@ Maverick
Hi hun, I just read your updated comment. Thank you very much for your feedback, its more helpful than you guys realise and you give me ideas too when you have suggestions. I may not always use them exactly as suggested, but it always helps me get an idea of what people want to read! 😳 it's a badge of honour for you to say that reading it was like watching a movie, thank you so much. Im loving the rebellious idea- who knows??? Watch this space hehe
LOL and yes, even though I wrote the kiss myself, as a viewer it was a relief for me that they finally kissed!!! LOL!!! 😆😆 Even if it was from my own imagination lol well, Im glad I shared it with everyone too! Hope Naaz got some relief from that too haha! 😆 No... I don't think we will see consummation on the show- not even a hint of it. Its gone too far off the rails I think. Oh well... I guess Ill just have to fill the void somehow 😉 Thanks Maverick, really loved your comment!
@Sharmi_swadarsh
Thank you to you also for your feedback 😊 Im so glad you enjoyed it and felt the emotions too. You guys are awesome letting me know what you think. It really helps because it takes alot of time to write this stuff lol. It looks like you all want me to keep going, so will give it my best and use this fan fic to practice my writing on an audience until you've all had enough 😉 Yeah Sharmi, my favourite thing when I read a romance novel is the sexual tension and craving. I think it's the best part of any romance; the angst. I was hoping both Riya's and Shivam's soliloquies would give a much clearer insight into their psyches'. In my version they are nothing like who they are on tv- the situations might be similar but their personalities are meant to be much much more likeable and complex and I want the readers to understand that they might have really messed up, but given how crazy they are about each other they are definitely still redeemable. Unlike the tv versions 🤢 what have the writers done?? Lol! Thank you again dear, really appreciate it.
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