OS- Speed Dial - Page 2

Wow!! Ved ne chaabi ghumayi and puppets chalne lage

There's no use of calling Raghav, he's in jail na. It could be Kaka or Farhad

Great work 🤗

I like this Lion so smart

you should continue this one, did she survive

Interesting OS

I hope you would continue it

This was quite a cliffhanger. Makes you eager to know what happened next.

Exciting love smart manipulative lion

Part two kaha hai ? 😆

Lovely start please make it a two shot would love to read further....really would have loved to see something like this in the show

This was very interesting!

SunKee are just😡 but chalo at least they left the country toh they won't bother anyone anymore!

I wonder if the person on speed dial is Farhad🤔

Also, don't worry about the switch between Hindi and English too much. The main thing is the essence of the story that you're trying to tell not the language, so relax!🤗

Will there be a second part to this?

OH GOD NO DONT LEAVE THERE UPDATE IT💔💔💔💔💔💔

sorry for being dramatic but please update😃

Woah! Interesting🥺

Do continue soon. #1 should be Krishna, I guess

Loved this plot. Please continue soon