Ishveer OS:Metaphysically,I am physical.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Effulgent
Jenny! This is one fabulous OS! I liked your language, expression, and usage of new words. You have included all themes like angst, suspense, romance, hurt/comfort and much more. This is your first OS? There's already great improvement here. :-)

Here Ranveer and Ishaani didn't know each other from childhood. Hmmm. That's quite interesting. And a big 'wow' for Ishaani's family. They pampered her, unlike the greedy loons in the show.

Keep it up, Jenny. And write more and more.

Love you loads,
Effulgent

Hi dear Chaitra🤗

How are u my dear?

have a wonderful Sunday😃😃

Yes,This is my first OS ,when it comes to IshVeer ,I have done many more on several other couples😳

I am glad u ,liked my OS ,my dear😊😊

I always wanted everyone to adore Ishaani ,except Ranveer we had no one to do it in this show, hence I made up my mind to construct the Os in such a way as well as , I thought let it be unique from the show ,hence I made it in this way ,they are not childhood friends anymore in my story😳

I am happy to hear reviews from u dear😃😃

Have an awesome day,love Jenni😊

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Neetu

@njan20

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Superb concept dear ⭐️ words will be short hw beautiful it ws.. loved it dear 😳😳 Aww Ishveer lip lock, the way Ranveer caress her hair, Ishani with baby bump she is carrying their 1st baby

I must say you're a good writer 👏👏

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: VC288
You have done really supurb job!!!

First OS huh???

Keep writing Jenni!!😃😃

Hi Vaishu 🤗

I am so happy to hear this from u sweet heart '

Yup this is my first OS on IshVeer but not my very first OS, I have written several others before😳

Have an awesome Sunday😃😃

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: amazing3
This is "damn" beautiful (forgive my language).
Every subject you can think of was included in your OS.

Very nice Jenni. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Hi dear Amazing🤗

My God ,I just love whatever u say ,no problem with the language😳😳

I am so glad ,that u liked it 😃😃

Will write more😉

Have an awesome Sunday😉

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ShaktiLuvsRadhu
This is really beautiful and I indeed enjoyed reading it.😊😊
The suspense u maintained till the last.And I loved it👏 Will love to read more from you Jenny😊🤗
Loads of Love Jenny❤️

Hi Roshini🤗

I am glad to hear amazing praises from u my dear girl😃😃

Suspense is what I love to maintain ,coz I am a suspense killer😆😃😃

Have an awesome Sunday😉

For sure will write more😳😳

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Anup

@BeEverVectorMan

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Greetings JENNY,

YEAH a man's world is his wife and their children..a complete feeling for both the couple...like something is given completeness to their love..

THANKS JENNY it was so sweet and beautifully written...

Please do write more...😳

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful
Wow.. awesome OS dear

thanks a lot dear😃

I am glad u liked it 😊

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Oh My!

This was beautiful Jenni. Right from the description of their characters till the end...Everything was just perfect <3 <3 I loved it, to the core! This had romance, care, suspense, everything <3 <3 Thank you for writing such a beautiful OS...

Hi dear Chotti🤗

Have an awesome Sunday😳😳

Wow ,I am so glad that u liked my work🤗

I must thank u actually for pouring out wonderful comments for my OS dear😊😊

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ..BABYGIRL..
omg jenni this was brilliant ❤️ u write so beautifully 😊
from ranveer's description to ishani's it was amazing ❤️
every girl want to be pampered and want to be treated like a baby ❤️ and when she met wid accident i was like no no please no sad ending but then the proposal and the kiss 😳 it was all awesome... and then them expecting a baby and ranveer wanting a babygirl same as his princess😊
it was soulfully beautiful...
waiting to read more from u😊
loads of love and hugs to u❤️
AASTHA🤗

Hi my dear Baby Girl🤗

I am glad u liked it Sweety🤗

Wow ,I loved reading ur awesome review😳😳

Will write more😉😉