RAGHVI FF: OUR HATE- LOVE STORY part 20 up on wattpad 24 april 2022 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

I am loving this story a lot so far

Dear it is lovely

Pls update soon

Love

Jen

thnks so much 💖will update soon😊
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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Dear pls name the story, the title for the story, I would love to see one, because story is progressing beautifully

actually i am very bad at title for ss. Please suggest me something 😊
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavita99

actually i am very bad at title for ss. Please suggest me something 😊

Ok give me sometime

I will internalise the story and let u know

But sure u try for oneself

Coming from the one who conceived the story is like the mother giving the name for the baby

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Ok give me sometime

I will internalise the story and let u know

But sure u try for oneself

Coming from the one who conceived the story is like the mother giving the name for the baby

thnks so much 💖surely i will try to think about it.
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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Part-3

At deshmukh niwas-

Sulo(on call) - ye kya bol rahi ho. Mene pese kis baat ke diye the tumko. Uss pallavi ko sabak sikhaye bina kese vapas aa gy tum.

Woman narrated her whole incident.

Sulo-are kya matlab raghav rao se dar gye tum log. Huh mere pese barbad kar die.

And she cuts the call.

S-iss baar toh tum bach gyi agli baar kese bachogi pallavi. Tumko iss ghar se nikalne ke liye mai kuch bhi karugi.

Next day raghav and pallavi meet at a cafe to discuss how to disclose the identity of the real culprit.

R-are you sure this plan will work pallavi.

P-ofcourse raghav. Sabse pehle toh ye jaan na hai ke vo dr ne mere baare me galti se bola ya jaan bujhkar.

R-toh chalo.

After some time they are in front of the cabin of the dr in disguise.

Dr-boliye. Kya pareshaani hai.

R-ji mera naam raghav hai aur ye mera biwi hai. Actually hum log abhi family planning ke baare me nahi soch raha tha but she got pregnant and we had to abort the child due to some complications in pregnancy. But abhi usko kaafi problem lag raha hai. Hamara family dr jo iska case dekh raha tha abhi bahar gaya hai toh....

Dr-ok let me check her.

After some time.

Dr-ye kya mazaak laga kar rakha hai. Ye toh pregnant hi nahi thi toh abortion kese karwa sakti hai.

Raghav and pallavi got shocked to learn.

P-fir apne mere family se ye kyu kaha ke mene abortion karwaya hai.

They discloses their identity. Dr is terrified to see pallavi.

P-agar aapne galti ki hai checkup mai then abhi chal kar bataiye mere gharvalo ko. Ya fir kisi ne aapko esa karne toh nahi kaha.

R-dekho dr mereko mera asli roop dikhane par mazboor mat karo. Jaanta hai mai raatoraat tumhara account mai kaafi pesa aaya hai.

And he pointed gun towards her.

Dr - mujhe mujhe kuch mat kijiye. Vo ye sab karne ke mujhe pese mil rahe the aur mujhe jaroorat thi peso ki toh.....

R-kon bola tumko ye sab karne.

Dr-v.. v.. Vo sulochana deshmukh.

P-kyaa.....

R-vo bada bindi.... Uski toh.... Vo toh tumhara family hai na saree ka dukan fer kese.

P-jaane do raghav unse toh mai nipat lungi. Dr tumhara ye confession na mene record kar liya hai ab tum jail jaogi.

Dr-nahi nahi please please. Peso ke jarorat thi varna mai nahi karti.

R-tum itna unethical ho jaaega vo bhi peso ke lie disgusting.

P-thik hai mai tumhe koi saza nahi dilwaugi par tumhari family ko sab pata chalna chahie. Unki nazro mai jab nafrat dikhegi tab tumko ehsaas hoga doosro ka dard.

And they left.

P-thanks ghamandi rao.

R-kayko. Isme mera bhi naam involve hua hai toh itna toh mai kar sakta hai. Aur vese bhi vo madhumakkhi gang ko kisne bheja vo bhi toh pata karna hai.

P-(in mind) madhumakkhi gang. Kay manus ahe. Kya bolta hai kuch samjhta hi nahi.

P-tum na ghamandi ke ghamandi rahoge thanks bola hai toh javab mai welcome bolo na itna lamba lamba lines ufff.

R-waah. Tumko toh kuch bolna hi bekar hai. Aur ab samajh aaya tumko tumhara vo saree ke jaisa lamba lamba lecture kese bardast karta hai mai. Picchi ammayi.

P-veda manus.

R-abhi chalo ya yahi khade khade mera sar khana hai.

P-haa haa chal rahi hu na. Mujhe koi shaukh ni hai tumhara.... Ek minute kya bola tumne mai tumhara sar khati hoon......

And their banter continues till they reach the place of those madhumakkhis.

Edited by Kavita99 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Next part is up.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Thanks for the tag 🤗

Well now BWA is in trouble...let see how they will decipher that vo madhumakkhi gang bhi usne hi bheja tha

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

I updated the title. Hope it is ok according to story. And thanks for telling me to add a title.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Thanks for the tag 🤗

Well now BWA is in trouble...let see how they will decipher that vo madhumakkhi gang bhi usne hi bheja tha

welcome 💖ab ye deciphar karna toh raghvi ke baaye haath ka khel hai naii🤭
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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Amazing update!

Loved Raghav and Pallavi's banter

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