Ranveer's unsaid feelings #4 updated 287 page 149

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Mayashelly
Hy sakshi di... Niz update... Poor amba controlled her emotions towards ragini.. She would have felt so sorry when ragini calls her dadi... This rithika is really a bitch... She made everyone easy with her plan... Feeling pity for ranveer's helplessness... How could he leave ishani here to Mumbai... So sad of ragini... She couldn't even say how she feels now... Update soon... Keep smiling... 😉

Hi Maya thanks for the comment
glad you liked the update
ya Poor Amba held in a situation to control her emotions towards Raagini
surely Amba felt so sorry for the moment when Raagini called her Dadi
surely Rithika is a bitch only
she is making everyone's life a hell
surely Ranveer's helplessness is so pity to see
he is now leaving to Mumbai without Ishai
cutie pie really a poor soul could even tell how much she feels now
ya let me update it dear
keep reading and smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

This suspense is deadly! I am hooked to know what happens. This is by far your best track, very well executed!

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful
Hii Sakshi
It was awesome update but bit painfull Poor Amba she cnt take her poti in her hand 😭 idiot ritika make her so helpless 😡 Thnx god ranveer's not belive thse letter hope ranveer find out ishani soon nd give 12345678 tightly slapped to ritka

Now i m absolutly fine nd so happy to heard that u won't end this ff thanx dr..nd i always miss u sweetie luv u lots 😳 keep rocking nd update soon...
Thanks for pm

Hi Paige thanks for the comment
glad you liked the update and sorry for makingit painful
ya poor Amba cannot even take her pothi in her hand
Rithika bitch has made all the people life a hell
happy that you liked the way Ranveer didn't believe in letter
surely he need to do something to find ishani soon
yes Rithika deserves a heavy beating

happy that you are doing good now
for now I am not going to end dear
haan dear I too missed you a lot
lots of love
keep smiling and let me update it
keep reading 😉😉😉😉

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: harisha39
HEY SAKSHI LOVED THE EPI NO WORDS TO EXPRESS ND WAITING TO KNOW WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT😳😳😳.

AND WHAT IS YOUR MOTHER TONGUE LANGUAGE???

Hi Harisha
thanks for the comment glad you loved the episode
ya surely everything will turn out to be good

My mother tongue is Tamil dear

keep reading 😉😉😉😉

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Sahil88
Really a wonderfull episode
Poor Amba become ritika putli not able to express her true feelings
Shattered Ranveer need someone who console him but amba
Sone pe suhaga
So Ranveer left Nagpur and ishani is in nagpur
Hope soon he findout about Ishani

Hi Hafsa thanks for the comment
glad you liked the episode
ya poor Amba became Rithika's puppet not able to express her feelings
Ranveer is complete shattered he really need someone to console him but
Amba to go in a big time now
Ranveer will be leaving Nagpur and yes for sure Ishani will be in Nagpur
surely everything will be sorted out dear
keep reading
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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...
Hey sakshi!!!
Sorry for not replying yesterday I was being lazy...
Bt u did an amazing job...
Well...as I thought he noticed half coocked food...
& ritika...she did a great job wid plan bt writing abt property will be biggest mistake for her...
Coz he knows that she also know she has property & she never cares for money& all...
Amba is doing all stuff bt sheis feeling guilty too...
Bt questioning abt raagini was definitely too much for ranveer...
I m liking this track far ...
This is so Intresting...
Coz I m sure this time ranveer wouldn't lose his trust on her...
Thnx for pm...

Ps. I had pmed u...hope u didn't mind... check it & reply it...

\\Hi Zuvi thanks for the comment
its okay dear no need to be sorry
and lazyness too be enjoyed in life I am too a lazy person at times no its okay
glad you liked the episode
ya he noticed the half cooked food
actually in that property only Ishveer unity has come where Rithika could have never
thought about it and she did a very big mistake there
ya Ranveer clearly know Ishani never mind about money
really Amba is so sorry now
actually Amba didn't have way so she questioned about Raagini
glad you are liking this track
happy that the story is interesting
surely this time Ishveer will win everything
I have replied for the Pm dear
keep reading
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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: o_gudiya
Vanakkam sakshi di..
Epudi erukinga...
U know sakshi di i am liking this track very much..
Its going on interesting more and more..
Hope aMVA should text ranveer as her cell phone is with her..
Poor amba.
Hope ranveer doen't leaves nagpur otherwise ishani would remain alone..
Waiting for next..update soon di..
Take care and keep smiling..:)

Namaste Gudiya Behan
Mein tku
glad you are liking the track
happy that is interesting to you
ya surely amba would have done it but she is in the supervision of Bansi
poor amba
Ranveer should not leave and yes if he leaves Ishani will be alone here
ya let me update it
dear keep reading
take care and keep smiling 😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Kindly see my "To all the IshVeer fan fiction writers" post, Sakshi. 😊

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Episode 228
Ranveer made Raagini sit in the bed that was in the floor in Ishani's room and took the trolley bag from the cupboard and kept it in the floor. He was almost needed to shout his heart out.
Ranveer(to himself in low voice):Today morning I was happy with Ishani.what has happened to our life suddenly? I really need to do something to Ishani but Maa is calling me to Mumbai. What is going on?
When he was telling it to himself there was a cry of Raagini.Ranveer turned and saw Raagini where he didn't know how to Manage Raagini without Ishani. He went near her and sat in the bed and took Raagini and made her sit in his lap.
Raagini(crying and touching Ranveer's cheek): Mama..
Ranveer(felt sorry for the state of his daughter):Raagini you are like Papa know?we both love Mama so much.(there was a tear drop falling in his one eyes):When I saw your Mama first in my life I came to know what is life? I completely lived my life just by staring at your mother but today again(both his eyes dropped tears so much) I lost her. I really don't know what to do now?Police and your Dadi are telling your Mama is wrong but...
(he cried out of control).
Raagini(seeing Ranveer's cry saw him with a silent look with tears in her eyes): Papa..
Ranveer:(with a fade smile with tears in his eyes): But Papa know more than your Mama there is nothing called purest things in the world.Now Dadi is calling me to Mumbai there is no option for me I too need to obey my mother But Let me tell you Papa will do all the possible things to bring your Mama back.Now please sleep for sometime.
Ranveer with his finger wiped Raagini's tears in her cheek and signed her for a hug were the cutie pie without any way in a sad face hugged her father. Ranveer started to caress her back to make her sleep for sometime.
Ranveer(caressing Raagini's back in thoughts): I wiped your tears Baby but now there is no one to wipe my tears.(he closed his eyes well where tear drops were falling like anything in his cheek).
Amba who was sitting in Ranveer's room bed with sad face were Bansi was sitting in the sofa with a strict eyes on Amba.
Bansi:your work is over know?Give the phone to me..
Amba saw him with a silent face where Bansi without minding her reaction got up and came to her and got the phone from her hand and kept the phone in his pocket and sat in the sofa again.
Amba(in thoughts): what is happening in our life? Today for the first time I am realizing how much deep love is Ranveer's love on Ishani. Once without understanding his feelings I was about to make Ranveer married to Rithika. Supporting that Rithika is the very big crime I have done in my life.(she felt sorry for all their state).
It was almost half an hour where the whole house was completely silent. Ranveer slowly took Raagini from the hug where the cutie pie was silently sleeping in his embrace. He took her carefully and made her lay in the bed. He got up from the bed and opened the trolley bag. He went to the cupboard and opened it and saw the Saree of Ishani. He was feeling so sad for their life now.
Ranveer:What has happened suddenly? My life and Ishani's life has completely twisted so much. My mind is really not working now.
Taking a deep breath without anyway he started to take the Saree of Ishani and kept the Saree in the trolley bag. He took all the dresses of Ishani and packed in the bag.He closed the trolley bag and kept in the room and he crossed the hall and he came to his room where Amba was sitting in the bed and Bansi was sitting in the sofa. Ranveer saw Amba with a silent look.
Amba(in a strict tone):What you are feeling for that Ishani? get ready soon its getting late we need to leave and don't tell me anything like I want to be here and help that Ishani.
Ranveer:(in a normal tone): I have never ignored your words Maa let me get ready.
Amba: Haan(she rested her head in the head rest with a attitude).
Ranveer opened his cupboard and took his trolley bag and kept it in the bed. He opened the trolley bag and started to pack his things.He completely kept all his things and when he took his last coat his eyes were so sad for a while. He was staring at the coat for some moment.That was the Red coat Ishani present to him during his Birthday.(Episode 186 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #3 page 64). He was feeling so much this moment. The way Ishani gave this coat to him during his birthday came in front of him. Seeing Bansi and Amba without letting out his feelings he folded his coat and kept it in his bag. He opened his other cupboard and took his some of the other things. There were some of the things that again made him to feel for Ishani. Those were Ishani and his photos and letters Ishani presented to him during his birthday(Episode 185 Ranveer's unsaid Feelings #3 page 62). Seeing it he really wanted this moment to hug Ishani. Controlling his tears and wiping his running nose with his hands and he took all the letters and the photos Ishani gave and kept it in his bag and he locked the bag.
Ranveer(finishing the packing he turned and saw Amba and in a so worried tone): I have packed the things let me tell my office person to do certain works and come.
Amba: Haan make it immediately its time we need to leave.
Ranveer: haan
Ranveer without anyway came out of his room and took his phone and saw Ishani with Raagini wallpaper in his phone.
Ranveer(to hismelf):What should I do now?Maa is calling me to Mumbai. If we didn't get that message I would have been here and searched for Ishani. Now that message and letter is turning Maa to hate Ishani. Maa is adamant to take me to Mumbai. Even police of Nagpur won't help me because Maa gave that letter to Police so they will trust that letter only. What to do?
Without anyway he called Sanjay and told him to come to his home. Once he finished his call he saw his house a glance with pain in his eyes. He walked slowly in the hall and came to the wall and touched the wall of the hall where his memories went back to their lovely days in Nagpur.
FLASHBACK..
Ranveer who was sitting in the sofa of the hall reading the newspaper where Ishani came out of their room making herself ready for the day. She was in her Green net Saree. Ranveer's concentration perfectly went to his wife. Ishani was about to enter the kitchen where Ranveer immediately kept the newspaper in the tea poi and went to Ishani and hugged her from behind before she enter the Kitchen.
Ishani(feeling Ranveer's hug):Ranveer in the morning itself leave me...
Ranveer(turned her towards him and saw her with a smile):you are wife for me in the morning also. Now what Raagini is doing?
Ishani(with a smile):Sleeping.
Ranveer: I have very clearly told you (he cutely moved her towards the wall of the hall and made her back hit the wall): when Raagini is sleeping Ishani should be caring her Ranveer only.
Ishani:Mr.possessive for that I cannot be in your embrace always.
Ranveer:(with a naughty smile): But I will keep you in my embrace always.
Ishani(laughed at his answer):Tk leave me let me get you coffee.
Ranveer:Nahi I don't want coffee want to be in Ishani's hug..
Ishani(resting her back well in the wall):you know? more than the bedroom in this house we have romanced in hall only.Always you will make me hit my back to the wall and you will start your romance.
Ranveer:(holding her so well):Haan really know more than bed this wall are only giving its support to romance my Ishani.
Ishani with a smile lovingly held his cheek and made him lower his head and she cutely hit his forehead with her forehead where Ranveer was smiling to her.
FLASHBACK ENDS..
Ranveer was still touching the wall of the house and was feeling for their state now. He went to his study room and took a big box and started to keep all his files in it and he closed the box and kept in his table. He saw the study room once.
FLASHBACK
Ranveer was working the complete evening even after coming back from office. Ishani came with the hot tea inside the study room.
Ishani(keeping the tea in the table):Ranveer have tea and work.
Ranveer:(working in his laptop):Just 5 minutes Ishani work is over.
Ishani:Tk finish it and have the tea you will feel fresh.(telling it she was about to leave).
Ranveer(seeing Ishani leaving):Ishani please be here for a while.
Ishani:But why?
Ranveer:Be here let me tell you.
Ishani:Tk..
Ishani was waiting where Ranveer finished his work and got up from his chair and came to Ishani.He was seeing her with a tiered look.
Ishani(without understanding):what happen?
Ranveer without any word hugged her well and rested his chin her shoulders. Ishani with a smile hugged him.
Ishani(keeping him in the hug):Ranveer what happen to you?
Ranveer(closed his eyes with a smile): you brought me tea know? But more than tea this hug will only make me refreshed. Keep me in your hug..
Ishani:(happy smile came in her face):Hmm tk.
They were hugging each other so well.
FLASHBACK ENDS..
Ranveer saw the study room with a worried look. He made sure everything is packed in the box and keeping the box in the table he came out of the study room. He saw the hall where all the incidents that happened in this house was seen by his eyes now.
The way he brought a call girl and made Ishani cry, The way Ishani brought call girls for him and they way he confessed his feelings and the way Ishani confessed her feelings in the hall came in front of his eyes. He walked and touched Raagini's swing where Ishani holding Raagini's swing and his hands holding her hands in the swing during a romance came to his mind. With a fade smile he entered the kitchen. He saw Ishani cooking in the kitchen.
Ranveer(like a small boy with a smile went to her and touched her): Ishani..
Where Ishani disappeared as soon as he touched her. He was disappointed for a while. He saw the complete kitchen the things Ishani used were in the kitchen seeing those things and the kitchen made him to think about the beautiful moments they spent in Kitchen.
FLASHBACK..
Ishani was cooking dinner for them where Ranveer was playing with Raagini in the hall. Ishani brought a dish and kept it in the dinning table and again was walking towards the kitchen where Ranveer though was playing with Raagini his eyes fell on Ishani. His wife looked so good to his eyes.
Ranveer(seeing Raagini who was playing with the toys): Baby..
Raagini: Papa.
Ranveer:Let Papa make you sit in the walker you can go to study room and play.
Raagini(with a happy smile): Papa..
Ranveer: Haan let me make you sit.
He took Raagini lovingly and made her sit in the walker and showed the study room where the cutie pie immediately moved the walker towards the study room. Ranveer with a smile seeing his daughter turned and walked to the kitchen. He saw Ishani keeping the cooked food in the bowl where he went to her and lovingly touched her shoulders.
Ishani(feeling Ranveer's presence):What are you doing here? want water?
Ranveer:Want sometime with my wife.
Ishani(with a smile seeing him):your wife is not having time now go and be with Raagini.
Ranveer:She is in my study room playing in that mean time(he turned her and pulled her close to him):see your husband.
Ishani:Ranveer always you will romance in Kitchen only?
Ranveer:you are beautiful to my eyes I cannot control me..
Ishani:leave me now. Its not the right time and its not the right place too.
Ranveer(hitting his nose with her nose):Its right place and time give your husband a kiss.
Ishani:No way..
Ranveer:(cutely demanding):Want it..
Ishani knowing he won't leave her with a cute look kissed his cheek. Asked is it enough with her head shake were he too shook his head as yes with a happy smile.
FLASHBACK ENDS..
Ranveer coming out of the flashback like a deadly person came out of the kitchen and came to Ishani's room. He was completely shaken this time. He saw the mirror in Ishani's room where he got the flashback of him making Ishani wear her Mangalsutra and putting sindoor and the way he smiled after the big fight they had.(Episode 156 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #2 page 132). He saw the bed that was on the floor.Raagini was sleeping in it now. The bed that made them one all the time. The bed that compromised their anger and made them realize their love for each other. The bed that he got for Ishani to show his anger made him to realize his wife's love. He was crying silently this time where that was the moment he heard a knock in the door. He wiped his tears and came to the hall and opened the door where Sanjay was standing in front of him.
Sanjay:Sir you told me to come.
Ranveer:See let the company operate in the way I told you all. I need to leave to Mumbai now and there are some kitchen utensils in the house. Please call for some package and movers and pack the kitchen utensils and some of the files I have packed and kept in the study room. Deliver everything to my Mumbai address.
Sanjay:Fine let me..
Ranveer:Tk(with a smile): Let me leave Sanjay had a good time working with you and let me contact you often for any business needs.
Sanjay:Okay sir. your home address in Mumbai sir..
Ranveer:Let me message you.wait for a while let me give the key of the house and please drop us in Airport Vacate the house once I leave..
Sanjay:Okay sir..
Ranveer taking a deep breath entered his room and saw Amba.She was resting her head in head rest and has closed her eyes. Bansi was still in sofa only.
Ranveer: Maa.
Amba(opened her eyes and saw Ranveer): Haan shall we leave?
Ranveer: haan let us I have packed the things let us leave..
Amba:Tk..
Amba got up from the bed where Bansi too got up and came with them. Ranveer took the bag in his room and he entered Ishani's room and brought that trolley bag and he again went to the room and took Raagini who was sleeping well.
Ranveer:Sanjay keep the bags in the car. you can take back the car its office car only know?
Sanjay:Sure sir leaving you let me park the car in office.
Ranveer:Okay.
Sanjay took both the bags where Amba and Bansi moved behind Sanjay. Ranveer holding Raagini turned and finally glanced the house that gave a beautiful life for him with Ishani. With a painful and a teary face Ranveer turned to the entrance of the house and he started to walk out of the house without heart to leave the house.He locked the house and he came to the car and sat next to sanjay where Bansi was sitting near Amba. Ranveer's mind didn't even mind it and he was not in a state to think anything logical or ask questions.
Ranveer(gave the key to Sanjay):House key Sanjay I have paid the rent online correctly only. If there is any balance settle it.
Sanjay(got the key):Okay sir..
Sanjay started to drive the car towards the Airport. There was a deadly silence in the car where taking half an hour Sanjay dropped them in the Airport. Ranveer got down holding Raagini where Amba got down Bansi was having eye on Amba so perfectly. They entered the Airport with the luggage and when it was time they got inside the flight. Amba didn't know what to tell to Ranveer. He was so sad that his face said clearly. He was seeing some other side holding Raagini in his embrace. Amba's phone was with Bansi. He was sitting next to her.Amba was not even able to give some hint to Ranveer. She was even scared that her smartness may harm Kailash or Ishani. Ranveer without heart holding Raagini slowly rested his head in Amba's shoulder where Amba with a sorry face caressed his hair. The flight took off when it was the departure time. Ranveer started his journey towards Mumbai.
That was the moment Ishani's eyelids were moving telling that she was coming back to her consciousness.
To be continued 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

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shaktiluvradz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Hey sakshi lovely update flashback scenes were awesome and feeling bad for ranveer and poor cutipie chudayil ritika should get punished for water all she did specially for separating child from her mom

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