Raghav Pallavi OS - first night at RR - Page 3

Its so soothing and lovely..

Keep writing 😍❤️

Awh that was so cute!!

I always knew that it must be her idea only!!!

She can't resist RR!!

Aha.... the best... ek baar phir Pals ne RR ko clean bowled kar diya😆

U write so good ... m the pankha of your stories ❤️

Originally posted by: Baniaz

Thank you so much, but I disagree. I used to read your writing which inspired me to start 😃

This is where, I think writing is so powerful. You can explore so much through text, which is the reason why I always prefer books to their movie or drama versions.

Really?

I inspired you to write this? Or all? 😉

Thanks. I said that because I always feel at lose of words to explain the feelings of the characters. If you have noticed then it's visible in my stories, I dont go too deep about the emotions, I mean the monologues.

Same here. Books over movies all time. The liberty you have when you write is enrapturing. ❤️

This this can not be a onE SHOT.. u must write more..plus.. this is a suspense story...👍👍👍👍🥰🥰

I loved your writing 😍👍🏻 The ending was too good pallavi is capable of doing that😳

This is definitely the script to the scene which neither Sicku shoots nor writers write.

this was so simple yet gripping..i really liked it

Such an amazing story

It was such a treat to read this piece.

You handled the awkwardness or the not so well. Beautiful 💕

I loved the line - "Raghav imagined Pallavi in his arms, looking at him with this look after he would have made love to her."

Originally posted by: SONIA441

It was such a treat to read this piece.

You handled the awkwardness or the not so well. Beautiful 💕

I loved the line - "Raghav imagined Pallavi in his arms, looking at him with this look after he would have made love to her."

Thank you for your feedback 😃

I love that line too . When I see bichara Raghav in the show now, I feel like he needs all the love he can possibly get.