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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Hi Arfah!

I have noticed you here a few times...But yeah, Welcome to the forum!

I liked MM's OS actually. I wanted her to make it an FF. But sadly, she is already writing three. :( So, I am asking you, can you make it an FF? Would love to know more <3

This was beautiful, poetic! <3

AV

Hey 😊 as it is my first work...can't say if i can make it a ff or not bt i will surely continue with some parts and then lets see if i make it...😕

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VC288

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Hi afrah!!

It was wonderful!! 😃

You're fearing for nothing yrr!! Everyone have that fear in their mind and that's natural but you write soo beautiful and we all want to read more from you!! 😳

You are my companion!! Inspired by MM!! I'm too, inspired by her! She's such a sweetie 😳😳

Do write dear!! Awesome it was ,absolutely!! Shaveer!!❤️ loving it. PlZz!! Make it ff na!!

Loads of love
Vaishali

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: naxathira
Oh dear so sry AFRAH...i calld u arfah..keep up the positive spirit n continue writing..m more a music luver than a buk lover...but i luvd ur os ...hugs.

I dont accept sorry from friends jo... Me too love music rather than books... But I love ishveer seeing evry1s craze cudn't stop myself from writing...🤣... Love and hugs...😳

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
Hi my dear Afrah🤗
How was u r day?
Hope u had a wonderful day😉
Wow !What an amazing update really dear,loved it so much👏👏
Wow I am in love with Shaveer ,cute little boy ,I really really want that character to appear onscreen,a cute little boy of our Ishveer,he is so awesome ,wow it was so cute and conversations with Amba in the kitchen and all and that chocolate scene was just amazing my dear😃😃
Update soon ,I want to know what is going to happen next😛

Hey sweetheart,

I got this part ready in d morning itself but cudn't post it due to posts limit...soo i don't noe myself how i passed the whole day.. how eagerly i was waiting to share with u all..🤣

I am glad that u like my Os and ofcozz Shaveer😊

Baby On screen?? Consummation hi nahi hua abhi tak do saal hone ko aarhe hai show ke😭😭

Edited by AnYa_ArMan - 9 years ago

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ..BABYGIRL..
hey sweetie🤗
This was beautiful❤️❤️
I love the name shaveer 😳😳
and ishu expecting next baby.. wow😳
please make it a ff n update soon😳
loads of love
AASTHA🤗

Hey babydoll 🤗

Happie that u liked it...trying to write more lets see

how far can i go.

Updated p2 already.

Loads of ❤️

Afrah

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Bloomfield

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi Afrah!

this was beyond cuteness! I loved it sweetie. I know you have inhibitions to write. But you write really well.Make it an FF :-)

Update the next one soon <3

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VC288

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan

Tnx a ton vaishali 😳...yes I also love the name Shaveer its really beautiful as it has both ranveer and ishanis part in it.

Yes MM is such a wonderful writer...her imaginations takes us out of this world😉😛...
So u also write ff n os haan?? Wud love to read from u too😃😊
Will update soon keep waiting dear...😛

no I have not written os till now. Will try that some day. 😃

I am currently writing my FF. 😳 you can read it 😳 it's name is true soulmates. I'm happy that you have decided to continue . part 2 huh? That's really nice!! Still haven't read it. But I will read it now. 😳 😃 and will reply then.

Loads of love
Vaishali

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VC288

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hey!! 😃

Afrah, this was superb!! 👏

Awww!! Shaveer is shooo cute!! 😳 😳

I loved the way he denied to drink milk, the way he denied to eat and how he created mess in kitchen! 😳 😳

I want to read from you more now!! Ishveer's nok zok as always!! Cute. 😳

Ranveer is going to office on Sunday? Looks like he has been planning surprise. 😃 😆

Do update soon!

Loads of love
Vc

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Afrah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer
Hey sweetie🤗

So there is no secret that I love kids 😳😳 Especially shararati kids, they are shoo adorable😆 IshVeer 's son is too cute 😳😳 Ishani 's covo with her mother in law was also very sweet😳😳

Verry nice continuation , do continue soon and kindly send pm when u update😃 You are a doing a really great job dear🤗🤗

With love
MM❤️❤️

Oh I totally forgot to PM u.. I thought soo but I got into something n mere dimag se nikal gaya...as u were read my os 1st I wanted u read the p2 aslo first...so sorry😭

Really was it that nyc??😳😳