#1 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 89

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Man, this was beautiful! Why am I saying the same thing for each chapter?😳 I'll have to invent new words😈⭐️ ⭐️So anyway, coming back to your update, it cleared a few of my doubts and one of my guesses.😛😛

The name Ritika now makes me🤬 🤬But then, I can't help it. Though I guessed her, I did not find her name pleasing with Ranveer. But, you sketched her character better than the CVs, I must say. And Ranveer likes her and respects her and cannot love her...🤗I felt so damn happy when I read that intimacy wasn't a part of their relation🤣 🤣And her death, though made me🥺 🥺And poor guy, feeling guilty over everything.

Now that he's going to meet her, I hope, things aren't that bad and goes on smooth(read it not rough)😉😉 So, let me see whether my next guess is working😳😳

Lovely update!

#Yours3Fan
AV

Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! And stop making me blush now. ☺️☺️

I'm glad that the update did clear a few doubts for you. As to Ritika, well, I wouldn't expect a higher opinion of her from anyone in this forum, tbh, and neither do I have one for her myself. 😕😕 But if I could get you to like her a bit in this chapter and could make you feel sorry upon her death, my job in this chapter is done.

As to the cannot love her part... well... it's way more complicated than that again. And why is everyone so obsessed with the intimacy? And like I told Elvish as well, this is an open-ended avenue where you can accept any version of events that suit you. 😎😎 With Ishaani, however, you aren't going to have much option I think. 🤔🤔

As to what's to happen when they meet, don't worry. 😉😉 I hope that's one problem I get around to solving well when the time comes. 😆😆 For now, that's a long, long way still. As to your next guess, that's not going to be your biggest worry. 😈😈

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey LM tht ws an amazing update I lykd it 👏
So ritika is dead here 😡 BT u seriously sanity if her character which ws dere since strt 😉
I lykd dere relatnship which ws sumthng u cannot explain in wrds BT u managed to do tht 👏
So dere is major twist gng to revealed up nw wht did dese two lunatic did is sumthng to watch out fr 😉
Finch is a vry nice person I loved whn he catches ranveer of guard 😳
Nd nw dere ego tussle will strt which ll b awesome 😃
Thnx fr d update dear it ws really an awesome chapter I lykd it
Plz update nxt part soon sry fr short rply hv xam nd rushing back to study bye

Originally posted by: Sutapasima

Originally posted by: kimnana

amazing update ...ranvir nervousness can be seen ...

her ex-wife is ritika ok...he married her after knowing ishani got engaged

ritika was good friend ...but he loves ishani only .

ty for pm

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

nice story loved it keep updating😊 yaar

Originally posted by: Ishveerian

Sorry sorry LM for replying late but coming to your chapters

interlude 4 was mysterious for me😆😆 but interlude 5 was amazing

Thank you for making ritika positive😊 feeling bad for Ranveer😉

still things are mysterious which you have to unfold.

your work is always best😊

Originally posted by: Katniss07

LM ! 🤗 brilliant updates !! loved both of them 😃😃 To start with , Mr. Finch's & Ranveer's friendship is cool , strongly reminds me of Ishani & Martha , the way they share the same story , same pain and obviously resulting a good understanding is something which is base of their friendship which i really really loved 😃 ❤️

The way you presented the whole chapter + their conversation was amazing , gosh , I'm repeating again , you SHOULD try to become a writer , there are high chances i'm telling you 😉 🤗

It was really bad to read how one friend got his happiness & how the other faced rejection 🥺 and was even more heartbreaking to know that he was married 😡 You know this is the reason i rarely feel anything for some characters & some of the novels which has only marriage & divorce , divorced & married again in cycles 🤢 Ishveer were the first couple i've come across who were not engaged in this madness ...( sigh ) . Anyways I believed in you and you didn't broke my trust because of which i love you ❤️ 🤗 ( sorry if i frightened you a bit with my useless blabber 😛 ).

Ishani " Queen of Dalal Street" ?! woohooo !!! 😎 😎 😎 I'm waiting for their F2F meeting, yay !

And regarding the 5th interlude uh...well...let me be honest , I was feeling queasy reading Ritika darlings name 🤢🤢 Arre wohi mili thi kya ?!! Okay leave , I became normal after the reason behind the marriage was disclosed , Zaveri's dying wish ...Oh poor Ranveer he must have been in a great fix , ya but one thing which i liked in all this is RaRi's friendship , it was sweet 😳 😃 ( anger & nausea vanished 😆 ) , i can understand Ranveer was in a dying need of a good friend in such a phase ...💔

And Ri's tragedy ...😭 🥺 , how ugly she must be feeling knowing that her days are numbered 😭 This is one of the most horrible feelings when you count days for your end , being helpless 😭

And it felt really good that they were a great support for each other 😊 but that phase of Ri's death broke me , your writing is very very impactful dear really 😭 🤗

And so , finally Ishveer are going to meet *jumping with excitement* . Thanks for updating , both the chapters where excellently written 👏 ⭐️ 👏

PS : I was thinking about writing a review for NC for your contest , not sure how it will be ...but i'll still try to give a decent one 😛😆 can you please tell me whats the due date ?? 😊😊

Hey there, love! 🤗🤗 How did your papers go? 😃😃 And thank you so much, sweetheart! I'm so, so happy that you liked both the updates!

Finch and Ranveer's friendship is again unique. I wouldn't say that they share a common past, more like there could not have been a bigger difference between the two men, yet their nature is where they connect and that makes their friendship as remarkable as it is. 😃😃 And hehe, I've been getting this compliment a lot lately. ☺️☺️

Yes, that was quite sad for me to write too, as well. As to writing about them being married, I knew the risk I was taking and this had a 99% chance of backfiring and me falling on my face, but I could not have been more thankful that it paid off. And I'm even happier that your trust in me paid off as well.

And yeah, the F2F will be an amusing one, but it's still a long way off to come. 😆😆 As to Ritika, all that I can say is that if you could really feel bad for her and like her friendship with Ranveer in this chapter, I've done my job well. 🤔🤔 And the fact that you've understood Ritika's role in Ranveer's life and about her pains as well makes me even more relieved.

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Hey there, love! 🤗🤗 How did your papers go? 😃😃 And thank you so much, sweetheart! I'm so, so happy that you liked both the updates! ⭐️⭐️

Finch and Ranveer's friendship is again unique. 😳😳 I wouldn't say that they share a common past, more like there could not have been a bigger difference between the two men, yet their nature is where they connect and that makes their friendship as remarkable as it is. 😃😃 And hehe, I've been getting this compliment a lot lately. ☺️☺️

Yes, that was quite sad for me to write too, as well. As to writing about them being married, I knew the risk I was taking and this had a 99% chance of backfiring and me falling on my face, but I could not have been more thankful that it paid off. 😛😛 And I'm even happier that your trust in me paid off as well.

And yeah, the F2F will be an amusing one, but it's still a long way off to come. 😆😆 As to Ritika, all that I can say is that if you could really feel bad for her and like her friendship with Ranveer in this chapter, I've done my job well. 🤔🤔 And the fact that you've understood Ritika's role in Ranveer's life and about her pains as well makes me even more relieved. 😎😎

Thank you so much once again, darling and I'll try to update the next one soon enough! ❤️❤️

Ps. The deadline is till the 29th of December I think. 👍🏼