Raghvi FF : Fragile Hearts ( Ch-10/Pg-24) 30 Oct - Page 18

Loved how the story continued in this chapter & glad to see that you would try to be active❤️

The whole narrative of how Pallavi is trying to help Mansi with her new company here is so refreshing. The addition of Aryan & how it makes Raghav realize that she's an angel is so so sweet.

Ghar Chalein? - This dialogue'll remain with me. It's just so domestic for them🤗

Beautiful update!

Thanks for the tag :)

Aryan and Pallavi was so cute, he was so jealous.

Baby scene, thank you on the show we won't be seeing this. 😭

Can't wait what he will do to her..😳

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I loved your update!!! Angry/Jealous Raghav makes me feel some type of way... lol❤️I can't wait for your next chapter! I'll keep reading your story from the beginning till we get your next update haha

This is a really well-crafted story! The conflict that Pallavi and Raghav feel for each other comes through so clearly.

It's also interesting to me that you explored some similar themes to what I have in my fan fiction - Pallavi attacking Raghav's business and Pallavi in danger of prison time for something that Raghav did wrong. I wonder how you plan to resolve or conclude the criminal issue. For the bribing of customs officers, did you refer to the Prevention of Corruption Act of 1988, Sections 8, 9, 10 in particular? Do any other statutes apply for tax evasion? Where did you get "twenty years" as the likely sentence, or the idea that Pallavi could be charged simply for owning the corrupt business?

I liked that even though there is conflict between characters they cannot keep away.

I mean even thinking about baby is a big step. Maybe they could clear the misunderstandings and fill up the insecurities.

You handled this in the story very maturely. 👏

Love this story.

Please give us a update soon

Please update!!! It's been almost two months since your last update :(

Are y going to continue?

Please do, eagerly waiting! 😭

Take care. ❤️