Raghav Pallavi OS - first night at RR - Page 2

Loved it. Just wonderful✨😍

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Loved reading this one!!

Everything Raghav must have thought in this situation is brought out with so much ease. The scene was enacted beautifully and you've set it to flight by your words ❤️

The end is what I did not expect. Pallavi is so naive but forthcoming, one can only wonder how much Raghav love her through each passing day, especially after her silent confession!

Thank you ❤️ Glad you enjoyed it 😃

Although MHRW is a series which does not show those never ending character monologues, which is good, sometimes I wish we could hear what they both say or think about each other since so much is unsaid.

Whatever happened tp Raghav's diary? Hope they don't forget about it.

Yes, Pallavi will have to be the first to verbalise her feelings as Raghav will wait for any indication before acting.

Originally posted by: lourel24

Everytime I feel khatam ho gaya!! I want more😚😁

Lol thank you. I feel like that after every Raghvi scene

Originally posted by: sunshine_94

Beautiful written.. raghav inner thoughts beautifully told. Luvd the writing

Thank you, glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: i_ambivert

Mujhe maaf karo Raghav.’ He questioned her with his gaze but remained silent, waiting for her to continue. ‘maine tumse jhoot kaha tha, ye room share karne ka khayal Amma ka nahi, mera tha.

loved reading this... ❤

Glad you liked it 😃 I wanted to add a little surprise and I can see Pallavi being bold enough to do something like this but shy to accept it verbally

Originally posted by: itsRitzi

beautifully written and the twist in end wow

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: Joyness

Awesome hope we get to see this

Don't we all ❤️

Originally posted by: Inese_20

Beautiful, as beautiful as Raghvi

❤️ thank you. They are the inspiration

Originally posted by: parboni

This was beautifully written.👏👏👏 Aur last mein kya twist daala hai! 🤪🥳👏

Thank you ❤️ glad you liked it.

Pallavi is a bag full of surprises, Raghav ke hosh kuch zyada hi uraati hai 😃

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I could never write something like that. It was so beautiful. Reading his thoughts is always a treat.

Even I have noticed that mole, had a scene playing inside my mind since that. Thanks for this.

Thank you so much, but I disagree. I used to read your writing which inspired me to start 😃

This is where, I think writing is so powerful. You can explore so much through text, which is the reason why I always prefer books to their movie or drama versions.