it by opening by eyelids, which was closed by lots of unusual thoughts. I turned my gaze to the direction where those giggles came from. I noticed a group of children of both sexes playing and dancing in the rain without even noticing the mud where they were enjoying. I could hear their sound devoid of all other worries which I having these many years. Suddenly, my gaze fall on a girl who is taller than others standing there. I can still see her back only. By seeing her skeletal framework, I'm sure she crossed atleast 20. My heart wants her to turn around to show her look. I moved my head here and there to see her face. All ends in vain. I couldn't stand there. My legs starts to shake. One of my thoughts want me to leave all behind and run to her to see her face. I never interested in such things these years, eventhough I studied in U.S. surrounded by girls with short dress and bikinis. Atlast, she heard my thoughts. Now, I could see her ears with few strands of drenched hair behind it. She didn't tie her hair making it fall till her hip. She turned quite more making my heart to panic more. (Why I'm being like this? She is just a girl. Omg!) I touched my chest still breathing heavily. She atlast turned her full body to show her front. I lost myself. I couldn't stop myself from staring at her. Her ink blue with black colour Kurta matched her milky white skin. Now, I could see her aligned teeth in her pink lips with few drops of water in it while she smiling and dancing in the rain. Her lips quite tempted me. I moved my gaze over her dark smoky eyes with dark lashes. I lost completely now. Something in her eyes looks more powerful making me to hypnotized to her. I can't move my gaze from her eyes. It keep on attracting me(Oh no! What are you? Oh god! Help me). My heart flutters very faster than before. I opened my mouth to breath as air supply is not enough now. She is fully drenched. Each and every part of her make me to fall for her. By seeing her, I'm sure she would be my shoulder height, a perfect height for a couple. (Oh sh**, I'm engaged now. My fiancee is waiting in my house for my return. But I'm keep on staring at a strange girl. I made a wrong decision. Oh god!!). A part of me was raged at god for showing her too late in my life. I never feel like this when I see ritika, one of my relations stayed with my grandparents and the only girl who helped me to talk to them through videocall etc., Though we met each other only once in my life during her visit to U.S, We become friends like no other. I thought it as love when they asked for my decision for our marriage. I accepted(First ever mistake). She too love me. I should be loyal to her. Again I come out my thoughts hearing her giggle. It make my heart to flutter more. I noticed myself standing in the middle of the road where there is no traffic(reason for my choice of place for jogging), moving from the shelter where I stood before few minutes, drenched completely(Oh god!! Is this love? ) . It made me to forget everything. Simply, I lost myself there. A little curve aroused in corner of my lip thinking about my stupidity. I noticed her again. She keep on dancing in the rain. Suddenly, a shock passing through my nerves to my sense (Omg! She saw me! She noticed me) . Her gaze turned towards my direction for few milliseconds which is enough to make one die for it. She again looked at me. My heart starts to long for it. She stopped her dance. I think she noticed my stare clearly. I tried to look somewhere. I couldn't. She rolled her lens at corner of eyes to see in my direction to find whether I'm staring at her still. Unfortunately I'm. Both of us saw each other for few seconds(Oh god!! Is it called eyelock?) Our gazes separated by a horn sound of a car, pressed voluntarily to make me to notice it. I walked towards its direction after knowing it's our car. I noticed a familiar person of my age, who is my friend, relative, one of my partners in crime, my another dadaji's grandson, Shikar Mehra. He threw an stern look at me. I looked blank at him.

I asked him blankly, " Why dude? What happened? Why you bring car even knowing about my morning jogging?"

He again threw an angry look at me.

He atlast replied," dude! Usually you go for 1 hour. But today it crossed 2 hour. I thought you strucked somewhere in this rain. So I bring the car. But you are standing and enjoying the rain. It's already late. We should go to airport to pick our friend chirag."

After hearing the phrase enjoying the rain, I turned back to look at her. But she left already (Oh sh**! Shikar, you are dead. I missed her. I didn't even asked her name). I tried to find her. But in vain. Hearing the horn sound, again I turned my gaze over shikar who is throwing all angry look at me now.

Frustratingly, I asked, "What now? Why are you pressing that dumb horn?"

He replied blankly, not knowing the reason of my sudden frustration, "Its already late. We have to pick up chirag. I was saying this only. But you keep looking over there not even listening to me. What is there? Why are you like this now ? Anything wrong?".

I calmed myself understanding the situation and replied, "Nothing like that. Let's go. But I need to change my dress. It's all drenched."

He somewhat satisfied with my answer, " we'll change it on the way. Come."

I opened the door of black Benz which my uncle, shikar's father bought for us. He turned the car leaving my heart longing for her.

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Hope you guys like it. Next update will take few days. So you guys have to wait for it.

Edited by Julina27 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hy dr...
Welcome to the forum... 😊
Superb start dr...
Interesting story line...
Will be waiting for next...
Keep smiling 😉
Take care 😳

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