#1 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 115

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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I'm waiting for it. 😆😆 And please don't apologize for silly things like this, your doubt was completely valid. 😃😃

Yeah, it is improving but I hope that it does manage to get some TRPs as well. 😕😕 Coming to YJDH, even I love that movie and find a striking resemblance of myself in Naina. 😳😳 And yeah, I really wonder why they had to name her that.

Oh yeah, and that's one side no one should get to see. 😈😈

You do re-read them? Blimey, that's really huge for me. ☺️☺️ And yes, its only if you read closely, in between the lines and read it more than one time that you catch on to the subtle hints. 😛😛 The dreams will be back soon enough. 😉😉

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ And please don't apologize, it's completely alright. 😳😳

Yeah, the snow war is something I knew I had to mention. Yeah, Ranveer may take the mickey out of her but he wants to help her out as well. 😆😆 And if I am to truthfully confess, even I'm in love with both of them. ☺️☺️

Erm... please give your mother my most sincerest of apologies and wish her a belated Happy Birthday on my behalf. 🥳🥳 As to what's there... well... 😳😳. You'll find out by Epistle 30. 😕😕

Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next chapter soon enough! ❤️❤️

Love,

LM

Ps. I still can't believe that the thread is over in just 34 chapters. 😲😲

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

I will dearie😳😳 Okey I will try not to say those 2 words 😆 Aww love your hugs , senind loads of them😉😉

Ps. You really want to , pluss what if someone here is JB fan and kill me😭

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Hi ,hi LM🤗

I am back 😃😃

Read ur epistle 2

WOw , I just loved ,I just really really want and will wish to have the perspective that u have presented little Ishaani in ur story,wow it was just fascinating ,it was a whole lot of bliss ,whole lot of powerful extended emotions dipped with flavours of charm and purity ,highly divine 👏👏👏

I never ever wish to break down my connectivity from the world that u have created for Ishaani ,I too want to make myself engaged in that world and if granted a boon ,will love to be Ishaani of ur world😃😃

AMazing ,it was so flawless 👏👏

I was lost in my own world ,while reading ur amazing work and as I said it doesn't seem to me like a world of illusion but it is purely and divine and world of reality⭐️⭐️

To be frank ur an amazing sculptor ,the way u have sculpted ur work ,show the efforts u have bestowed upon them ,I would call it a picture perfect portrait ,loved it a lot 😃😃

Will be back soon after reading 3 to 4 chapters ,next time😛😛

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it!

Oh my, you found it that good? Thanks, I'm completely flattered. ☺️☺️ You know, like I've said many times before this, when I started this FF, I did not have a clear idea about where this FF was headed or what it was really to be all about but as I built the plot around it, I actually came to realize what a complex task I'd undertaken. And the fact that you guys have been so supportive right since the start and keep giving me the constant motivation to strive harder is what makes this FF so special. 😳😳 It's like my own journey of self-discovery along with IshVeer's. 😃😃

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM... 😊

We r back to epistles... Back to their sweet innocent little world... (to be specific I m writing for 21,22 23).. 😊

So Ranveer as dancer... hidden talent... well u added 1 more star to his already long list (although I still wonder ke koi achanak se painter kaise ban sakta hai... vo bhi itna perfect vala...😕) and he won also...😛 I must ask yar ye idea kaha se aya.. but the appreciation he got was quite heart warming... bear hug from Ishani and this time he also reciprocated...😳 that was cute... and party from Falguni... I was thinking what it could be and then it turned to a samosa party and how happy they are with it...😊 that's how our ishveer na... need nothing but each other...⭐️

and he realized her supernatural strength...🤣 bechara ranveer... she rules him in every way na... but chalo he at least has his customary lock...😆 and then came her emotional blackmail... but since she had the plot her demand is fair enough... and that is from where the pen name came...👍🏼 half part of her dream is revealed and I would love to read about the other half also☺️ but since u said it came to u aise hi I think itne se hi kaam chalana padega...😳 but I had a doubt... IHP doesn't had amalgamation of RV & IP it was a jumbled version of IP... may b I am missing something...😕 and 1 more thing which I have to mention here is her demand of Something More from him... I know aisa kuch bhi nahin tha but my mind went in all the other directions (u must've got it) but then yaad aya ki abhi dono bachche hain...🤣🤣 I know it's so so weird... but u know I can't help it...☺️ ye dono hai hi aise... just rules ur mind...😳

And now coming to our dear girl... kya hai yar yeh... kya band bajai hui hai bechare ki... kuch bhi ho use watt ranveer ki hi lagani hai...😆 she was refrained from pooja coz of customs, ranveer have to baby sit her coz he can't deny their orders, to ranveer ka to koi fault hi nahi tha but as usual hamari Ishu baby ne apna sara gussa n frustration us par nikal dia... kuch aur kaam kar leti lekin nahi.. cycle sikhni hai vo bhi tabhi jab ghar me koi na ho n vo bhi ghar se door n vo bhi without following his instructions... and then the crash... ye to hona hi tha... khud bhi damage n cycle bhi damage... (and he really carried her upstairs... 14 ki age mein bhi kafi strong tha...😲) itna kuch karne ke baad finally she realised but tab bhi hua kya... ranveer to gussa bhi nahi ho sakta uske samne...😆 😆 khana bhi khilaya to daant kar... 😆 Ishani bachpan se hi sunny deol thi na bas Ranveer hi pehchaan nahi paya... bechara kuch bol hi nahi pata uske saamne...🤣 🤣

and after all this ranveer ki patience... injury Ishano ko but pain ranveer ko.. sara gussa ek taraf aur Ishaani ka pain ek taraf...😆 their last part in ranveer's room was so so cute... his anger and their concern for each other... loved ur writing there... 👏 👏

In this chapter the line which deserves a special mention is 'try as I much, I can't lie'... reallyyy...😲 she can't lie...?? baki sab theek hai LM but this line doesn't suit her at all ... and agar sai mein aisa hai to all I can say is kaafi badal gai hai ladki and this change is definitely not good... 😭

And now a Beagle... kamaal hai yar... I mean wasn't she enough herself jo puppy ko bhi le ayi...😆 and ranveer... vo to bechara vo hi karega jo ishani bolegi... Amba n Ishu me se Ishu ko choose kia hai to ab bhugat beta... but sleeping on the terrace is quite harsh yar vo bhi thand mein...😕 he can bear anything for na...😳 n a surprise... Ishu also has puppy eyes...👏 mujhe to lagta tha only ranveer have one.. vaise eyes kya ishu me to use pura hi puppy bana rakha hai... jaise chahe vaise khelti hai uske saath...🤣 sai me yar toofan hai ye ladki n iska sabse bada victim ranveer...😆

And the way u wrote Amba's thoughts and mindset in ranveer's words is really commendable...👍🏼 👍🏼 U perfectly put her care n concerns for ranveer n she is so logical there coz that is the bitter truth and she wants to protect him from that...😔 I always find amba's character so practical in the show also... She even accepted ishani for ranveer after their first marriage but again like all other characters she was ruined... although I can't blame her completely coz her fears did came true (ishani's nonsense and that too repeatedly 😡) but writers made her too annoying... ek to uska ott makeup n then her screamings... 🤢

Epistle 22 n 23 are too good yar... I was laughing continously while reading... loved ishani's dominant attitude and his helplessness...🤣 u r making him more n more cute n d way he just melts in front of her...😳 awww... 😳 but u know even I wish sometimes that he doesn't give in to her wishes so easily but then this is the thing which made ranveer the person he is... ishu is above everything for him... kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta hai ke ye paida hi ishu ko khush rakhne n protect karne ke lie hua hai...🤪 fir bhi agar ye kabhi apni chala pata to dono idiots better condition me hote aaj... 🤔

I always think that I'll b fast in reviewing bt always gets late... I am trying to come at present chapter but still behind good five chapters... so thanku for bearing such weird timings of mine... ⭐️I don't want to miss anything so going in sequence and hopefully catch up soon...

u r going good with these small versions of our idiots...👏 keep writing dear... 🤗 🤗

Hi there, sweetie! 🤗🤗 Welcome back! And yes, back to their sweet, innocent world it is.

That painter thing beats me too, really. But atleast we have enough hints about the fact that he's a good dancer so I decided to try my hand at it. 😆😆 Oh yeah, the hug was certainly something the poor fellow felt he deserved in that moment and so did the tea party. And it's true - if they have each other, they have it all.

And perfectly stated! And yes, that's where the pen-name came from. The other half was her imagination, so don't let your thoughts run astray. 😉😉 As to the IHP part, it was the honour that Ranveer gave her by calling her 'Ishaani Harshad Parekh'. The guy gave her the entire pseudonym, something that I've hinted in Epistle 26 I think. 😃😃 And hey bhagwaan! Bechaare bacche hai!

You've explained this part about Ishaani so perfectly that I actually have nothing more to add on to it. She is seriously a sample piece. And Ranveer is another one. Gussa do minute mein uda diya Ishaani ne uska.

Coming to the line you've highlighted, I've mentioned this for a special reason, and you're the first one who pointed it out to me, so take 300 points for that. This line does have a significance and I'll highlight upon it in Book 3.

And here again, you've spoken my mind perfectly in the next two paras. Yes, Amba's POV was valid to a certain extent until the show people went ahead and turned it into a typical saas-bahu feud. 🤢🤢 As to Ranveer, that poor soul has lost his heart entirely to her. 😳😳 And Ishaani's target being Ranveer is so apt.

You've been laughing at my updates and I've been laughing constantly at how astutely you've summed up these two. And you are right, you know, he shouldn't give in to her whims and desires so easily. If he wouldn't give in to her, they'd both be much happier in a way.

Thank you so much once again and please don't apologize. Your reviews are the ones that I'm always on the lookout for. ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Effulgent

Oh. I'm going to type it now. 😳😳 I had typed it actually, but this IF whisked it off into thin air. 😭😭 And then, I decided to review all other stories updated and then come back to yours'. 😛😛 But by the time I managed to review all others' and come here, my post limit was reached. I'm so sorry for the delay in reviewing Epistle 28.

Yeah, I just hope that the TRPs improve and this show gets back to its lost glory. 😊😊 But wait, I don't think that'll happen. 🥱🥱 Did you read Monali's post? The witty CVs are now planning to introduce a black magic track! 😲😲 How intelligent of them to think of a brilliant track such as that! 👏👏 I'm now sure that the TRP will be record-breaking. 😉😉 It'll soar even higher than snakes, witches and Gopi bahus! ⭐️⭐️

Yeah, but Ranveer get's to see Ishaani's sometimes. 😆😆

Yes, I do re-read them. 😛😛 I've been through NC five times now and Untold Stories, twice. 😃😃

Ugh, that's the worst!

Five times? I myself haven't read NC as whole more than twice. Individual chapters, yes, but as a whole, only twice. Oh Lord, one day soon, you are really going to make me cry with happiness.

Originally posted by: Effulgent

"I'm more than enough to take you all down."

I'm loving this! This update was again, a wonderful one and quite informative, too. Your writing captivates me every time I read it. Your punctuation, storyline, style, narration, genre you choose and the best of all... philosophy and realism is what I've come to love and cherish. As I have told you time and again, you've mastered the art of a teen's POV. Well done, mate. 👏👏

Now, I'll pick out the part where I had a doubt (sorry, again!).

We continued the same rite for our descend to the Solang Valley and for the love of the Heavens, the temperature went up to 4. Seriously, a 10 up in the temperature was a welcome summer to all of us.

Well, -4 to +4 is an eight up in the temperature. Ain't I right? But yes, minus to plus is like a summer unattainable in the heart of winter.

Here come's my favourite part...

The night at Bakar Thach saw a bad weather once again and Papa made Ranveer lodge in his tent. Ranveer protested loudly but Papa would have nothing. Sometimes, I really think Ranveer should just shut up and agree to things in the first go rather than argue upon everything. Suicidal maniac.

This was ludicrous. Poor boy, his ultra-altruistic nature gets into Ishaani's bad books quite often. And Ishaani's description of his as a 'suicidal maniac' brought an involuntary smile on my face.

Coming back to the chapter. It begins with Ishaani giving out info on the happenings of the past few hours. IshVeer could sleep only for a couple of hours due to the foul weather. Having breakfast after seven in the morning, the head back to Solang Valley. She's filling out her diary, expressing her urge to have a snow fight when these two fellas start it.

Ishaani'd such a drama queen! But, her confidence in saying the quoted line at the beginning of the review captivated me. Well, three-against-one was hard to win over but I honestly wanted her to win. But its okay. After all, it was, as I said, hard to win against.

I loved your detailed description of the snow fight and strategies of the boys' team. Devarsh's nickname is cute and he's so smart. Or I must say, calculatively smart. Sharman is also a sensible guy here, a responsible elder brother when time comes alongside a boy. Well, boys are boys. And Ranveer, he felt like helping her..<3 <3 But he's shrewd to. I liked the "No, you lose." part.

The fight ends with all of them doubling up in laughter. I adore it. They fought like it was a major battle which would be recorded in history books but in the end, forgot everything and laughed upon it. This again, brought an even more wider, unconscious smile upon my face. :)

Again, I LOVED Ishaani's shrewd portrayal in your FF. She too deserves her share of fun in life unlike the sacrifice-obsessed fool whose face is magnified on TV screens of those who still watch the show at 10pm on week days on Colors!

I've noticed another thing while re-reading the first part of this FF, today. Ishaani's style in narrating her POV has changed from 'The Dawn of a New World' to 'The Childhood Fever' while Ranveer's is almost unchanged. Her's was a little more introspective and is now, childishly cute. His is as always a combination of philosophical and introspection. Result of teenage hormonal imbalance in girls due to puberty, I guess. In males, it's not too prominent.

Now, coming to my favourite subject of discussion. The dreams! Dreams usually are a result of the strongest of emotions felt by us over the days. And people usually forget what the actually dreamt when the wake up. But here, Ranveer remembers his' in detail and Ishaani too (in Interlude 3) remembers it in detail. It's bizarre actually, as it happens at times when the dream is in itself bizarre.

A person dreams of himself/herself being chained when he's being held back from doing a thing. Or social restraints. When he /she can't break away from the chains, it's a bit of negative embodiment. Maybe, this is the case with Ranveer. I don't know, its just an interpretation.

Great! I'm becoming too psychological and philosophical, day by day. Before I go overboard with it, I'll end the discussion about the dreams. I hope to catch onto more hints and then have another discussion with you. (:

Overall, another good update it was. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Update the next one soon.

Love you loads, <3 <3

Effulgent

P.S - I'm not gonna use emoticons for long posts such as these. Because they become too cumbersome to add, many a times.so, kindly bear with my essay-like looking reviews. I don't know how you manage to add them to every post of yours. (:

Coming to your favourite part, hehe, I took great pleasure in writing that para. 😆😆 And that mention is again something that'll come ahead, so here's your first correct observation. 👍🏼 As to Ishaani's diary entry, the girl is really a drama queen. 🤣🤣 Yeah, it was kind of hard to win, but she did give it her best shot.

You've described Sharman and Devarsh here perfectly! These characteristics were incorporated from the show also so that you know how they were as children as well. 😛😛 That's your second correct remark. And Ranveer's one was perfect as well. 😉😉 You remind me of another reviewer I had who gave such excellent observations to me. 😲😲 She had an eye for things like this and so have you. You are really amongst my most prized reviewers now.

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

I will wish her and now that you used 'that' emoticon, can't wait to know...😕😕

Ps. That's too fast, actually. May be because of MM and Ash's chat from pages 90-100 and your doubt session with Priya...But yeah, I can bet on one thing: There are loads and loads of fans for this FF. Trust me. my Mum is one among them😉😉

Yeah, you'll come to know soon enough.

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Hehe, that's like my good girl. ⭐️⭐️ And alright, you can PM me the song. 😆😆

Ps. Before I forget, congrats on turning Rockerz, my cherie! 🥳

Good morning😃😃 wish u a lovely day Okey , I will do it😆😆