A ShivYa FF- UPDATE Part Two - Page 2

Originally posted by: CoolBeans86

Oh fab, those lyrics are perfect! I kind of really like them for my FF too haha! Its like they are together, but apart and no no matter how near to each other they are it seems that they couldnt be further apart. I didnt understand all the lyrics, so went to a site where its been fully translated and they are perfect words I think. Good job spotting that one! 😛

Originally posted by: CoolBeans86

Originally posted by: CoolBeans86

@Naaz

Thank you so much Naaz for the fantastic feedback! Yes I had to get that kiss in there... not too heavy at this point... but Ill build up to it hehe 😆 I will take your suggestions under consideration my dear 😉 in my FF they definitely havent consummated yet- so who knows whats in store for them? 😛 Im really really happy that the emotions came through the page :) it wasnt easy to try and shove the tv versions of ShivYa out of my head and create my own version where the emotions are much more realistic and combustive. Thank you again!!

@Sana21

Oh wow... 🤗 I dont think you have any idea how touched I was reading your comment/review. I actually had tears in my eyes, I didnt think anyone would enjoy it THAT much. I am really, really touched Sana, thank you, wish I could give you a hug for real just for those comments. I actually love to write and I love using words to describe things from the subtlest feelings to the most visceral encounters in life. This is my first attempt at fan fiction online; Im actually in the middle of a project that I hope to publish soon one day but I needed to take a break from it because its such a huge project for me. And Princesssheena honestly gave me the inspiration to try my hand at this. Im really enjoying it and honestly preferring my own imagination to what is happening on tv. at the moment (however I have to say that today's episode definitely was more of an improvement than the recent ones and something I can use in my FF to expand on/alter to my tastes) I wasnt sure if it would be everyone's cup of tea... but thats the beauty of creative license isnt it? Anyone can write what they want and put it out there 😊 I cant tell you how much your comment had an effect on me; I feel alot more confident now, knowing that even if one or two people really REALLY like my work, then its not a waste of my time! I dont think people realise just how much it means to leave feedback to a creative piece, especially if its something you are passionate about and have put time and energy into. This project Im doing is all consuming tbh, and Im loving every minute of it but sometimes you just need a break to re-wire your brain and get some fresh inspiration! So thats probably why Im enjoying writing about my version of ShivYa at the moment! hehe You and others have definitely given me the incentive to keep going.
Again, thank YOU so much for your comments. Totally made my day too 😳

Originally posted by: Naaz695

@coolbeans & sana plzz have a look at this song its very similiar to the current ShivYa scenario 😛 Sana...thanks for reminding me of this song it is from the same movie tanu weds Manu returns & I love this song...😳

Here's the link 😃

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vNPn5TFPUxo

Originally posted by: sana21

Awww I love that movie so much. I always watch it and the end wedding scene is so sentimental. Do you remember that scene when just before the wedding, when Raja Awasthi tells them to go and Tanu says ''Aise kaise nikal jaenge awasthi ji,abhi toh humein aur jaleel hona hai,chalo baraat mein''. I was watching it last night and I literally could imagine RIYA saying this on the day of shivam-chanda wedding. The last 30 mins of that movie is so relatable to the shivya,I mean the whole tanu not giving up on manu till the end and going through all the pain .Its something RIya would do in the shivya track. And that old song ''Jaa Jaa Bewafaa'' just perfect for shivya track, I could literally imagine Riya to it.

I really like the song you mentioned above ''mat jaa re''. ❤️ And I agree its so relatable to the current shivya track.Awww plz plz make a vm on this song.

I just get so sentimental when I hear ''Oh Saathi Mere'' and listening to that song while reading coolbeans fic just makes me go all teary eyed.😭😊.

@Sana21

Thank you again so much 😊 I am the same- I prefer to read, I don't like being "told" what the characters should look like in movies etc, I like creating it in my head. Shivam in my head is different to how he is in the show, darker, broodier, sexier and more enigmatic.

I dont know if the pic above will come up- but seriously just look at him! Hotness drool drool 😆 Thats the shivam i have in my head, not the way he looks in the show now. He looks darker in my head. None of that hair side-sweep thing going on, he looks more like he did in the beginning when he was totally smoking hot lol Now he looks a touch too domesticated and I don't like his hairstyle. So yes, I prefer words to pictures I think. Lol Im beyond pleased to hear that my writing is descriptive enough that you can imagine it happening. I know shivya is addictive- there is something about the premise of the story- a couple living together under the same roof, but so far apart. So much potential.

Anyway love, thank you again so much!

@Maverick

I honestly don't know! LOL! 😆I just write and write and write and before I know its turned into a mini novel lol I used to get told off in school for making my stories too long, all I can say is Im glad I ignored those miserable buggars lol

@mannatrajakhan

Thank you! Glad youre still enjoying it hehe