Os:A day in ishveers life turned Ss..updated part 6*page 15 - Page 4

Originally posted by: VC288

Hey!! 😃

Afrah, this was superb!! 👏

Awww!! Shaveer is shooo cute!! 😳 😳

I loved the way he denied to drink milk, the way he denied to eat and how he created mess in kitchen! 😳 😳

I want to read from you more now!! Ishveer's nok zok as always!! Cute. 😳

Ranveer is going to office on Sunday? Looks like he has been planning surprise. 😃 😆


Do update soon!

Loads of love
Vc

Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan

Oh I totally forgot to PM u.. I thought soo but I got into something n mere dimag se nikal gaya...as u were read my os 1st I wanted u read the p2 aslo first...so sorry😭

Really was it that nyc??😳😳

Its okey , I understand dearie Dont say sorry we are friends na

hey sweety ,,, its really awesomme darl keep update y dont the show d writers are not thinkling like you... kudos to u darl betwn very nice name shaveer

Hii...its wonderful keep writing I am waiting for net update 😊

Hi dear nice chap. ishveer son so cute and naughty.i alwaye want to see ishveer kid in the show. Keep writing & update soon dear

Hi Afrah!

This was very good! Who told you this was not fine? You really penned it down well <3

I loved the bedroom scene where he makes her sleep. Heye! Nazar na lag jay! :D

Update the next part soon <3

AV

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Afrah 😃😃

Amazing update dear ,loved it so much👏👏

the way he made her sleep and the granny ,grandson convo was so sweet ,loved it 😳😳

Do continue soon 😛

hey its really lovely darling awesooome...anya/... yo r doin a great job keep updated dear lots and lots of hug to you👏

Hi Afrah,,
Today only I came know your OS...
Lovely one dear it was beyond amazing
You have done a great job
all were ishveer moments of being Parents

Shaveer wow really a cute son they have
He is so cute in your OS
Loved all the 4 parts

you simply made me speechless lovely os dear keep updating
Nice one👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: naush2015

Awesome updates!your ff is very sweet and romantic.but plz dont take this much time to update.waiting for next and thanx for pm.