IshVeer OS: Wounds Unhealed - Page 3

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Thank you, life is fun! Glad to see you here. ❤️ ❤️ To be frank, I think in the episode, Ranveer felt all the emotions you mentioned in the review. It's us who find it hard to relate to him for his stupid karnamas back then. I still shiver when I think of the emotions he would have gone through. Her hatred would have shattered him into pieces and her betrayal would have killed him a hundred of times without actually killing him. Unfortunately it wasn't executed well in the show itself. :( Thank you. And I'm good. How have you been?

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

O girl I am speechless I mean seriously after just a dagger away this is literally made me cry and depressed me so Mich that it took a time for me to even reply back. No need to say it reminded of which episode but this os made that one episode so meaningful that only his face is flashing in my mind. What painful time it was for him to listen every choicest of poison laden words by ishani. And what did he do still went to her that particular scene when he touches everything in jail cell was the best till now.
I must say you are a gem writer dear you changed my whole mood don't think I am complaining but this was so awesome that can't even say. He promised her that he ll die if he will separate from her and that's what happened to him. It was so marvellous that I am feeling short of words how to express but dear you deserve a standing ovation for it.
Thnx for pm dear and am really stupid to read this so late and sorry for replying you late

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Hi Jigyasa🤗

So after a long time ,I am here ,I have made my eyes to seek through ur FF😆😆 ,soon will complete all the remaining chapters on my way and report my comments there😊😊

Coming to this OS ,My ! My ! You know one thing as , I have expressed before my quench to read a dark story can reach the extremes😆😃

I just loved the way the story has taken a deep emotional path from a dark illusionary phase and the way the characters was set in ,the dynamics of the story was par excellence ,characterisation and plot requires pure hats of 👏👏

And one thing to add upon to is ,I loved the way the title had played a significant role and the story had indeed in cooperated well with the plot ⭐️⭐️

Keep writing more and more 😃

I don't find anything to suggest ,simply loved it ,ur style was indeed wonderfully ,one small suggestion that ,I feel u can add up to is throw a deep suspense element after the end of scene in an OS specially in the dark shade story that will add to richness of the plot ,you have done it wonderfully but ,I am just suggesting becz that will make your story the best of all ,hope you get my point😊😊

Pls continue writing a lot more OS ,like this ,I am in love with all your OS and FF's ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Hi, Jenny. How are you? Glad to see you back after a long time. 🤗🤗

Thank you so much for the lovely review and yes, whenever you feel I need some improvement do let me know. 😊 😊

Would you please elaborate on the last part a bit? Like an example or something you can give for the suspense part you've mentioned? Thank you once again. ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Jenny, thank you for the suggestion. I will try putting them in the next stories whenever I write them. And I have not yet read Agatha Christie. But thank you so much for the time and input. It really means a lot. :)