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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: a little faith

Dear Divya,

I chose to listen to Ek Duje ke vaaste because I am not fond of that song of film and wanted to see if you found something I missed.

That beginning introduction, subtlety executed and very haunting, creating an aura of profundity that could only generate a deep ambiance, that something big was coming; what is bigger than truth? Divya, excellent!⭐️

Then that rise for Mil jaate hain, and that change in tone from pondering over fate to surrendering to destiny! Divya again, your voice brought in those finer aspects so well. Excellent! ⭐️

I listened to each undulation between verses, you caught each and held it for its length without any lessening! Excellent!

Then for each rise of the questioning, Jaise, your subtle but poignant answer of Ek duje ke vaaste, was just beautiful. I loved your emphasis of barkha saawan, through slowing of notes rather than rising of them, I don't know it that is in the original but I loved it here, and your take was excellent.

Then that dhadakte and bichhadte within those lines, such hard words to sing clearly and fluently but your voice enveloped each syllable. Excellent.

Then that repeat of that line, if it were not for your heart's sentiment's suffusing each repeat, they would have all blurred into one heap. very well done.

I loved your tone for '
Waqt ka hai ye faisla' absoutely teeming with poignancy.

Divya, I hope that your voice finds its way to many wearied hearts. Love Sabah

Di.. What do I say after reading your comment.. I am so touched after reading your comment and your honest opinion. I will definitely improve myself more.. Thanks a lot Di..😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello Guys,

Remember Me? Divya.. 😲ShockedShockedShockedShockedYaad aaya.. Good.
Well, I am updating today after a very long time... 😊😊😊 And this is gonna be a special update dedicated to my and all our beloved Mayank Sharma urffff Arjun Bijlani urfff Ganpat... And also to Rati.. This duo has made me crazy and insane and what not.. 😳EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed😍😍😍😍😍😍
This song is my NUMERO UNO Fav song.. A song of all times, my companion in all the situations .. Whatever I say about this Song and the Singer is something that cannot be woven into words.. True, to the lyrics of the song.. This song is very close to me and my life. I hope I have done some justice to this song by my singing. ❤️
And I have never dedicated this song to anyone in my entire life.. So, see this song is so special for me 😊😊.. And now I am gonna dedicate this extra special song to most extra-special people... Rati and Arjun... 🤗
See next post for the OS and Page 1 for the song.
And I have mostly replied to everyone.. Do check it out!! 😊
Edited by .Divya. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

❤️The Essence of My Life lies in you.. My SOULMATE❤️

It was a lonely day after being on the front at the border. After the continuous hearing of the bullets and the tankers, only one voice soothed his soul. He yearned to listen to his newly wed wife. Though it was an arranged marriage, he had fell in love with her long time ago. He was Capt. Mayank Sharma. A person who was just rough as a coconut from outside, but whose heart would melt at the very mention of her name, his distant cousin and best friend.. his Wife, Nupur.

It had been a week that he had received a mail from Nupur saying that it was her first Karwa-Chauth after the marriage and how she had wished that he had been at their residence instead of being at the war front.

Though he yearned to live every moment of his life with her, in her arms, holding her in his embrace, he loved his country equally.

It wasn't that she felt sad about her husband not being there, she was very proud of him, proud of the fact that her husband was one in a million, a person for whom country came in the first place and rest all took a back seat. She waited eagerly for his reply through phone or mail. At times, she even waited eagerly for the postman to see if he had any letter for her.

She remembered the first time Mayank and his parents had come to see her. It was almost 2 years since their alliance had been fixed by their parents. Though it was unknown to Nupur that Mayank loved her since the age of 12, she was pleasantly surprised that how could she marry a guy like Mayank who was so disciplined and focused in life. She was a girl who lived life on her own terms, never bound by any rules or policies, a girl who always dreamed and always wanted a peaceful life. But then she also wondered that in her life no one could understand her so well as Mayank did.. Even her silence was understood by him. She was very happy to find a soul mate in him and that he was going to be her life partner was making her feel the most luckiest girl ever. And for him, She was all he had asked/wished for in his life.

They kept in contact with each other through whatever communication was available. As Mayank was in the army, whenever he had a little time, he used to call her and talk for as much as they could. His long week-ends would be spent by travelling to her place and spending time with her, listening to her voice, capturing her face in his eyes and hearts and just be there with her. They both enjoyed each other's company so much that how time flew was always a question.

After a wait of 2 years, Mayank got a month's holiday from his work and this was when their family had decided for their wedding. But as luck would have it, barely after a week of their marriage, Mayank was asked to report on duty because of the sudden attack on the border.

On Karwa-Chauth, as Nupur was in her own small world of Mayank, she did hear some knock on the door. It was a letter lying there with no name on it. She opened it in haste just to have tears welled up. It was from Mayank, who had written that he wouldn't be able to come home as the job was still un-finished at the border. When she read the remaining contents of the letter, she was in awe that how can a person love some one from such a long time without letting anyone know about it. He had dedicated a song for her, her favourite song. Whenever he listened to this song, he was reminded of her. Each and every word of the song reminded him of her innocence, her inner beauty, her voice, her love for him, their longingness to be with each other and how they were an inseparable part of each other.

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehte Ho

Jeevan Meethi Pyaas Yeh Kehte Ho

Har Shyam Aankhon Par Tera Aanchal Lehraye

Har Raat Yaadon Ki Baarat Le Aaye

Mein Saans Leta Hoon Teri Khushboo Aati Hai

Ek Mehka Mehka Sa Paigaam Laati Hai

Meri Dil Ki Dhadkan Bhi Tere Geet Gaati Hai

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehte Ho

Kal Tujhko dekha tha Maine apne aangan mein

Jaise keh rahethe tum mujhe baandh bandhan mein

yeh kaisa rishta hain yeh kaise sapney hain

begaane hokar bhi kyun lagate apne hain

mein soch mein rehta hoon darr darrke kehta hoon

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehte Ho

Tum Sochoge Kyon Itna Mein Tumse Pyaar Karoon

Tum Samjhoge Deewana Mein Bhi Iqraar Karoon

Dewaanon Ki Yeh Baatein Deewane Jaante Hain

Jalne Mei Kya Mazaa Hai Parwane Jaante Hain

Tum Yunhi Jalate Rehna Aa Aakar Khwabon Mein

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehte Ho

Jeevan Meethi Pyaas Yeh Kehte Ho

The confessions in the letter left her totally in a state of shock and before she could come out of the shock, she got another one in the evening. After doing her pooja.. After seeing the moon, she turned to see the picture of Mayank, only to see Mayank the PERSON there instead of the picture. Seeing Mayank standing there with a big smile on his face giving her an exclusive view of his dimples, all she did was just run into arms and stay there forever.

Now GO AND LISTEN TO, Song No. 11:- Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas.
Do comment on the song as well as the OS.. I don't know how it has turned out.. BE GENEROUS WITH THE COMMENTS.. and DO PRESS THE LIKE TAB (Only Once).. 😊
Edited by .Divya. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OS ws vry sweeeeeeeeeet dii....

Song...it ws gud.....n i noticed..wid each stanza u gt better n better...so lik tht it ws 4th stanza d mst perfect n flawless one...n tht ws my fav part too.....😳😳


Edited by nikki028 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
is d song baahon ke darmiyan???itna lamba chauda ramayan likha on hw spl d song is...so me on a roll of guessin game........🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki028

is d song baahon ke darmiyan???itna lamba chauda ramayan likha on hw spl d song is...so me on a roll of guessin game........🤣

keep guessing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
deva re devaaaaaaa........u r sooooo mean.....🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
bye any chabce - did you think of joining the story contest!?
nice work LOL =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i loved it...gr8..n thts my fav song too
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweetu.Baby

bye any chabce - did you think of joining the story contest!?

nice work LOL =]

I haven't given a thought about it.. but i would love to have your opinion..

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