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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: o_gudiya

hii diya...

Lovely one..
I liked it..ishani milan vaghela turning to ishani ranveer vaghela it eould be a intresting track..
Please continue it..
Do update soon..
Do pm me when u update the next..
Take care and krep smiling.



Hi Gudiya!

Thanks dear! I am glad that you liked my Character Sketch. Yeah, Ishani is currently Mrs.Milan Vaghela but let's see what happens afterwards. I promise you, it will be an interesting track ;) I will surely continue it and will also PM you the next chapter.

You too take care and also keep smiling :)

Diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi diya

Nice character sketch
please do continue
Loved Shivanya in your FF
All the characters are cute dear
update soon



Hi Sakshi!

Thanks dear! I will continue it and I am also glad that you liked my Character Sketch. Even I love Shivanya/Mouni Roy. Thanks dear and I am happy that you found all characters cute. I will update soon.

Take care

Diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: priyanka98

Hii Dear. I liked ur way of defining all the characters. It seems interesting to read the story.
Do continue it. And
Do pm me. 😊



Hi Priyanka!

Thanks dear! I am glad that you like the way I am defining the characters and you found it interesting. I promise you that it will be an interesting story ;) I will continue it and will also PM you.

Take care.

Diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Sahil88

You can call me hafsa



Ok Hafsa 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Sahil88

You can call me hafsa


means tumhre do do id hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Chapter - 1


The sun rays fell on a beautiful face and disturbed her sleep. She woke up and stretched her arms and looked besides her. She saw her love sleeping besides her.


With a confused face, "When did he come?"


She smiled looking at him sleeping and caressed his hair. She then gave a glance to the clock which said it was 7:30.


"Oh No! It's first day after my marriage and I have to make breakfast, then lunch and afterwards dinner. I have lots of other works to do, clean this room. Oh my god! I should take bath now" She was freaking as it was her first day after her marriage. She went to her cupboard and got her dress and towel. She entered the bathroom and turned the shower on and stood under shower.


"Today is my first day and I hope I do everything proper. I hope my first day goes well, without any problems. But I am so happy that I finally married the one who I really love. But I think so yesterday I disappointed him. Tomorrow was our wedding night and he wanted my love but I disappointed him."


*Flashback*

After the wedding finished, Ishani was standing near the window of the room that was decorated with roses everywhere. She was staring at the beautiful moon with a gorgeous smile. She was thanking god for giving her the guy of her dream, to whom she loved the most. Suddenly, someone entered the room due to which Ishani turned around. It was her husband, Milan Vaghela. Ishani had a shy smile when she saw Milan entering the room with a smirk. Ishani turned around with a shyness.


Milan came to her and hugged her from behind. Ishani's face turned red when she felt Milan's hands over her belly. Milan planted a kiss on her shoulder to which Ishani closed her eyes. Milan started to plant kisses on her shoulder and around her neck.


Ishani was shivering because of Milan's kisses, "Milan..." Ishani turned to him. Milan still had that smirk on his face. Milan looked at her eyes and Ishani too looked at him with a shy smile and blush on her face. Milan pulled Ishani close and went near her lips to kiss her. Ishani who was really shy, pushed Milan slightly and escaped from his grip.


Milan(turning around with smirk) - Ishani, today is our first night and I will not leave you.


Ishani got more shy after hearing this words. Milan went to his cupboard with smile and opened his cupboard and removed a gift box. He went to Ishani and handed her the box.

Ishani(with a confused face) - What is this Milan?


Milan(with a smirk) - This is our wedding night gift. Go and wear this!


Ishani - But Milan-


Milan - I don't want any but or no! You are wearing this cause I am telling you. No go and wear this and come fast!


Ishani - Milan, but -


Before Ishani could say anything, Milan pushed her to bathroom. Milan had a lusty smile on his face and went to his cupboard to remove a bottle of beer. He took a sip from the bottle.


Milan(with a lusty face) - Today I will get your beauty which every guy wanted. I am not gonna leave you today!


In Bathroom,

Ishani was smiling the behavior of Milan.


Ishani - Yeh Milan bhi na! (seeing the gift box) - so he wants me to wear this...


Ishani with a smile unwrapped the gift paper that covered the box. After that, she was shocked to find her husband's gift. When she opened the box, her smile faded away and the tension was visible on her face.


Ishani(with shocked reaction) - Yeh, what is this! He wants me to wear this and go infront of him just wearing this!


Ishani was so shocked because Milan gifted her a red lingerie.


Ishani - Milan knows that I don't wear short clothes, not even a short dress. Then why did he gifted me this. He told me that I look beautiful in whatever I wear.


On the other side, Milan was waiting for Ishani who was already in bathroom till 20 minutes. He took the bottle of the bear and poured it into a glass as he finished his drink. Milan raised his head and took a sip where in the other side, his face had a shocking reaction. Milan saw Ishani infront of him, covered with a white sheet.


Milan(with shocked face) - Ishani, what is this?


Ishani(didn't know what to say) - Woh, Milan, actually...


Milan(suddenly he smiled) - Aah, you wore it under this white cloth. Right? Now c'mon don't get shy! I am your husband and aaj waise bhi kisi ke koi kapde nahi rehne waale. Please now remove this cloth! Don't make me wait for you more.


Ishani - Milan...lekin...


Milan(holding her shoulders and coming close to her) - Dekho Ishani, if you didn't remove this cloth then I will remove it. I don't even want a single piece of cloth between us tonight.


Ishani with watery eyes closed her eyes and went few steps ahead, facing her back to Milan's back. She removed the white cloth and turned around to Milan who was facing his back.


Ishani - Milan


Milan with a smile turned around. He was again shocked to see Ishani not wearing his gift. Ishani was wearing a red half sleeve, full length gown. This was it! This was enough to make Milan really angry.


Milan(angrily holding Ishani's shoulders and pulling her close) - What the heck is this! Do you think it's funny! Are you going to wear this in suhaagraat! You should wear what I gave you!


Ishani(crying) - Milan..woh..


Milan(with an anger) - Oh yeah, now I know why you are doing this. You don't even love me! You don't love me because I am a middle class man and you are from a rich family. You are trying to show me my right place! Right!


Ishani(crying, cupping Milan's face) - No, Milan, I really love you! I love you more then anything!


Milan(taking her hands from his cheeks disgustingly) - Don't you f**king touch me! You never let me come close to you before marriage. We were boyfriend and girlfriend but we never had any relation like that. You didn't even let me kiss you! This means that you don't love me!


Ishani(face was full of tears) - Milan, please! I love you! Milan, I didn't let you come near me because I didn't liked that all things before marriage! I didn't want that kind of relation before marriage! Milan, now we got married and you are my husband. (hugging Milan) - You can touch me Milan, no one will stop you! You can do whatever you want with me but don't leave me or say that I don't love you!


Milan(in thoughts with a smile) - Huh, Mallu Baba, chal koi nai. You can still celebrate your suhagraat with Ishani. And after all, it's just a cloth which will no longer be on her body.


Milan(coming out of hug, wiped Ishani's tears) - It's ok Ishani now, stop crying and now let's not waste the night.


Ishani gave a slight smile and nodded her head as ok.' Milan smiled and carried her in his arms. He started to walk towards the bed, with Ishani in his arms. He slowly laid her on the bed and went on the other side. He then also laid on bed next to Ishani, and then came above her. Ishani had a shy smile on her red face. Milan went close to her face to kiss her but unfortunately his phone beeped. Milan got angry...


Milan, removing his phone from his pocket - Who is calling at this time!


Ishani - It's ok Milan, go attend the call.


Milan shooked his head and got off from his bed and saw the display.


Milan(whispering to himself) - Now what they want!


He picked up the call and talked to them. After few minutes of talking to the person, Milan turned around and saw Ishani who was sitting on the bed like dulhan and looking at him.


Milan - Ishani, woh, I have to go...I have work.


Ishani - At this time? It's too late.


Milan - I know but I have to go, it's an emergency in my office. So I have to go.


Ishani - Ok, but change, you are in your sherwani.


Milan - Ok, let me.


Milan went to his bathroom to change into casual white t-shirt and his black pants. After few minutes he came out.


Milan - Ok, I am leaving.


Ishani(in a sleepy tone) - Ok Milan, come fast.


Milan - Ok.


He left.


Ishani - I think so today is not our night.

*Flashback ends*
Edited by luvishveer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Hi Dear
Nice work
so finally Ishani and Milan didn't have a wedding night
you finished at a place where I need to know what happened
what was that phone call? Hope you will reveal it soon
keep updating 😉😉😉
Edited by sakshi5050 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Oh story is soo interesting
U end it on a suspense i like it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Hy dr... The chapter ia amzing... Niz start... What's that phn call. Hope suspense reveals soon. Waiting for your next dr... Keep smiling... 😆
Edited by Mayashelly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hey dear it's a different story. ..good try hope ishveer should meet soon

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