IshVeer OS: Wounds Unhealed - Page 2

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...

Hey EH!!!
That was speechless...

I usually don't prefer dark stories...
Always try to avoid dark ones... 😕

Bt u guyz always force me to read it by ur beautiful written stories...

It was hilarious...
When I wwatche episode when he was crying on road after knowing ishani is dead...
I was in tears... 😭
After that I never watched that episode...
& after reading ur story that scene was in front my eyes again...
& again I cried after reading this... 😭

All feelings of ranveer u described so well...
That was too easy that I was able to feel his pain...

His last line was beautifully perfect for there...

Hats off to u for this... 👏

Thnx for pm...

hi, Zuvi. Aw, I can understand your state of mind. It must be traumatizing to read something dark with absolutely no hope. About the scene you're talking about, I saw that one. But felt nothing for Ranveer. That was the only while Ranveer looked completely like a stranger to me and not the same person I'd grown to love. Though the scene I mentioned in this OS had me in tears. Thank you a lot. My mission was successful then, if it made you cry. xD

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

I'm still shivering and 😭 😭 😭 literally..
What You came with is simply something outstanding...
In the first part I was definitely going through the part presented in the serial itself.. But yes CTV's definitely didn't avail the event or more probably to say that they tried their best to ruin his character..
But You saved it again.. An kept his dignity his prosperity and above all his Love alive...
I don't know why but for me Ranveer's love is something precious though Ishani also sacrificed a lot but still the place which Ranveer's Love made in my heart Ishani's is not of that place... In other words I respect Ishani's love and I truly love Ranveer's Love..
Coming to the second part...
The time when started where nothing matters to Ranveer for that night... My hands started trembling right at the moment and by its end my tab literally dropped of my hands and when I got my senses back tears were rolling down my cheeks and were not coming to stop...
They are somewhat lesson now but still...
And You know what my heart literally felt a bit pain.. Which it feels on some panic ocassions in life and of course while seeing Ranveer in pain in serial... I don't know what type of connection it is,, but it is as..

But to You it really deserves an applause 👏 👏 👏
I really really loved it.. I think more than love their is no strong emotion to feel.. So I simply loved it dear..
Thanks for pm..
Love You

Thank you, darling! Ah, the CVs and their antics to ruin our Ranveer... I still curse them for that and wish something could prevent all that from happening. Alas for us. And I agree with you on that. I definitely admire Ishani's love and her ability to sacrifice herself for him, but Ranveer's love can't be matched by anyone. Not even her. And I'm really sorry for what this story did to you, but I just had to post it. Thank you so much, mate! :) :)

Originally posted by: mafaaza12

Hey what's this? U always cum up wid tragic os😭

But I have to confess smthing that I go through

this even after ur dark os alert, b'cas of ur way of writing😳.

Hope will get os frm u wid happy note😊

Hi! Thank you! And, um, I have written a couple of happy ones too. 2 of them have a happy ending and another one is completely happy that even that suprises me. 😳 😳 Not kidding, but yeah. Thank you again. :)

Originally posted by: life_is_fun

Ahh... EH... 😭

How I always wished to know the pain, the numbness, the fast paced heart beats, the deadness, the solitude, the loneliness, the emptiness Ranveer wud have experienced when he was about to lose Ishani forever, the only girl he ever loved with his whole heart, his reason to smile, his reason to live and his reason to die as well... 😭

And this OS has it all... 😊😊

Brilliant piece of work dear..👏. Beautiful, beyond words can express❤️...

Hope u are doing good dear...😊😊

Thank you, life is fun! Glad to see you here. ❤️ ❤️ To be frank, I think in the episode, Ranveer felt all the emotions you mentioned in the review. It's us who find it hard to relate to him for his stupid karnamas back then. I still shiver when I think of the emotions he would have gone through. Her hatred would have shattered him into pieces and her betrayal would have killed him a hundred of times without actually killing him. Unfortunately it wasn't executed well in the show itself. :( Thank you. And I'm good. How have you been?

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Gosh!

My first question--When do you girls allocate time for writing? :-/

Now to the review:

This was sadistically beautiful! This sadistic feel is the reason for which I love dark stories though I have read hardly ten of them. And you have always made his character a level higher. The gloomy, painful fate with Ranveer Vaghela--No other hero has that. Ranveer is Ranveer.

Okay, so the first half of the OS was that of the show's, (I guess?) and the second was your interpretation. You know something? While watching the same scene in the show, I scolded Ranveer for being so supportive of our ever famous Ritika -_- And while reading the same scene in your OS now, I feel...feel really bad for him. The turmoil he would have undergone!

The last scene was just as perfect as it was! I always wanted such an end, again! After I watched the first few episodes of our show, I always wanted such an end- Our beloved Ranveer dying. And it again, never happened. But you always surprise me!

Lovely, lovely piece of writing, sweetheart! Love you!

AV

Ps. Yay! One review done!

Trust me, Arushi, time in hand is just as much Cooper, Brand and Doyle did when they were on Miller's planet. It's just I had to write this pending work for sooo long, that I did. 😃

Thank you. And I agree. The fate like Ranveer... not everyone has that. Not everyone is blessed with their heart getting broken again and again for merely loving someone so deeply!

Yes, the first part was the show with some more of addition from my side since that definitely would have taken place although we never got to know that. There's no suprise. I might have been mad at him as well but the thing is, I saw the episode on Rishtey few weeks back which had completely different influence over me.

Yeah, many of us wanted him to die him in the end and I felt he will till the Milan track ended. But in the last one felt he wouldn't die and they'll reunite. Which was good in itself. :) thank you once again.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Ha... Why is heartbreak everywhere? Heartbreak, heartbreak, heartbreak. <\3

The first part of this OS literally reminded me of that episode. One of my cherished ones, yes. Because for the first time, I felt love. And all you girls like killing off Ranveer? :o Seriously, that poor soul. :'(

This OS clearly requires a standing ovation for its beautiful narration, description and the setting. *claps* Ranveer's pain bleeds through it all making it difficult for me to distinguish, when has he really ever been at peace? And Ishaani's words were no less than a thunderbolt which did its job by striking him. <\3

In the show too, Ranveer had promised Ishaani that he would be the first among the two to die when the time for annihilation came. Here, you've portrayed just that. Whether in pain or separation, it's Ranveer who dies first. Ishaani would be hanged tomorrow but she would probably not come to know that the person for whom she would be doing this all would be dead by then. <\3 <\3

Girl, you rock! Keep writing more! :D :D

Love,

Effulgent.

So finally found someone who liked the scene (I'm sure everyone did but few were those who'd cherish the episode ;) ). Killing Ranveer off has been my fantasy ever since I saw the show. His love was meant to be immortal and something that would last probably forever. Few are those who can love like him (even the fictional characters).

Whenever I heard Ishani say something to him, I've ALWAYS marvelled at her ability to do so. How could she look into his eyes and utter anything that she knew would hurt him, let alone kill him internally. To be brutally honest, her cruelty towards him was what made me want to kill him already because he deserved atleast to be in peace if not his love or happiness.

Yeah, Ranveer's promises in the show about death were scary. But he'd loved her so much that even God would grant him all his wishes proving even He wouldn't defy Ranveer's love.

I assume Ishani will know he's died. And I'd somewhere like to believe it happened like in the show. Someone saves her right before she's about to be hanged and when she comes out of the jail, in the market she sees in a news channel that Ranveer has passed away. So sadistic of me, no? :/ And thank you so much, darling. :) :)

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Ah, the undying pain of heartbreak.💔💔

Honestly girl, how do you do it every time? 😲😲You toldmeto keep my jootas and chappals ready for you. 😉😉Well, they are ready. 😈😈But because you really managed to depress me with this one. 😭😭Thiswas reallylike as though someone ran a dagger through my heart.

Coming to this OS, your story starts from the episode where Ranveer goes to meet Ishaani in the jail for one last time before her sentence but is shooed away by the jailerwith statements that Ishaani made her say while she was hiding away from him. 😭😭

But that doesn't matter here, because thisis about Ranveer. 😒😒His one-sided, undying love that has to end with a heartbreak. 🥺🥺His pain, his loneliness, his suffering all the way along that he has to fight alone, until his last breath. 😔😔To live and wither way like the leaves on an autumn day with the single fact that she would never love him, nomatter what. 🤔🤔

You've written his emotions sostarkly painful that it made me gulp painfully more than one time.😵😵Especially the ending. He found his last breath with nature, succumbingfinallyto something he could never win against. 😕😕He always said that he's die first, if ever they were separated. He lived up to it. 😭😭I don't know whether Ishaani would get hanged the next day, but he sealed his fate that night. 😳😳

Oh, I could go on and on about this OS and about all theanguish that he must have gone through, but I won't say anything because you've penned it all soclearlywith everysingle thought and emotion that he's been through in those last minutes ofhis life. 👏👏

Keep fulfilling my sadistic bouts with works like this girl.⭐️⭐️And do come out from your hiding, you're perfectly safe now.😆😆

Love,

LM ❤️

tehehehe. I know you won't throw your joota and chappals at me. I'm safe. 😳 😳

And thank you so much! ❤️ ❤️ Pain of heartbreak- especially for Ranveer- is always going to be deeper and much more tragic than the normal. Killing him off is fun (at times, given the situation) but it certainly gets depressing since despite our sadistic approach towards him, we all know he deserves happiness as a living and not the kind of life he is forced to live with. But again, if he can't have that happiness, it's better to find peace in another world. Uh, these thoughts happen to be my biggest inspiration to write about his death. :|

About Ishani, I myself would want her to live for a while so that she atleast comes to know how deep and intense his love truly was. And when he did say he'd die without her, he meant it. She should've been the one understanding and acknowledging it.

hehe. Feels relieved finally. Thank you once again. And yeah. Sadistic ideas in my mind happen to be like cells in human body (if you got my meaning).

Originally posted by: tnzila

breathtaking OS😭

Brilliant work EH👍🏼👏👏
i dont known how much i love Ranveer's character but your OS again fall me to love with this character
😳😳

Hi, tnzila. So good to see you after so very long. Thanks a lot for the lovely comments. And Ranveer is a character it's so impossible to fall out of love from, isn't it?

Originally posted by: robal

I am speechless...wow, that was some work. Wow, this is exactly what I wanted to see in MATSH, I mean not the end, but his feelings, what he felt and all...Thank you for the PM, if it wasn't for your PM, I wouldn't have read it since I hardly come on the forum. I wish I could read something everyday from you, I look forward to all your work. Thanks so much.

Thanks, robal! :) Yeah, we all wanted to see his feelings being shown properly instead of doing something very unnaturaly out of character nonsense. Thank you once again. :)

O girl I am speechless I mean seriously after just a dagger away this is literally made me cry and depressed me so Mich that it took a time for me to even reply back. No need to say it reminded of which episode but this os made that one episode so meaningful that only his face is flashing in my mind. What painful time it was for him to listen every choicest of poison laden words by ishani. And what did he do still went to her that particular scene when he touches everything in jail cell was the best till now.
I must say you are a gem writer dear you changed my whole mood don't think I am complaining but this was so awesome that can't even say. He promised her that he ll die if he will separate from her and that's what happened to him. It was so marvellous that I am feeling short of words how to express but dear you deserve a standing ovation for it.
Thnx for pm dear and am really stupid to read this so late and sorry for replying you late