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Posted: 10 years ago
after ishveer face off ... i want one song sequence on below song ...

"Nahin Saamne Ye Alag Baat Hai " from film Taal..

Dekho chhodke kis raste vo jaate hain
Saare raste vaapas mere dil ko aate hain

Nahin saamne
Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai
Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai
Mere paas hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan
Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan

Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan
Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan
Bade zor ki aaj barsaat
Bade zor ki aaj barsaat
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin
Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin
Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai
Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

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Posted: 10 years ago

I know I finally got around to editing this post. 😆😆 Everyone here has posted such lovely ideas that I fell short of what I wanted to see. But after yesterday's episode, I finally got it.

After Falguni's death, Ishaani is sitting on the seashore, heartbroken and alone, crying over the loss of her mother. She is lonely, for there is no one who will ever understand her like the way her mother could and is distraught at the number of people she has lost - first her father and now her mother. She can no longer go back to Ranveer, because she thinks that he is happily married to Ritika and none of her family members will accept her back. She has no will to fight anymore and is sitting on the seashore simply crying into her arms, hugging herself for sole comfort.
Just then, Ranveer comes over there with Falguni's ashes (given that he gives fire to her asthi and the Parekh's don't really care about Falguni anymore, so they give the ashes to Ranveer). He sees someone crying near the sea and his heart pulls him to the woman. He reaches near her and bends down and gently taps her shoulder. When the woman turns his face, he is taken aback to see that it's Ishaani crying, but somehow, he is not shocked, for he always knew somewhere deep down that she is alive.
He keeps down the pot of ashes and pulls her into his arms and Ishaani doesn't object. She holds on to him, tired of pretending and faking her hatred and death and crying in his arms, while he simply rubs circles on her back and some tears fall from his eyes too at the fact that she is indeed alive and this is not a figment of his imagination. Imagine the female version of Tum Hi Ho going on in the BG.
Once they part from their hug, Ranveer notices the dove ring on Ishaani's finger and smiles, while she looks at him and simply whispers.
"I love you. I know you are married and going to become a father. I shouldn't be saying all this to you but-". He looks at her and whispers back '
"Shhh. It's alright. And I'm not married and that kid isn't mine. All I did was give it my name, so that Ritika wouldn't have to face shame and ridicule in the society. I love you. And it will only be you." Ranveer smiles at her while planting a soft kiss on her head and hugs her back once again, all their misunderstandings flowing away like the ebbing waves, understanding dawning over both of them.
Ranveer then flows Falguni's ashes in the sea, while Ishaani stares at Ranveer, a strange contentment passing through her, along with the flow of her tears. Coming back to the shore, Ranveer puts his arm around Ishaani and pulls her close to him, while they head back towards the car, a small hope re-entering their empty lives.
I know it's pretty long and the scene is pretty long and isn't as good as the one's several of y'all have written, but after last night's episode, I want to watch something as simple and soulful as this face to face, without the presence of any third person and without any misunderstandings in the air. 😛
Edited by LadyMeringue - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

I know I finally got around to editing this post. 😆😆Everyone here has posted such lovely ideas that I fell short of what I wanted to see. But after yesterday's episode, I finally got it.




After Falguni's death, Ishaani is sitting on the seashore, heartbroken and alone, crying over the loss of her mother. She is lonely, for there is no one who will ever understand her like the way her mother could and is distraught at the number of people she has lost - first her father and now her mother. She can no longer go back to Ranveer, because she thinks that he is happily married to Ritika and none of her family members will accept her back. She has no will to fight anymore and is sitting on the seashore simply crying into her arms, hugging herself for sole comfort.



Just then, Ranveer comes over there with Falguni's ashes (given that he gives fire to her asthi and the Parekh's don't really care about Falguni anymore, so they give the ashes to Ranveer). He sees someone crying near the sea and his heart pulls him to the woman. He reaches near her and bends down and gently taps her shoulder. When the woman turns his face, he is taken aback to see that it's Ishaani crying, but somehow, he is not shocked, for he always knew somewhere deep down that she is alive.



He keeps down the pot of ashes and pulls her into his arms and Ishaani doesn't object. She holds on to him, tired of pretending and faking her hatred and death and crying in his arms, while he simply rubs circles on her back and some tears fall from his eyes too at the fact that she is indeed alive and this is not a figment of his imagination. Imagine the female version of Tum Hi Ho going on in the BG.



Once they part from their hug, Ranveer notices the dove ring on Ishaani's finger and smiles, while she looks at him and simply whispers.


"I love you. I know you are married and going to become a father. I shouldn't be saying all this to you but-". He looks at her and whispers back '


"Shhh. It's alright. And I'm not married and that kid isn't mine. All I did was give it my name, so that Ritika wouldn't have to face shame and ridicule in the society. I love you. And it will only be you." Ranveer smiles at herwhile planting a soft kiss on her head and hugs her back once again, all their misunderstandings flowing away like the ebbing waves, understanding dawning over both of them.



Ranveer then flows Falguni's ashes in the sea, while Ishaani stares at Ranveer, a strange contentment passing through her, along with the flow of her tears. Coming back to the shore, Ranveer puts his arm around Ishaani and pulls her close to him, while they head back towards the car, a small hope re-entering their empty lives.



I know it's pretty long and the scene is pretty long and isn't as good as the one's several of y'all have written, but after last night's episode, I want to watch something as simple and soulful as this face to face, without the presence of any third person and without any misunderstandings in the air. 😛


Lm like everything in this, except that love confession, It was very simple and finished in very short period.
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Posted: 10 years ago
mint2, I know the confession is short. 😆😆 But for once, I wanted their actions to speak louder than their words, because all this time, their words have wrecked havoc in their lives. 😆 And as I said at the start, after yesterday night's episode, I wanted something simple that had only the two of them and their feelings, rather than the whole zoo or anything dramatic. 😕😆
Edited by LadyMeringue - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

I know I finally got around to editing this post. 😆😆 Everyone here has posted such lovely ideas that I fell short of what I wanted to see. But after yesterday's episode, I finally got it.

After Falguni's death, Ishaani is sitting on the seashore, heartbroken and alone, crying over the loss of her mother. She is lonely, for there is no one who will ever understand her like the way her mother could and is distraught at the number of people she has lost - first her father and now her mother. She can no longer go back to Ranveer, because she thinks that he is happily married to Ritika and none of her family members will accept her back. She has no will to fight anymore and is sitting on the seashore simply crying into her arms, hugging herself for sole comfort.
Just then, Ranveer comes over there with Falguni's ashes (given that he gives fire to her asthi and the Parekh's don't really care about Falguni anymore, so they give the ashes to Ranveer). He sees someone crying near the sea and his heart pulls him to the woman. He reaches near her and bends down and gently taps her shoulder. When the woman turns his face, he is taken aback to see that it's Ishaani crying, but somehow, he is not shocked, for he always knew somewhere deep down that she is alive.
He keeps down the pot of ashes and pulls her into his arms and Ishaani doesn't object. She holds on to him, tired of pretending and faking her hatred and death and crying in his arms, while he simply rubs circles on her back and some tears fall from his eyes too at the fact that she is indeed alive and this is not a figment of his imagination. Imagine the female version of Tum Hi Ho going on in the BG.
Once they part from their hug, Ranveer notices the dove ring on Ishaani's finger and smiles, while she looks at him and simply whispers.
"I love you. I know you are married and going to become a father. I shouldn't be saying all this to you but-". He looks at her and whispers back '
"Shhh. It's alright. And I'm not married and that kid isn't mine. All I did was give it my name, so that Ritika wouldn't have to face shame and ridicule in the society. I love you. And it will only be you." Ranveer smiles at her while planting a soft kiss on her head and hugs her back once again, all their misunderstandings flowing away like the ebbing waves, understanding dawning over both of them.
Ranveer then flows Falguni's ashes in the sea, while Ishaani stares at Ranveer, a strange contentment passing through her, along with the flow of her tears. Coming back to the shore, Ranveer puts his arm around Ishaani and pulls her close to him, while they head back towards the car, a small hope re-entering their empty lives.
I know it's pretty long and the scene is pretty long and isn't as good as the one's several of y'all have written, but after last night's episode, I want to watch something as simple and soulful as this face to face, without the presence of any third person and without any misunderstandings in the air. 😛


Its beautiful LM..
👏 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much Rebecca. 😳😳
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I started writing this as a scene and it became more of OS.. LM - This is all because of you.. !! 😆😆😆
All chappals, joothis, tomatoes, onions etc are welcome !!
First attempt at creative writing, so consider yourself warned !! 😃😃😃
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Birth of a hope

Part 1

Ranveer stirred in his sleep. He was half awake. Like every morning, images of Ishani flashed in front of his eyes - today she was looking at him lovingly while he fed her the birthday cake. Ranveer woke up as he remembered the chilled air of the fridge cooling both of them. He realized that he had slept on the terrace again after struggling with his memories for a long time.

As he sat up, he heard footsteps. Ritika came up to him with a big smile. She was hiding something in one hand. "Happy Birthday RV!!, I was looking for you everywhere.. " She said excitedly. "Ritika, why are you walking around so much, doctor has told you to take rest. I would have come down anyway." Ranveer was apologetic. "Oh, that's ok. I am feeling better today." She handed over the gift to him. It was a fancy and expensive watch. Ranveer thanked her. She hesitated a little as he stood next to her. "What is it, Ritika?" "Well, Please don't get angry but Ma and Parul really wanted to celebrate your birthday so we have arranged for a small party in the evening, not a big one, just our close circle." Ranveer was not pleased at all. He was in no mood to enjoy people's company when all he would have loved was to be left alone, but there was no point in arguing with his mother, he knew it very well.

"All right, if it is decided already. But I don't want you to strain yourself and you must go to bed on time." Ranveer said.

"Yes, yes, I will. " Ritika was happy that he did not need too much convincing.

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Ishani got out of the bed early. She had hardly slept anyways. "Today is his birthday and I won't be able to even wish him", she thought wryly. Memories of his past birthdays when they were children, came to her mind. Papa always used to buy gifts for Ranveer and she would help him in choosing the right one, because she knew Ranveer's choice the best. She smiled to herself thinking of those days.

The only satisfaction she had was Shikhar too had asked her to buy a gift for Ranveer. So she had bought something she knew he would like very much. "At least I can give him a gift though he will never know I was the one who bought it." She sighed.

As she looked at herself in the mirror, her overwhelming guilt conquered her as usual. "I know I have given you too much pain, Ranveer, but you don't know why I did it and now I never ever want you to know it. You are happy in your life and that is what I have always wanted." She muttered to herself.

She realized that there was something more she could still do for him. She will pray for his happiness with as much love and dedication as she could.

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Ranveer got ready and went down to the living room. He was not planning to take leave from work even after lot of coaxing from Amba and Ritika. Amba had made him his favorite breakfast items, which he ate by putting up an appearance of being very happy with. She did aarati for him and wished for his long life. "Beta, Thakurji ko pranam karke jana." She said.

As he stood in front of Thakurji, Parul asked "What are you going to ask for, Bhaiyya?" "Oh, this year he does not need to ask for anything, because he got everything already!" Amba beamed before he could say a word. "Now we are just waiting for the good news to come soon." She glanced at Ritika happily. Ranveer forced himself to smile. "Ma is right, Parul. I have to just thank the God for the joy he has given me.. , however brief it was", he said the later part in his mind thinking about those few beautiful days he had with Ishani.

He could not shake up the ache that had occupied his heart since morning. However, as he said his prayer with closed eyes, there was a distinct flutter in his heart, as if someone had touched his heart again with love, briefly filling it with happiness. He opened his eyes in surprise since it was a sensation he had not had for a long time of 7 months.

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"What is the problem, Nirupa, I don't understand why you don't want to come with me. RV and Ritika both want to meet you so much, they have heard about you a lot." Shikhar was half-pleading and half-threatening. He had promised RV and Ritika that they will see her today. Nirupa was adamant.

"Why do they want to meet me? Because you have probably told them that you have an ex-convict girl staying in your house and they want to see how such girls look like..!" she fumed. She faked it well, Shikhar had no idea of her acting abilities. "No, no, that is not the case at all. They are very nice people." "I don't want anyone's sympathy nor do I want to be exhibited like a showpiece. I am not coming. As it is, I don't like to attend parties with so many people around." Her voice had a finality to it, which Shikhar could not override. "Fine. Do as you wish." He banged the door as he went out alone.

Nirupa turned and went to her room. How much ever she wished to see Ranveer, she knew it would be suicidal to go there. She struggled to hold her tears for a long time, but it was futile and they flowed freely in the loneliness of her room.

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As Ranveer and Ritika mingled amongst the guests, everyone wished them. Ranveer cut the cake amongst a loud applause and a birthday song. As he fed the cake to Ritika and his family, he tried hard to pretend that he was cheerful and enjoying the attention. Ritika was happy with the thought that Shikhar had come alone today and she had nothing to worry. Her plan had worked. She had called Ishani day before and had come to know that she was not planning to come anyway. She thought of keeping them away from each other as long as possible, as she secretly smirked.

Ranveer noticed Shikhar sitting crestfallen in a chair and instantly knew that something was wrong. "Hey Shikhar, how come you are alone?" "Don't ask. She just does not listen to me." Shikhar was bitter.

Ranveer smiled. "Tell me what happened." As Shikhar told him the whole story, he nodded. "She is right, she must be embarrassed thinking that we know about her past when she is trying to hide it from everyone." "Well, that is not all. There is more. She had just called me some time back. I forgot your gift at home that I had asked her to buy for you. I told her I will give it to you tomorrow. She said she does not like late latifs at all." Shikhar's face had fallen more now. Ranveer rolled his eyes. "Well, you are in a soup then." "Yes, very much and a sticky and spicy one, you know." Shikhar quipped. "If you don't mind, I am going to stay here till late and go home only when I know she has slept."

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Nirupa kept looking at the gift-wrapped box on the side table. She felt heartbroken that her gift could not reach Ranveer today. "Why does the destiny has to be so cruel to me? I can't even get small pleasures like this?" She thought sadly and cursed Shikhar. But next instant, she realized that she should not be cursing him since he was the only one who had even made it possible for her to live. She held the box close to her ardently wishing she could give it to Ranveer herself.

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Ranveer looked at Shikhar, he thought for a moment. "Shikhar, let us do one thing. I will come with you to your house after the party. Then you can give me the gift, so you won't be stamped as late latif and you can also introduce me to her. I am sure she will be more comfortable meeting me in your house rather than here." Shikhar looked at him as if he had seen divine light! "RV, you are a godsend. How you so quickly think of solving people's problems, beats me." Ranveer smiled as he felt that something good was going to happen soon.

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To be continued in part 2
Edited by matsh - 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

Ranveer and Shikhar left in Ranveer's car after the party wrapped up. Ranveer asked him not to call Nirupa, least she should decide to hide in her room. He took few pieces of the birthday cake with him in a box. As they reached the house, Shikhar pressed the bell and almost simultaneously exclaimed "Oh no!", "What now?" Ranveer questioned. "I forgot my cell in the car. My brain has really stopped working nowadays. I will be back in a moment." Ranveer shook his head and gave him the keys as he smiled at Shikhar's state.

He stared at the closed door. That distinct flutter of the morning was back and there was anticipation in his heart making it beat faster. He felt his breath quickening. For the life of him, he could not understand what was happening. He heard footsteps inside and the door opened. As he saw the face that became visible from the gap in the door, Ranveer could not believe his eyes. The door opened completely, two quick gasps and then silence filled the air.

Ranveer stared wide-eyed and hard at Ishani as she stared back at him. He felt as if he was struck by lightning and had become immobile. A volcano of emotions erupted within him - shock, happiness, surprise, relief, anger, guilt - he was gasping for air as all those feelings almost choked him. It was a miracle that he was indeed standing in front of her - all flesh and soul, intact from the clutches of death. A feeling of pure bliss filled his heart and his eyes could not get enough of her. The love and longing in his heart that he thought he had locked up, was back with a force unknown to himself. He wanted to hold her close and just forget the world around them.

Ishani was trembling with emotion as she found him most unexpectedly. She knew that this was going to happen someday but she was so not prepared for it at this moment. Her eyes brimmed up with tears seeing Ranveer so close after such a long time. So many thoughts came to her mind that she did not know what to say. She wished she could just run into his arms and give him solace for all the pain she had given him, once and for all telling him how much she really loved him.

But she was aware of the reality more than he was and she could see he was astonished to see her, his eyes lit up with love. It is too late and he does not belong to me anymore, she reminded herself. She had no wish to snatch away whatever little happiness life had started giving him. She knew she could only offer him more pain again if she bared her heart.

"Ishani, you are alive! I knew it, I always knew it. In my heart I always believed that you were not dead and I will see you some day. You have no idea how I lived through these last months. But why did you not come to me Ishani? Why did you keep away from me?" Ranveer exclaimed and stepped towards her. She hesitated, she looked at him bewildered at his expectation and felt hurt. Ranveer stopped at that moment as if he was given a rude shock. The least he had expected her was to be happy to see him, but she seemed to be lost and unsure.

The conversations he had with Shikhar rang in his mind, he realized it was more than 2 weeks since she was here. He felt cheated. "Did I not deserve that much, Ishani? As least you could think of informing me that you are alive, not as a friend but at least as a courtesy after I spent so much time trying to get you out of jail?" Anger started to build in him with every moment now, as he saw her standing quietly with a questioning look on her face. Why did she not think of me at all? That question burned in his mind.

"How could I come to you Ranveer and with what right?" Ishani glared, angry after hearing what he assumed of her even though he was married already.

Just then there were footsteps heard. Shikhar came in view and they both became silent. "I am so sorry, guys. Nirupa, this is RV, my dear friend and mentor in some special matters." Shikhar chuckled. "RV, this is Nirupa. She works with my mother in her NGO, she is living with us currently." Shikhar was careful not to mention anything that will upset Nirupa. But he should not have really bothered since she was more than upset already.

As they went in, there was a coldness in Ranveer's manner, equally reciprocated by Ishani. They seemed to avoid looking at each other. Shikhar did not know what to do and glanced at both. He fiddled with the box of cake and kept it on the side table. Ranveer tried to regain his composure, he must not let Shikhar know something was amiss, he realized.

"I am happy to have met you, Nirupa." Ranveer emphasized the new name, it gave him an alien feeling. "I believe I have spoken to you already a couple of times, though I never had the pleasure of hearing you speak."

Ishani noticed the edge in his voice. "Fine, I can play this game too." She thought.

"Thank you and I am happy to have met you too, Mr. RV. I am sorry, I bothered you quite a bit that day in the hotel. You were very kind to me, when not knowing who I was." Ishani replied.

"RV is the kindest soul I have ever seen!" Shikhar interjected. "He is just like you, he knows what people are feeling before they tell him and always wants to see everyone happy."

"Oh, Shikhar, you give me more credit than due. I am sure Mr. RV is much more well-equipped to help others than me and I am really no comparison to him as far as giving happiness is concerned."

Ranveer felt the emotion in her voice, he wondered if it was a veiled rebuke. He felt his temples getting hot and his nerves throbbing.

"Well, I try to do whatever I can because someone once told me that biggest gift you can give anyone is hope. Once hope is destroyed, a person's life is nothing, he or she is as good as dead. You should have at least one person in your life who can give you hope, whom you can trust and who can make your life worthwhile by just being there." As he said that, his expression turned remorseful and then acidic, his eyes fiery.

Ishani felt her heart getting injected with millions of needles as those words fell on her ears. Is this why you decided to marry Ritika, because she gives you hope, trust and makes your life worthwhile? - all those questions remained unanswered in her mind since she dared not ask them.

"Giving hope is as rare as giving love. Only the lucky ones have such people in their life, Mr. RV. Not everyone is that lucky. "

"Well, sometimes it is because not everyone understands that they already have such a person in their life and keep looking elsewhere." He replied instantaneously.

Ranveer wondered whether he should continue this sword-less duel or just make some excuse and leave. He was too overwhelmed at his own feelings to think straight and the fact of her existence had completely made his world go upside-down. Ishani wanted to run away to a far end of the world, where no one could ever see her. She decided to end the matter as fast as possible, the last thing she needed was Shikhar getting doubts on her relation with Ranveer. She became silent again.

Shikhar looked at both of them lost in their own thoughts and the conversation where he had no share, seemed to have ended. "Well, Nirupa, I think you have forgotten something. " He tried to hint. Ishani looked at him blankly.

"Can you get that gift you got for RV?"

"Yes, I am so sorry, I completely forgot about it in all that talk." Ishani genuinely felt bad. She got the box and handed it over to Shikhar. "Why don't you give it, after all you took all the trouble!" he gave the box back to her. Ishani hesitated but took it on impulse. She turned towards Ranveer, her hands gripped the box as she felt unsteady with the surge of emotions. Her demeanor changed as the realization dawned on her that she was finally given a chance to meet him on his special day. Ranveer looked at her shaky hands and suddenly lost all the animosity he had a few moments ago.

"Wish you a Very Happy Birthday and a wonderful life ahead! I really hope all good things come your way and you get as much happiness as you give." She said sincerely, controlling her tears, as she gave him the gift.

"Oh yes, he does have some good things coming his way! Didn't I tell you that he is becoming a father very soon?" Shikhar exclaimed.

"Yes, more reasons for celebration, I must congratulate you and your wife Mr RV, her name is Ritika, right? Please do convey my best wishes to her." Ishani looked at Ranveer with a forced smile. Ranveer's face turned pale. The whole room seemed to blur in front of his eyes. This is it!' he realized. Now he knew the reason of that hurt in her eyes and why she never came to him. But how could she believe it and how could she not know about the baby, wasn't she told that it was Sherman's, How do I tell her the truth now, his mind was bursting with thoughts, he felt uneasy and clutched the box absentmindedly.

"Why don't you open your gift?" Shikhar was curious since he wanted to see the gift too. Ranveer opened the box. It was a beautiful Indian style men's kurta of lime green colored silk, with delicate embroidery near the neck. It was simple, classy and elegant. "I love it." he said touching it fondly. "Thank you very much. I love this color, it reminds me of an old one someone had given me years ago."

Ishani did not dare to look at him, she knew which one he meant. She had hoped that he would remember it when he opened his gift at home. But now seeing him reminiscing the past in front of her was unbearable.

"Well, time to eat the cake!" Shikhar's timing and enthusiasm was unbeatable. Ranveer wished he could just make him disappear and talk to Ishani alone. There was so much to say and so much to hear between them. Deep in his heart he knew she could not possibly love Chirag but she had been so adamant on that. He wanted to get some clue on what she really thought of him. He just wanted to hold her close and make her swear on his head that she had no love for him in her heart. Only if he could.. , he felt the frustration rising in every cell of his body.

They ate the cake quietly, Ranveer and Ishani both thought of the one they had enjoyed on Ishani's birthday. Shikhar was observing them quietly wondering whether Ranveer had got enough insight on Nirupa to form an opinion. Little did he know how futile his worry was.

"I must leave now. It is getting late." Ranveer was most reluctant but he knew he had to. Ishani nodded and followed him and Shikhar absent-mindedly to the door. Ranveer stood near the door, looking at her. She stared at the floor as if it was the most interesting object in the whole room. The locks of her hair were covering her face, making it more inscrutable. His hands twitched, he wanted to lift her face and put those locks in their proper place, like he had done innumerable amount of times.

As if by telepathy, Ishani lifted her face and moved her left hand across her locks, putting them back. Something twinkled and glowed on her hand spreading a small aura of delicate light, it was the dove-ring. Ranveer's gazed at it incredulously, he realized it had found its way back to the rightful owner from Sanaya. The light of the ring reflected in his heart, a wing of hope was unfurling inside him, the cocoon getting destroyed slowly. He was determined that he will not let go of her again whatever happens. He smiled at her, she had given him the best gift today he could have ever asked for.

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Sorry, this became a little too long..and will take some patience to read !!

All comments/criticism are most welcome !! 🤗


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Awesome matsh.. Pls update this fast. Want their sweet face off...
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

I know I finally got around to editing this post. 😆😆 Everyone here has posted such lovely ideas that I fell short of what I wanted to see. But after yesterday's episode, I finally got it.

After Falguni's death, Ishaani is sitting on the seashore, heartbroken and alone, crying over the loss of her mother. She is lonely, for there is no one who will ever understand her like the way her mother could and is distraught at the number of people she has lost - first her father and now her mother. She can no longer go back to Ranveer, because she thinks that he is happily married to Ritika and none of her family members will accept her back. She has no will to fight anymore and is sitting on the seashore simply crying into her arms, hugging herself for sole comfort.
Just then, Ranveer comes over there with Falguni's ashes (given that he gives fire to her asthi and the Parekh's don't really care about Falguni anymore, so they give the ashes to Ranveer). He sees someone crying near the sea and his heart pulls him to the woman. He reaches near her and bends down and gently taps her shoulder. When the woman turns his face, he is taken aback to see that it's Ishaani crying, but somehow, he is not shocked, for he always knew somewhere deep down that she is alive.
He keeps down the pot of ashes and pulls her into his arms and Ishaani doesn't object. She holds on to him, tired of pretending and faking her hatred and death and crying in his arms, while he simply rubs circles on her back and some tears fall from his eyes too at the fact that she is indeed alive and this is not a figment of his imagination. Imagine the female version of Tum Hi Ho going on in the BG.
Once they part from their hug, Ranveer notices the dove ring on Ishaani's finger and smiles, while she looks at him and simply whispers.
"I love you. I know you are married and going to become a father. I shouldn't be saying all this to you but-". He looks at her and whispers back '
"Shhh. It's alright. And I'm not married and that kid isn't mine. All I did was give it my name, so that Ritika wouldn't have to face shame and ridicule in the society. I love you. And it will only be you." Ranveer smiles at her while planting a soft kiss on her head and hugs her back once again, all their misunderstandings flowing away like the ebbing waves, understanding dawning over both of them.
Ranveer then flows Falguni's ashes in the sea, while Ishaani stares at Ranveer, a strange contentment passing through her, along with the flow of her tears. Coming back to the shore, Ranveer puts his arm around Ishaani and pulls her close to him, while they head back towards the car, a small hope re-entering their empty lives.
I know it's pretty long and the scene is pretty long and isn't as good as the one's several of y'all have written, but after last night's episode, I want to watch something as simple and soulful as this face to face, without the presence of any third person and without any misunderstandings in the air. 😛



Wah LM... A big round of applause

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