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powergirlpriya

@powergirlpriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

happy holi dear🤗
res😉

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1ishveerian

@1ishveerian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

First of all 👏 👏 for an awesome chapter again,
How can You write so beautifully
Now coming to the points which strike more powerfully than the whole chapter,
1: what can I do is to give her my heart... my soul. My existance
It shows the purity of his love so clearly, its Ishani who is not getting him 😭 😭 , though she got it but after hurting him and even herself alot 😭
2: when things become too much to bear, I go for a run,
You are going for the <font size="4">psychologic
al analysis</font> sweetheart, so far as I'm getting You, because the things which CV's have just mentioned for once and twice, You are going for their treasons as well as their effects, beside Your story, whether it would be about iron rod or about Ranveer's lon run' I think so', 🤔
3: dreams are a mystery no man can solve it as it has never been fully understood
Its realism shown over here, another thing adding more to realism as You said thatcan we run out from our destiny,
4: what matters is what people whom I love think about me. what matters is what Ishani thinks about me.having a universality this fits best for RNveer, because for him nothing matters more than Ishani,it reminded me of Ranveer's dialogue that ''farq parts Thai unki bato'n ka jo apky apny hon baqi dunya gai tail(oil) leny 😆 😆
5: last but not the least is his finding solace in the realm of nature, yeah You are absolutely right that there are all equal, its presented beautifully dear,again from me 👏 👏

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Sakshi

@sakshi5050

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Nice one dear😛😛
Your writing is creating Magic to the readers
The way you described Ranveer's feels were awesome👏👏👏
overall a lovely episode keep writing 😉😉😉

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Katniss07
Reserved.

Will try to reply soon. Btw congratulations on book 3 !! 🥳 🤗 Aur bhago mat , chapters are getting pilled up for me , slow down. 😆 😛

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 Hehe, and sorry for the quick updates. 😆😆 Vacation time always tends to make my writing keeda get a little stronger and faster. 🤣🤣

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Ah! I forgot!

I need your autograph, like real soon!

*☺️☺️☺️*

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...
Hey LM!!!
Sorry for late...

Such an amazing chapter...

U have described ranveer & his emotions very well...

Ranveer confessed his love in front of ishani...😊

Bt Chiraag always wrong timings of this idiot😡

I love the convo. Between harshad parekh & ranveer...

He already knew that about ranveer's love towards ishani...

That's why he didn't wanted to see her with chirag...

Bt ishani...😕

Harshad's dialogue about 'Akele ka pyaar' was also good...

He was the one who told ranveer to sacrifice his love & move on...

I didn't expected this from him...😲

Chapter was as usual Intresting...

Now I have to wait for interlude 15 to read rest...🥱

Update soon...

thnx for pm...

Ps. In book 3 there are epistles right???

So how many epistles tgere are?

Sorry bt I can't wait to read next Interlude that's why😆

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️

Oh yeah, Chirag has been the root cause of all the major trouble in their lives. And yes, Ranveer did confess it to her, but it didn't really have any effect. 😭😭 I'm glad that you liked Ranveer's emotions and the Harshad-Ranveer conversation as well. 😳😳

Yes, he knew that Ranveer loved her all along and that's why he was hesitant to get her married to Chirag as well. 😛😛 Well, as to him being the one to tell Ranveer to sacrifice his love and move on, there's another factor too involved after this. 😒😒

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Ps. Every book has 20 epistles, so unfortunately you will have to wait for quite long. 😆😆

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: powergirlpriya
Hii LM

congrats for 100 pages dear👏👏👏
heart breaking update dear😭😭😭.ranveer give his opinion about chirag was good dear.poor ranveer his heart was break after know about ishani love chirag was so sad 😭😭😭ranveer angry on ishani was good she deserved this.😡ishani such a fool girl she never understand ranveer felling about her 😡 finally ranveer say to 3 magical word to ishani but i don't like they way😭😭harshad know about ranveer feeling for ishani but he never told her😡😡ranveer and harshad scene is so amazing dear 👏👏he take to all sacrifice to ranveer but he never take any sacrifice to ishani wah what a great Mr.harshad parekh.😡😡i can't stop my tears think about ranveer condition 😭😭ranveer never agents his mota babuji 😲he complete all wish to mota babuji👏👏but ranveer know they wish more difficult for him 😭😭harshad all wish to stay away to ranveer form ishani 😲ranveer should be move on it so difficult for him.

thank for pm dear🤗

Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️

Oh yeah, this was a very heart-breaking chapter for me to write too.

Thinking about what Ranveer must have been through after knowing that Ishaani loves Chirag and his entirely confession going in vain is something quite painful for me to think about as well.

Coming to Harshad and Ranveer's conversation, well Harshad knew that Ranveer loved Ishaani and could see that she loved him too, but he never sought to speak to Ishaani about it because before he could, Ishaani dropped the bomb of being in love with Chirag upon him. 😒😒 Harshad was hesitant about the whole affair and wanted to wait for Ranveer to return till he took any certain decision. 🤔🤔

As to him never asking for Ishaani to sacrifice anything, well if we are to see this logically, Harshad respected Ishaani's choice at the end of the day and gave her the freedom to make her own decision (even though this panned out terribly for everyone involved 🤢🤢). And then again, Chirag had played his cards well enough to have everyone in his trap that nobody would really have a say.

As to Ranveer completing his Mota Babuji's wishes, well he was halfway through breaking it but the main incident in Interlude 16 (yes, I've pushed it ahead by one more chapter) was why he decided to see through his wishes. 🥺🥺 And Harshad had Ranveer's best interests in mind at the end of it all, because he knew both him and Ishaani better than the two of them would have hoped. 😳😳

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful
Hiii LM!!!

Another great update dear that was so
deep...u describe ranveer thought absulnetely amazing. How much he love
her mota babu and ishani! he affaied to think about whole world and her destiny but then realised he never changed her destiny!

its so beautiful the emotion of the chapter come aross well. this too one things was so true his feeling love for ishani pure love and that never changed.
Sorry for small reply...
Thanks for pm...

Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ And please don't apologize, it's completely alright. 😆😆

Yes, you've said it so well, and I'm really pleased that you liked his POV. He loves his Mota Babuji and Ishaani too much. 😳😳 As to their destiny, well he's just 17 right now, so his mind tends to ponder upon the future like most of us. 😕😕 Poor thing doesn't know what's in store for him. As to his feelings for Ishaani, well you'll come to know eventually. 😛😛

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hey dear hope you are fine
So I need to tell you something that you have seriously learned some magic tricks in writing I am sure of it now I mean how much depth you show in your writing it astonishes me
Dear seriously I am reading your every chapter at least 3 times on an average and each chapter bewitched my mind like each and every chapter transform be into different world altogether and seriously am not exaggerating it
There is not anything which you have not described in this whole ff though am waiting for romance but you shown your that power but still am waiting for this
You know in this chapter you have beautifully covered how suffering a major fall or a dead end in life ranveer again rose back this time more powerful and mature than he was. this chapter shows how long he have came in life to face all these and still be the best one
It's so true sometimes we don't need anyone just nature to pour out our emotion and let everything fall in place with the help of nature
So poor guy he should take part in marathon
And the fact that what society thinks of him and what he feels with backing of few loved ones was very well written dear
Though love died but he survived in her arms was the best line
This ranveer is so much mature and responsible I mean he knows how to cherish each and everyday of our life despite being repeatedly reminded by our people that where he belongs to
So it's 2004 now they must be in teenage section
But ishani have still not shared her nightmare with him but he is a darling to support her secretly in that
Now you have started with book 3 let's see what more best things we have in our way
Though nothing can beat your interludes writing but this chapter was so calm and helped me in rewinding myself
I loved it dear I know m sounding stupid but seriously this chapter have made me speechless
Thanks for pm
Waiting for next

Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so thrilled that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ I'm doing well and I hope that you are doing great too. 😃😃 And God, every time I read your review, I'm smiling and blushing like an idiot. ☺️☺️ And whoa, seriously? 3 times? 😲😲

Coming to the review, hehe, I'm not going to say anything except that sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. 😳😳 This chapter has been pretty rejuventaing for me to write as well, and somehow this chapter's maturity and tranquility managed to evoke a strange sense of satiation within me as well.

As to Ranveer, he's been through a lot but it's the lessons that he learns from them is where his strength lies. No man can ever truly progress unless he has experiences and their lessons from it as his beacon of light to face what lies ahead for him. 😛😛 And yes, sometimes the presence of nature is what we need to connect back to our roots and realize that we are a very, very small part of what the Universe beholds for us. ☯️☯️

And yes, he should consider participating in a marathon. 🤣🤣 As to the part about the society, it's something I truly believe and live by as well. 😎😎 And yes, a lot of this chapter's philosophy is inspired from my own beliefs in life. 😆😆 It was after my grandpa's death that I realized what it was to cherish every day and live every day to the fullest and value what you have with you rather than cry upon what you don't. 😛😛 Sigh, life's taught me a lot too quickly.

Moving on, yes, this Book will be covering 2004-2005, so they're going to be at the prime of their teenage phase with all the classics. 😉😉 Yes, she hasn't shared her nightmare with him yet, but he knows how to manage her through it. I'll be getting into more detail on that with the next update. 🤔🤔

Book 3 is again going to be me exploring another equation of their growing bond and connection, so I'm pretty excited about it. I just hope that its turns out decently. 👍🏼👍🏼 Yeah, the interludes and the epistles are two contrasts when I sit to write them, but I'm glad that you enjoy both. 🥳🥳

Thank you so much once again and I'll have the next chapter up soon! ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian
First of all 👏 👏 for an awesome chapter again,
How can You write so beautifully
Now coming to the points which strike more powerfully than the whole chapter,
1: what can I do is to give her my heart... my soul. My existance
It shows the purity of his love so clearly, its Ishani who is not getting him 😭 😭 , though she got it but after hurting him and even herself alot 😭
2: when things become too much to bear, I go for a run,
You are going for the psychological analysis sweetheart, so far as I'm getting You, because the things which CV's have just mentioned for once and twice, You are going for their treasons as well as their effects, beside Your story, whether it would be about iron rod or about Ranveer's lon run' I think so', 🤔
3: dreams are a mystery no man can solve it as it has never been fully understood
Its realism shown over here, another thing adding more to realism as You said thatcan we run out from our destiny,
4: what matters is what people whom I love think about me. what matters is what Ishani thinks about me.having a universality this fits best for RNveer, because for him nothing matters more than Ishani,it reminded me of Ranveer's dialogue that ''farq parts Thai unki bato'n ka jo apky apny hon baqi dunya gai tail(oil) leny 😆 😆
5: last but not the least is his finding solace in the realm of nature, yeah You are absolutely right that there are all equal, its presented beautifully dear,again from me 👏 👏

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked this. ⭐️⭐️

Coming to your review, you've stated the first point perfectly.

Second point, check again. I like exploring the things that the CVs have left incomplete and without a story. 😳😳 It helps me learn more about the characters as well as connect the dots with the story with more grace. 😛😛

Third point, check again. Dreams are something very complex that no man has been able to give a proper and satisfactory answer to till date, and it's again one of my beliefs as well, so I'm glad that you found it realistic. 😆😆 Fourth point, you've picked up the perfect instance to explain this. 👍🏼👍🏼 Coming to the last one, I'm happy that you liked this too. 😃😃

Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Ps. Send me the second part of your OS as well so that I can check it together and then post it together accordingly. 😉😉