Originally posted by: NidsJ
Hey LM...
So 6 interludes... and all of them are like bombs which u love to throw at us...
Ranveer became RV and now in Australia... A synonym for success for all but wait... u made him a career counselor... I mean really...😲 Pehle apni life to theek karle tab doosro ko samjhaye...😆😆 but thank u for restricting him to professional talks only coz agar uske aage personal life pe jata to sare students pagal ho jate...
And Ian hake-parish... it took me quite a time to understand this but must say that u did good job with this name...👏 and his reply to steve in the end... God... Poor him... Kitni bhi koshish karle he can't get over her na...😆
And the additions u made to time and money relation is just brilliant girl... it impressed me beyond this story and i saved that particular part in my notes... It was really inspiring on personal level...⭐️ ⭐️
(one question I was about to ask u here was about the girl calling him but then I read the next chapter and TBH the answer was more than pleasant...😃 )
Now came our dear girl... Well first of all its such a refreshing change to see her as an independent women who belong to 21st century and had made a life of her own... She is THE Ishaani Parekh now...👏 👏 Puneet & Rishi is also there with her... But what is with thIs degrading phrase That people are using for her... U know I read a quote somewhere which read that how a man who is strong n dominant is called a leader while a woman is called a bitch... I found it so true... This is the true face of double standard society we live in where everybody wants a chance but no one is trying to bring it...
But the way u depicted the loneliness which she has in life is painful yar... She has no one... really no one... Even Falguni is not there and she lives alone... Its true that money can't fill all the vacuum... And u mentioned that she was under depression but I feel she still is and this is really turning dangerous... What is she doing in the name of perfection... why Is she punishing herself for her past acts and hiding it under the pretense of perfection... she is getting cruel with herself and needs to control...
she is reading caffeinated love (although I am bit confused that how come she didn't get the author if it is their story or may b I missed something...😕)and now she decided that its time to get back what is TRULY HERS... she is set on her mission and the start is most interesting... Do she knows everything about him coz the way she is focused on having him as her partner is quite interesting... Poor puneet, I was actually laughing at his condition... 🤣
Now coming to her dream... Well she got the realization there and her memory finally resurfaced and she hit the mark... IP or IHP mean one and the same thing, clearing many doubts of her and giving a different solace as well as pain to her... ⭐️ But what is with the second part of dream... 😛 It's not like m complaining but till now u mentioned only their friendship and separation then from where such dreams came... and vanilla n roses...😉 Sorry for this stupid question but did she had a taste of him b4 or just her imagination...🤪 🤪But must say nice one... I never thought along this but he is just like that na plain, simple yet yummy...☺️ Can't blame her... (I hope yahan baat sirf dreams tak hi nahi atki rahegi..😉 😉)
Her happiness at the confirmation of meeting with him again confused me... What is she really upto girl... the way u wrote her thoughts is very intriguing... see my mind is going in all the crazy directions and m really waiting for their meeting... pata nai kya dhamaka hoga... 🤣🤣
I so loved ur writing in the 4th interlude...the way u mingled their game n conversation is really commendable...it was like real scenario happening right in front of my eyes... 👍🏼 and this Finch is a smart man... finally he got his way with ranveer... And my most favorite part is his last statement about our two idiots...he is also tease... that was quite hilarious 🤣 and ranveer's death glares for him... But this chapter revealed that ranveer don't know much about current Ishaani while it's a complete vice versa on her side... but he is also ready to meet her that too happily... this story is getting more n more interesting yar... I am loving this mysterious Ishaani...
And now the most most shocking part of all the chapters...their marriage...u know u mentioned in 2nd chapter itself that they both are married so first I thought that it was with each other.. But no... 🥺 then u mentioned that she is divorced so I thought thay may be she divorced him.. Bot no... 🥺 then u mentioned his wife is dead... I still thought that maybe he thinks like so or want to think like so (see my positivity girl and my height of hopes) but aging no 🥺 n finally u revealed everything...
Why why why LM... How could u... 😭 😭 He with ritika n she with chirag... aisa kyu kia... Kuch bhi ho bt these two belong to each other... Kisi aur se shaadi kyu karvai... I agree with the explanations u gave about love n marriage but still yar... n socho agar ritika nahi ludhakti to kya hota... Ranveer to kabhi disloyal ho nahi sakta, to hamare ishveer ki kahani to adhoori hi reh jati... He treated ritika as a companion only but still this marriage thing was quite unexpected... 💔And no intimacy between them?? I find it bit unrealistic... I mean ranveer is a lovesick majnu who cannot think beyond Ishani but ritika is a normal girl here... How come that she didn't wanted anything and they were together for 15 months... pardon me for saying so but 15 months are more than enough for 15 minutes activity... 🤪but chalo achcha hi hua... he is still all for Ishaani... But after all this I still can't believe that they married other persons... don't know why but lag hi nahi raha ke aisa bhi kuch ho sakta hai... 😔
I find the fifth part most informative... it had a lot information... apart from his n ritika story u gave many hints about ishveer also... alcohol let his tongue loose... his hatred towards the word servant... Harshad's death... all this build up curiosity... but my most favorite part is last one... his conversation with Finch... 🤣I was actually laughing during the most of it and he is afraid of meeting her with his lame excuses... God... Finch said it correctly... 14 year Ranveer was much better than this 29 year old RV... 🤣 poor him... Finch can read through him so easily and that too with most accuracy... he is really bad at hiding things...😉
And then came the most useless character of the story... Chirag... 🤢 the same old jerk... a burden on humanity and especially Ishaani... I just love the way she handled him... 👏 strictly professional... and he is still behind her name n money... 🤢 can't this fellow for once do something good... he has the guts to come back to her even after ruining harshad's company... 😡😡 loved Ishaani here but felt a little bad for her... poor girl have to beer so much alone... Rishi n Puneet with her is also a wonderful thing... 👍🏼 at least she is not alone professionally and can bank upon the loyalty of these two... (plz keep rishi like that here... he was butchered so mercilessly in the show...) Again the last part came as surprise... she want him asap and now this dinner invite...🥳 she just can't wait... 😆and the way she always smile at the mention of his name is so so so interesting yar... 😳 It is creating a strange but lovable aura in the story... ❤️
The epistles were going so sweetly... two cute kids list in their own world... and then u gave us this... but it's really really good yar... It took story to a completely new tangent and raised the interest level 1000 times more... Keep it going girl... 😊 I am so eagerly waiting for their meeting... but now u r back to epistles I think we have to wait a little more...
After all this the thing which need a special mention is the title of book 'CAFFEINATED LOVE'... 👏 👏 👏 how u come out with this title yar... it's just stuck in my mind... I always find their love like this... so intoxicating... 😳 their love phase in the show literally had my senses jammed where nothing but these two wander all the time and this title kinda took me back to that phase... so many memories flashback... God... those were the days which made me addicted to them...
I Really wish they could've ended the show in march itself or at least after Milan track... but no... they are again going with the same old crap... with heavy heart I have to admit that finally I have stopped watching it... 😭 Ranveer is not there & I can't bear this new family for getting 2 minutes of him.. it Just doesn't feel like watching our old show... only read WU but even that is getting boring day by day...😕 one of the most loyal fan I was... never missed an episode and Sometime used to watch repeats also... and see what they did... 😕 no wonder trp is getting down... they actually deserve this... so m quite happy... serve them right...😡
Plz ignore my crying above... was feeling burdened so vented it out... but ur story is keeping me hooked girl... ⭐️ I am late in reading and very late in replying but ur writing is kinda energy booster after all the damage this show done... gives a relief... 😊 but see the side effects of not replying regularly... even I didn't expected that it will go this long... 🤪so thanx for bearing this and keep writing... 🤗 🤗
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Welcome back, Nids! 🤗🤗 I've missed you around here! ⭐️⭐️ Yes, these six interludes were the best amount of sadistic pleasure that I've been able to derive in a long time since the riots in NC. 😈😈 Don't kill me, I'm just joking. 🤣🤣
Yes, Ranveer's well-settled in Australia now and is successful. 😳😳 He's just a part-time career counsellor, but I agree with you, that guy would have driven everyone nuts with his philodophy had the students been of the Philosophy degree. 🤪🤪
Thank you so much! 😃😃 Yeah, I wanted the name to be quite cryptic but some of them did get a hint of its true meaning nonetheless. 😛😛 Yeah, that's Ranveer for us sadly; he can never get above her. As to that time and money thing, I'm glad that you liked it. ☺️☺️
And no, I haven't revealed the identity of the caller yet, so keep guessing still. 😉😉
Yes, it's about time that she became Ishaani Parekh, an independent woman rather than a woman confined to her husband's seva. 😕😕 And I agree with you on that as well, that's exactly how our society is. 🤢🤢 As to Puneet and Rishi, yes, I'm happy that they are with her. 😆😆
She is lonely, yes, and its cracking her up now slowly, which makes her a little dangerous. 😳😳 Let's just say that Ranveer is going to be coming in at the right time. 🤔🤔 And yes, she is getting harsh on herself and needs to get her head straight.
Caffeinated Love isn't Ranveer and Ishaani's story but does have some similarities that could be common to all stories. Ranveer's smart that way. 😉😉 And yes, that girl is on her mission to correct her mistakes now.
As to her dream, yes the revealing of the identity did do her good. 😃😃 As to the second part of the dream, that just came out of nowhere. Well, I'm not making any promises whether you can get any more of that sorts, but you never know. I love to surprise. ☺️☺️ And no, don't get your mind running too far, I'm very shareef, you see. So are IshVeer. No hanky panky for Ishaani to know things like that. 😈😈 She only got the vanilla and roses things because we was coming back to her consciousness and her bathroom had those scents too. 😳😳
The reason why she's excited is because she's succeeded in getting a meeting with Ranveer finally. 😉😉 As to the Interlude 4, Finch's my new favourite. He's my sass king. 😃😃 Like you said, Ishaani's "researched" him well, Ranveer hasn't. Why that happened, you'll have to read ahead for that. 😛😛
Ah well, I wondered why nobody thought about this point that the hints could mean that way, but I think that most of them got it right from the start that they had separated and weren't married. 😕😕But I like your optimism. As to Ritika, well I had a feeling that you wouldn't be happy with it but I can't help it. 😭😭I did say right from the start that this was going to be a disappointment to some because the track that this FF is on is like a ticking time bomb.
And as to the IF she wouldn't have died part, well, have faith is fate. It isn't bad all the time, you know. 😈😈 As to the intimacy part, even Elvish had asked me this and I told her that the sentence is open - it can either mean they did it or they did not. 😛😛It depends upon the way you want to take it. In case you do consider they didn't do it, lets just say that her heart illness was barely two months into the marriage so her condition may have prevented them from it.😉😉
Interlude 5 was a info-packed chapter and yes, Finch is hilarious that way. 🤣🤣And he does say the truth, you know. On a serious note, yes, he does understand Ranveer the closest to Ishaani. 😳😳As to our Chiru baba, let's just say that you haven't seen the worst of him. Be ready with a puking bag in Interludes 7 and 8. It's going to be nauseating.🤢🤢
Don't worry, Puneet and Rishi will remain positive over here, that goes without saying. 😃😃As to the epistles, they are a whole new experience all together and this new set of ones are even more interesting to work upon. 😳😳But as you said, the Interludes were required too to create that tangent and to see where this story was actually headed.😎😎 And Caffeinated Love is again something I am happy about and if things go according to my plan, I may actually write a para to two based on the book as well. ⭐️⭐️
The only thing that I want to say about the show is that I don't know what to even feel for it.🤔😒😔 I'm too conflicted now. And no problem, any time you want to vent out, feel free to do it here. 👍🏼👍🏼
Yeah, this did get kind of long. 😆😆 But I'm happy that you love and care for this FF so much. It really means loads to me. 😃😃In case I haven't replied to anything in detail or you have any more doubts, please feel free to ask me about it. 😛😛Also, if you have any more queries, refer to the replies I've left to Priya from pages 123-125. They will give you some more insight. 😳😳
Thank you so much once again and love you loads! ❤️❤️ I hope to see you around here more often. 😃😃
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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