#2 FF: Always and Forever (Chapter 77 on page 109) - Page 15

Originally posted by: bluesky10

Beautiful

You wrote so well

Oh, my!! The chapter was so cute. Ishani going into the flashback of his second birthday with her to the end it was brilliant! And then our hero waiting for her and thinking Ishani will go all "I'm coming soon; be patient" thing. Sometimes husbands do suffer a lot due to their wives' obsession with looking perfect and Ranveer is absolutely no different. Poor chap.

The moments you write for them are gorgeous. From sweet innocent ones to the intense ones all with sheer brilliancy. You know, you along with Arushi and LM inspire me to write this all romantic stuff. If not for you all mera pata nai kya hota. xD

I loved the ending of this chapter. he pampered her so dearly and her make makeup. Oh, my!!! Poor Ishani and poor Ranveer. Just imagine this cycle going on. Disha will leave them frustrated and they'd be ll "We're so sorry, Disha.We're coming. Don't leave, please!" Haha xD

Brilliant chapter, MM. Now waiting for the next one.

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Oh, my!! The chapter was so cute. Ishani going into the flashback of his second birthday with her to the end it was brilliant! And then our hero waiting for her and thinking Ishani will go all "I'm coming soon; be patient" thing. Sometimes husbands do suffer a lot due to their wives' obsession with looking perfect and Ranveer is absolutely no different. Poor chap.

The moments you write for them are gorgeous. From sweet innocent ones to the intense ones all with sheer brilliancy. You know, you along with Arushi and LM inspire me to write this all romantic stuff. If not for you all mera pata nai kya hota. xD

I loved the ending of this chapter. he pampered her so dearly and her make makeup. Oh, my!!! Poor Ishani and poor Ranveer. Just imagine this cycle going on. Disha will leave them frustrated and they'd be ll "We're so sorry, Disha.We're coming. Don't leave, please!" Haha xD

Brilliant chapter, MM. Now waiting for the next one.

O dear must you b this cute
U
Your updates are as cute as you are
Read all your chapter but cannot rply for all of dem just a word that dey are way too sweet intense and awesome
Ishveer in ur ff have suffered like hell but love each other like crazy
Coming to did update o god ranveer in perfect fit suit and ishani in v neck nothing can get gorgeous than dis
Hope that Angela and disha will understand dere reason for being late
Dere kisses are just so surreal that it take tym to get yourself out of that moment
Now c moving to dere room ahem ahem well dere is more than pillow fight
Thnx fr pm
Waiting fr next

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

O dear must you b this cute
U
Your updates are as cute as you are
Read all your chapter but cannot rply for all of dem just a word that dey are way too sweet intense and awesome
Ishveer in ur ff have suffered like hell but love each other like crazy
Coming to did update o god ranveer in perfect fit suit and ishani in v neck nothing can get gorgeous than dis
Hope that Angela and disha will understand dere reason for being late
Dere kisses are just so surreal that it take tym to get yourself out of that moment
Now c moving to dere room ahem ahem well dere is more than pillow fight
Thnx fr pm
Waiting fr next

MM! This update was cute! 😛😛 I loved every bit of it. You are such a writer MM, who inculcates their personality into their writing. And everyone know what you are - cute. 😳😳

Originally posted by: Effulgent

MM! This update was cute! 😛😛 I loved every bit of it. You are such a writer MM, who inculcates their personality into their writing. And everyone know what you are - cute. 😳😳

I liked the flash back at the beginning. You make Amba seem so good in your FF. I'm missing the good Amba now. She is a very genial and benign woman..only in this story. 😉😉

Aww. How well do Ms. Ruby Red and Mr. Tuxedo match with each other! 👏👏 Provided that, the combination is also superb, they will look like a match made in heaven. And him going down on his knees to make her move into his room! 😲😲 Another cute addition.

The updates, overall was short but at the same time, sweet. You've improved lots. Keep it up, MM. Update the next one soon enough! 😊😊

Love you loads, ⭐️⭐️

Effulgent

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Good morning sweetie🤗🤗 You know you are truly blessed , when you wake up and read such a beautiful review😳😳 Thank u so much for this beauitful review sweetie🤗 🤗

Aww , I am shoo glad you found the update cute ( This is me doing my happy dance 😆😉)

Oh sweetie I am so glad that you loved every bit of it😃😃 You found out my secret😆😆 But honestly I am not cute , more like crazy😆😆 But you are for sure such a sweetie 😳😳

Glad you liked the flash back in the beginning 🤗 Yes , she is really good in this FF😉 What is great that she has nothing in common with the Amba in show apart from the same name😆 That is true she is very genial and benign women in this story😛

They look shoo beautiful together They do look like match made in heaven I thought you all would trow tomatoes on me for being such a filmy girl😆 But I am glad u liked it when he went on his knees to make her move into his room Glad u found it cute😉😉

Shorry for short updates , but I am known for that😆 Glad u still found it cute😃😃 Aww the best thing I can hear is that I have improved, so thank u shoo much sweetie🤗🤗 I will try to update ASAP😉

Love you loads as well,

MM❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Effulgent

You're always welcome, dear. But I must thank you for such a wonderful story! 😛😛

MM dear, your replies are also cute. Alright, if you say so, you're cute and crazy. 😉😉 Oh, thanks. 😳😳

True that, they only share the same name. 😆😆 Apart from that, one is 😃😃 while the show one is 😡😡

Why will anyone throw tomatoes at you for such an impressive scene in the story?! 😲😲 We will give you flowers and bouquets. Well, I'm glad to have read your story. 😃😃

He-he. Known for short updates! 😆😆 That's funny, but they're so sweet. 😳😳 I'm waiting for the actual B-day bash to begin now. 😉😉 Update soon, sweetie. 😛😛

Loads of love again, 😉😉

Effulgent

Originally posted by: Sutapasima

THANKS