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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay!!Finally the first one to comment
Coming bk to ur update, it was very cute MM...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I felt really bad for Angela...But our IshVeer changed my mood...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ranveer...Oh My!!! He is so handsome that even teachers are having an eye on him... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


So, this tym, it was a pretty long update...so, tysm for that too...๐Ÿ˜›

Take care of ur health n studies MM..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Love,
Aarushi๐Ÿ˜‰
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OMG!!!!!!! .
Look at this! My girl has finally learnt to write such romance!!! โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ The previous chapter of yours was such an eye-candy, it made me drool over IshVeer completely!! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Ishaani making Ranveer's tie for him and all those sweet talks between them just sent me off into another kind of lala land altogether. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ANd Ranveer talking about baby Vaghela!!! โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ Ahem, when will those two be having their baby Vaghela, anyway? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ I can't wait to read about all that! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And judging by the way you are going, it doesn't seem too far off either. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
And coming to this update, my gosh, what can I say?! All those teachers drooling over Ranveer and Ishaani burning all of their hearts by such PDA in public? ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ (although it was Ranveer with all the kissing, but still. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž) And are you sure that you weren't hiding behind the teachers and drooling over Ranveer as well? ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช I'm guessing that you were, and that you stole that flying kiss away from all those flustered teachers as punishment for taxing you with so much homework. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
And before I go all mental, I must say that the way you have shown IshVeer's bond here really makes me want to keep hugging you. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
And the whole Angela scene made me so sad. That poor girl had so much expectations about seeing her mother, but she was disappointed. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ But I can understand Ananya's POV as well - no mother would ever be able to face a situation like that. ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• And her remark about Angela having two mothers and a father who loved her so much really made go .
You are getting so good with your words that you keep sweeping me off the floor. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ And the ending was just as good, with Ranveer and Ishaani always seeking strength from each other. โค๏ธโค๏ธ But before I forget, even Ishaani's advice on tackling the situation was bang on. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
These two updates have been really extraordinary, MM! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— Keep doing such a brilliant job and take care of yourself as well! โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ And most importantly, study well! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
And yes, even more crucial, update soon! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Loads of love! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
LM
Ps. I have a two requests and a question as well. Staring with the requests, greedy as I am, I want a longer update. I know that your schedule is jam-packed, but I really do wanna read a longer update. Kya kare, I've become very greedy. ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช
My second request is that Harshad has been missing from the story for quite some time. I do wanna read more about Harshad and now he solves his issues out with Ranveer as well. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Now coming to my question. I was re-reading you initial chapters when I remembered that you had once told me that Alia would come to play a very crucial role in the story. What my question is - did you scrape off her character because it didn't fit in the plot, or will she make a cameo back here again? ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishveerian

i am happy that everyone is replying here actually you deserve this Buddy but at the same time i am sad why no one is replying on my FF i think i should discontinue it

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I just happened to be going through the thread when I saw this. Sweetheart, you mustn't get disheartened like this. For every writer, the initial phase is always the hardest, where we have to go through several stories where nobody reviews before people start doing so and appreciating your work. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
I myself have been through the same phase, but it only helped me grow as a writer and a person both. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š So don't worry, if people aren't replying that much right now, take it in your stride and try to bring improvements into your writing and technique. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ People will start replying eventually. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
In case you ever need help on anything, I'll always be here for you. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— So cheer up and get working on the next update! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ishveer4eva

Yay!!Finally the first one to comment

Coming bk to ur update, it was very cute MM...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I felt really bad for Angela...But our IshVeer changed my mood...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ranveer...Oh My!!! He is so handsome that even teachers are having an eye on him...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


So, this tym, it was a pretty long update...so, tysm for that too...๐Ÿ˜›

Take care of ur health n studies MM..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Love,
Aarushi๐Ÿ˜‰



Hey Aarushi ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Yes , u are the first one this time ๐Ÿ˜‰ Aww I am glad u found it cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yeah I felt bad for Angela as well ๐Ÿ˜ญ Yeah I made sure that it was IshVeer cuteness overloaded ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†

Yeah , hahaa that was something that just came naturally ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ Can't blame the teachers can we ๐Ÿ˜›

Finally someone said that I update a long chapter , since I am known for the opposite ๐Ÿ˜† Arrey no thank u shank u , no need to be formal with me ๐Ÿ˜†

Aww I will , u too dearie โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Love MM ๐Ÿค—
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Awww its cute MM ... Ishani coworkers were having eye on ranveer that's cutest part ... Beautifully written... Thanks for pm ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

OMG!!!!!!! .



Look at this! My girl has finally learnt to write such romance!!! โ˜บ๏ธThe previous chapter of yours was such an eye-candy, it made me drool over IshVeer completely!! โค๏ธIshaani making Ranveer's tie for him and all those sweet talks between them just sent me off into another kind of lala land altogether. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ




ANd Ranveer talking about baby Vaghela!!! โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธAhem, when will those two be having their baby Vaghela, anyway? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰I can't wait to read about all that! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒAnd judging by the way you are going, it doesn't seem too far off either. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†




And coming to this update, my gosh, what can I say?! All those teachers drooling over Ranveer and Ishaani burning all of their hearts by such PDA in public? ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ(although it was Ranveer with all the kissing, but still. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž) And are you sure that you weren't hiding behind the teachers and drooling over Ranveer as well? ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช๐ŸคชI'm guessing that you were, and that you stole that flying kiss away from all those flustered teachers as punishment for taxing you with so much homework. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ




And before I go all mental, I must say that the way you have shown IshVeer's bond here really makes me want to keep hugging you. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—




And the whole Angela scene made me so sad. That poor girl had so much expectations about seeing her mother, but she was disappointed. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญBut I can understand Ananya's POV as well - no mother would ever be able to face a situation like that. ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•And her remark about Angela having two mothers and a father who loved her so much really made go .




You are getting so good with your words that you keep sweeping me off the floor. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘And the ending was just as good, with Ranveer and Ishaani always seeking strength from each other. โค๏ธโค๏ธBut before I forget, even Ishaani's advice on tackling the situation was bang on. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ




These two updates have been really extraordinary, MM! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—Keep doing such a brilliant job and take care of yourself as well! โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธAnd most importantly, study well! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ




And yes, even more crucial, update soon! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—




Loads of love! โค๏ธโค๏ธ

LM




Ps. I have a two requests and a question as well. Staring with the requests, greedy as I am, I want a longer update. I know that your schedule is jam-packed, but I really do wanna read a longer update. Kya kare, I've become very greedy. ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช



My second request is that Harshad has been missing from the story for quite some time. I do wanna read more about Harshad and now he solves his issues out with Ranveer as well. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Now coming to my question. I was re-reading you initial chapters when I remembered that you had once told me that Alia would come to play a very crucial role in the story. What my question is - did you scrape off her character because it didn't fit in the plot, or will she make a cameo back here again? ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›






OMG YOUR REVIEW

It 's official I just got the longest review and I am a red tomato ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank God , I thought I would never manage with the genre ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜› But I am glad I am doing an okey job and you guys don't want to throw me out of the country ๐Ÿ˜† Yeah the previously chapter was something that just came to me , I wanted them to have a cute conversation with romance ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ I am really glad u liked it dearie โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Yeah I had to bring baby Vaghela in there ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hahaa , ofc they will ๐Ÿ˜ณ The question is when ๐Ÿ˜› I can 't wait to write about that ๐Ÿ˜‰ Tbh I have really planned about it all ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah it is soon enough , first they just have to heal some certain scars and then ... ๐Ÿ˜†

"Guilty as charge LM "๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† You caught me red handed yaar ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ณ Poor Ishu , I was blushing so much while writing that part I don't know how she mange to stand on her feet ๐Ÿ˜† The thing u told about flying kisses was so true , you know that part came to me when I was sitting in class ๐Ÿ˜†

Aww my arms are always open for your hugs ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Yeah I was crying while I wrote the Angela part ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ But I have something good planned for her and Annaya , I don't like torturing people ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ And pluss it will a lot ishveer romance involved that will leave u blushing forever ๐Ÿ˜ณ hmm , not saying anything more ๐Ÿ˜›

Yeah I felt it realistic that Annaya won't be able to meet her the first time , after all she did not want her pain to be given to her daughter as well ๐Ÿ˜ญ Yeah that remark was something I felt fitted the situation and I am really glad that u liked it as well ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Oh my LM , u know that is my favourite thing to hear that I am getting good with words ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Now u made my dear , and I am still a tomato while writing this ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yeah I want a IshVeer who can communicate even if they are the most complicated people ๐Ÿ˜ณ Well it is true is 'n it , that was something once my mom told me that when I feel I can't do anything just be theirs friend โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Aww I will my sweetheart , u take care of yourself and studies well and best of luck to my girl with my exams ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I will try to have the update by tomorrow but have to tests coming up so will see what happens but In sha Allah will update by tomorrow ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

LM , Harshad will come back in the story for sure , one of the scars that need to be healed is for sure this one ๐Ÿ˜Š And Ranveer and Harshad is going to have one conversation whitch will bring tears in everyone's eyes and about Alia I have not forgotten her and she will help also with healing one of the scars ๐Ÿ˜‰

With love MM
โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue


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I just happened to be going through the thread when I saw this.Sweetheart, you mustn't get disheartened like this.For every writer, the initial phase is always the hardest, where we have to go through several stories where nobody reviews before people startdoing so and appreciating your work. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›




I myself have been through the same phase, but it only helped me grow as a writer and a person both. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ŠSo don't worry, if people aren't replying that much right now, take it in your stride and try to bring improvements into your writing and technique. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒPeople will start replying eventually. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ




In case you ever need help on anything, I'll always be here for you. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—So cheer up and get working on the next update! โค๏ธโค๏ธ



I agree with LM here , the start of your first story every ff writer face the same challenge and it is sad because it is on the beginning we are the most insecure , but my mom has always told me that even if there is one person cheering on you then u should keep moving forward because someone saw something good in your work then it must be something good . So keep up with your good work and dedication and I am sure you are going to have readers on line waiting for reading your masterpiece ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿค—

With love and best wishes
MM
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Awww its cute MM ... Ishani coworkers were having eye on ranveer that's cutest part ... Beautifully written... Thanks for pm ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank u so much ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— I am glad u liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yeah that was my favourite part to write as well ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› Thank u so much ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Arrey please stop thanking me for such a small thing ๐Ÿ˜‰

With love
MM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456



OMG YOUR REVIEW

It 's official I just got the longest review and I am a red tomato ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank God , I thought I would never manage with the genre ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜› But I am glad I am doing an okey job and you guys don't want to throw me out of the country ๐Ÿ˜† Yeah the previously chapter was something that just came to me , I wanted them to have a cute conversation with romance ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ I am really glad u liked it dearie โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Yeah I had to bring baby Vaghela in there ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hahaa , ofc they will ๐Ÿ˜ณ The question is when ๐Ÿ˜› I can 't wait to write about that ๐Ÿ˜‰ Tbh I have really planned about it all ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah it is soon enough , first they just have to heal some certain scars and then ... ๐Ÿ˜†

"Guilty as charge LM "๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† You caught me red handed yaar ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ณ Poor Ishu , I was blushing so much while writing that part I don't know how she mange to stand on her feet ๐Ÿ˜† The thing u told about flying kisses was so true , you know that part came to me when I was sitting in class ๐Ÿ˜†

Aww my arms are always open for your hugs ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Yeah I was crying while I wrote the Angela part ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ But I have something good planned for her and Annaya , I don't like torturing people ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ And pluss it will a lot ishveer romance involved that will leave u blushing forever ๐Ÿ˜ณ hmm , not saying anything more ๐Ÿ˜›

Yeah I felt it realistic that Annaya won't be able to meet her the first time , after all she did not want her pain to be given to her daughter as well ๐Ÿ˜ญ Yeah that remark was something I felt fitted the situation and I am really glad that u liked it as well ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Oh my LM , u know that is my favourite thing to hear that I am getting good with words ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Now u made my dear , and I am still a tomato while writing this ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yeah I want a IshVeer who can communicate even if they are the most complicated people ๐Ÿ˜ณ Well it is true is 'n it , that was something once my mom told me that when I feel I can't do anything just be theirs friend โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Aww I will my sweetheart , u take care of yourself and studies well and best of luck to my girl with my exams ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I will try to have the update by tomorrow but have to tests coming up so will see what happens but In sha Allah will update by tomorrow ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

LM , Harshad will come back in the story for sure , one of the scars that need to be healed is for sure this one ๐Ÿ˜Š And Ranveer and Harshad is going to have one conversation whitch will bring tears in everyone's eyes and about Alia I have not forgotten her and she will help also with healing one of the scars ๐Ÿ˜‰

With love MM
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I can understand the pleasure of reading long reviews because you always gift me with them. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed And you must look really good with all that blushing. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
And coming back to the point, yes, you are certainly getting good with it. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ And if this is the trailer and there is a lot more romance in store, I can only imagine what's going to happen. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ And you have planned it out! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ That means that our baby Vaghela will be on the way soon enough. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I guessed it as much. ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช I could only imagine how much you must have blushed writing this and I'm not disappointed at all. Besides, all such ideas find their source of inspiration from the school only. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Oh yeah, I can't wait to read about Angela and Annaya! โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ And that is a beautiful thing your mother said. โค๏ธโค๏ธ As to IshVeer being complicated people, what can I say? They are are complex as the layers of an onion.
Don't worry, I will, and I will be looking forward to your update as well. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And yes, hearing that you are improving steadily is amongst one of the best feelings that you can have. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ And all the best for your tests as well, sweetie! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
And I'm looking forward to see how Harshad and Alia help them solve some of their scars as well. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And another doubt too - will Riddhima too help Ranveer ease the guilt of Akash's death a little bit? And what about Ranveer's father?
Ps. I'm ready to be blown away with all the *blushing* romance between IshVeer. ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๏ธDay Dreamingโค๏ธ
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Originally posted by: MM123456



I agree with LM here , the start of your first story every ff writer face the same challenge and it is sad because it is on the beginning we are the most insecure , but my mom has always told me that even if there is one person cheering on you then u should keep moving forward because someone saw something good in your work then it must be something good . So keep up with your good work and dedication and I am sure you are going to have readers on line waiting for reading your masterpiece ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿค—

With love and best wishes
MM

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True enough, MM. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› In my case, I had written up to a dozen and more stories before I finally found people reading and appreciating my work the way they do now. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
So dear, just be strong and keep giving your best. You'll be there eventually and people will give you the due credit for the hardwork and dedication that you've put into it. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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