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Posted: 9 years ago
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Soo glad u liked it Suta darling❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi there, cherie! 🤗🤗 Sorry for such a late review, I've been caught up with work.


This chapter was honestly such a bliss to read. When I started the chapter first, I went all "Hein, yeh kab ho gaya?!" 😲😲 but as I went on, I realized that it was a dream. 😛😛 A very, very heart-warming dream at that. 😳😳 After everything that IshVeer have been through, their kids will be the ultimate reward for all their pains.



I love the way most of you portray IshVeer's girls as a Daddy's girl. ❤️❤️ The virtue of being a dady's girl is alluring and has a lot of incentives of it's own. ☺️☺️ Poor Ishaani has respite from nowhere. 😆😆 But then again, it's endearing. 🤗🤗 Poor Ishaani, sapne mein bhi could not enjoy when Angela came and woke her up so rudely. 🤣🤣



Do please, please update the next chpater soon! 🤗🤗 I can't wait to see how they will celebrate Ranveer's birthday. ⭐️⭐️⭐️



Love you loads and loads,
LM ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Hi there, cherie! 🤗🤗 Sorry for such a late review, I've been caught up with work.


This chapter was honestly such a bliss to read. When I started the chapter first, I went all "Hein, yeh kab ho gaya?!" 😲😲 but as I went on, I realized that it was a dream. 😛😛 A very, very heart-warming dream at that. 😳😳 After everything that IshVeer have been through, their kids will be the ultimate reward for all their pains.



I love the way most of you portray IshVeer's girls as a Daddy's girl. ❤️❤️ The virtue of being a dady's girl is alluring and has a lot of incentives of it's own. ☺️☺️ Poor Ishaani has respite from nowhere. 😆😆 But then again, it's endearing. 🤗🤗 Poor Ishaani, sapne mein bhi could not enjoy when Angela came and woke her up so rudely. 🤣🤣



Do please, please update the next chpater soon! 🤗🤗 I can't wait to see how they will celebrate Ranveer's birthday. ⭐️⭐️⭐️



Love you loads and loads,
LM ❤️❤️



Hi my beautiful senorita🤗🤗 Please dont say sorry , I have told you it before that u can write a review six months later and i wont mind😳 I hope your work is going good , missed u tons 🤗🤗 It's not the same without you babe😉😉

Really ? Aww shooo happy shappy🥳 Hahaa LM , you really thought for a minute that it was happening ? I am so glad , while writing this I was thinking LM is going to understand with the first sentace that this is dream😆😆 Yeah very cute dreams😳😳 Aww I love kids , and IshVeer with kids are just to beautiful

Yeah the daughter Ishani dreamt about was a totally daddy 's girl So true 😳😳 Hahaa poor Ishani , all the girls in her family is head over heads in love with Ranveer❤️❤️ Luckily Ishani founds it adorable and falls for him more😳😳 You mean Disha na ? Angela was the sweet one asking her if she was okey😆

I will try but my schedule is really hectic 😆😭😭 Yeah I will write about his BD soon , and I hope u all like it 😳😳😳

I love you way more honey
Yours MM❤️❤️
Edited by MM123456 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi there , cherry ⭐️

First if all congratulations on the new thread 👏 👏👏
And now to the chapter , what can i say ☺️ , i went to dreamland while reading the chapter , Ishu dreaming of her family

At the first when started it read , i thought * Did i miss a chapter?*
😲🥱 , but then i realized its a dream and then my level of excitement went down notch but hey! it was a bliss reading it 😃 , MM if the dream is itself so so beautiful what would it be like when it really happens ?
please make this dream come true na ⭐️

Ishveer twins☢️ ⭐️⭐️----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Prem is such an cutiepie!! ❤️ , and the kitchen romance part ☺️
its was beautiful

MM ,you did a excellent job on this chapter it was beyond lovely and sweet ⭐️⭐️ , i look forward on readign the next chapter so please update it asap 😆
( I know I'm being demanding here , but your chapters are too beautiful , kya kare ?😉 ) ( But just update when you're free ofc 😳 )

PS:Shorrry for late reply 😛


Your shoulsister
Ash😉






Edited by IshveerForever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshveerForever

Hi there , cherry ⭐️


First if all congratulations on the new thread 👏 👏👏
And now to the chapter , what can i say ☺️ , i went to dreamland while reading the chapter , Ishu dreaming of her family

At the first when started it read , i thought * Did i miss a chapter?*
😲🥱 , but then i realized its a dream and then my level of excitement went down notch but hey! it was a bliss reading it 😃 , MM if the dream is itself so so beautiful what would it be like when it really happens ?
please make this dream come true na ⭐️

Ishveer twins☢️ ⭐️⭐️----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Prem is such an cutiepie!! ❤️ , and the kitchen romance part ☺️
its was beautiful

MM ,you did a excellent job on this chapter it was beyond lovely and sweet ⭐️⭐️ , i look forward on readign the next chapter so please update it asap 😆
( I know I'm being demanding here , but your chapters are too beautiful , kya kare ?😉 ) ( But just update when you're free ofc 😳 )

PS:Shorrry for late reply 😛


Your shoulsister
Ash😉








Good morning Ashu🤗🤗

shank u so much sweetie😳😳😃 Aww so glad u went to dreamland😆😉 Yes she is dreaming off a family with Ranveer , someone is ready for children😳😳

Oh I am shorry for dissepointing u 😕😕🥱 But if it helps when ever they will become parents there kids going to be 10 times cuter Well happy you found it a bliss to read😳😳🤗 Socho socho , it will be

Did you found Prem or Ridhi cuter ? They will have kids wo bhi ek footballteam but first they have more healing to do😳😳

They were not twins , Prem is younger than Ridhi😉 Aww Prem totally is loved writing his charakter😳😳 And the kitchen Romance was like u said☺️☺️ aww shank u so much sweetie , glad u found it beautiful😳😳

shank u so much dearie🤗🤗Hehe, I will try my best to update it ASAP😆😆( U are not demanding at all😉 )

PS : Chill yaar , u could have reviewed six months later and i would have not felt bad😆😆😉 But your review was lovely
Your soulsister
MM❤️




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Posted: 9 years ago
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AN : Honestly I have nno idea how this turned out to be . So yeah if u found this boring or terrible I am sorry😕
Chapter 66

The meeting that changed everything

Ranveer was tired. He was physically tired and emotionally drained. He kept staring at her as she was laying on the hospital bed, He looked at how her chest rose and fell, which indicated that she still breathed and which in turn meant that she was still with him.

Ranveer shivered when he though how close he and his mother was to die today , and sighed looking at his mother who was laying down on the hospital bed . She had lost so much blood, but Ranveer knew the mental damage his mother would face would be worse. After all, physically, wounds heal easier than those inner physic wounds.

Even now Ranveer could hear the sound of the gun as he shoot his father in self-defense , as his first priority was to get his mother to hospital and he knew that her best chance was him and not Kailash . Therefore, he shot him before his father could shoot him.

Huge wet tears fell from his eyes, he did not even knew if his father was alive or not. Ranveer had just rushed to his mother, and when the police arrived, he had only kept staring at the lifeless body of Amba.

If someone asked him how his mother reached, the hospital he would not have an answer to give. As all Ranveer had done, was stare at his mother and not given the surroundings one look. Somewhere in the pit of his stomach he felt all the wrongdoings his father committed was his fault, his parents had been happy before he was born.

When his mother had gotten pregnant with him that was when hell loosened. Now on his birthday Ranveer had shoot his father, his mother was in a hospital badly wounded, his bestfriend Akash had died three days ago, and Ridhima did not want anything with him to do.

Ranveer wanted to cry and shout but no sound came out, as there was nothing left of him. Like he had turned to cold stone, and he knew deep down the kid inside him was dead. Maybe it was dead the first day he had taken a punch for his mother.

Ranveer closed his eyes, he was so tired and he wondered how his tomorrow would be. Would he go to jail for shooting his father, even though it was self-defense. What would happen to his mother, could he confide in the police and get help? He remembered one of the officers Harshad who seemed different, someone who genuinely cared.

He heard footsteps approaching and he could hear, it was not the same sound the doctor or the nurse made whenever they came in the room. Without turning around, he looked at objects around him, something he could use as shield to protect his mother. He found none, realizing he was the only shield his mother had. He turned around and saw a girl with long soft hair, which was braided; she was wearing a light pink dress and was looking at him with big and sad eyes. She was probably at his age and Ranveer sighed, as she was no threat.

Ranveer was about to turn around to give his attention to his mother, but something stopped him in his tracks. Her eyes, those eyes were a reflection of the pain he felt in his soul. Ranveer looked at her perplexed. Ranveer stared at her as she moved past him and sat on the chair beside the hospital bed. He looked at her as she closed her eyes and brought her hands together and he remembered that was how Ridhima used to pray.

A half smile appeared on his face as he found the girl painfully beautiful. Painful , cause her eyes inflicted she knew what loss was and he could tell the pain had consumed her .Beautiful , cause even how much it might consumed her she still had that innocent , still believed in a higher God. Somehow, he wanted to believe as if she did, believe that someone was good out there. Looking at her, a thought occurred him, that maybe he found his light. He saw how the reflection of the sun hit her face and how it made her glow. He remembered something his mother had told him about the sun and the moon.

"That the sun loved the moon so much that it died every night so that moon could live "

Ranveer was snapped from his thoughts when he saw the girl say "I hope your mom makes it " she said kindly while a tear fell from her eyes. He wondered how she could cry for someone she did not even knew. His question was answered in her next statement "Unlike mine".

Understanding dawned up on him as he realized she might not know his mother, but understood his pain. He went towards her and asked "Who are you ?" he asked slowly .

"Ishani "she replied softly and without another word she hugged him. Ranveer froze, having no idea how to react. Ishani gave him time as she could feel he was stiff, after a while he hugged her back slowly and carefully.

"I have blood on me "he whispered lamely and she smiled weakly and replied honestly "I don't care "she said and he allowed himself to seek comfort in her arms.

"My name is Ranveer " he said while hugging her and Ishani smiled in his embrace.


"Nice to meet you, I wish it was during under circumstances "she answered kindly and was met by silence. Not awkward silence but a pleasant one for a change, none of them in the moment knew the found there partner in grief, happiness but most importantly they found a bestfriend for eternity. One who would cherish the other, seek comfort from the other and just try to understand and respect the other one. Your heart beating faster the first time you see them does not make some relationship, some is based on finding a friend in the weirdest and darkest surrounding.


AN : Sorry for any typos 😊 Constructive criticism is more than welcome😊

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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both chapters are amazing Cherrie Well done😊
Edited by Ishveerian - 9 years ago
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As usual nice chapter 😉 update soon the next chapter 😊 I will be waiting
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Originally posted by: ranveerishani78

As usual nice chapter 😉 update soon the next chapter 😊 I will be waiting


shank u so much🤗🤗 glad u liked it 😳😳 I will try to update asap😉😉

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